POTC 4... our version

Started by katelovespirate33 pages

no no no i think its

Kate wants Will

Gibbs wants Abi

Jackie wants Will

Liz and Jack want each other

Davy wants revenge

Norrington wants to kill Jack

hehehe something like that...

but we still have no plan, who gets whom

and whom does Will want?

its a mystery... 🙂

i bet willofthewisp knows who will wants!!! hahaha.

thats the whole fun i think, not knowing.

but so it's difficult to creat a continuation

brilliant

i have been reading this story for over 2 hours and all i have to say is amazeing keep it going! 🙂

someone could help us, it's sometimes difficult to be creative!!!!!

i'm only late in the night, till early morning...

Cut to Will and Kate, sneaking through the jungle together...

Kate: We just need to keep you away from the volcano while Elizabeth blows up with island.

Will: I've never been inside a volcano.

Kate: (suddenly turns to him, seriously) Will, I just wanted to apologize again for any harm I've caused you.

Will: We've been through this. (grins) you didn't do any real harm, so I forgive you.

Kate: Why are you still so cold to me?

Will: (quietly) I have no desire to get closer to you.

Kate: Really? (she steps closer to him, her heart pounding) I'm not going to play games with you, Will. I find you attractive. I thought perhaps you felt the same way about me.

Will: Kate, you're beautiful. You know that. But now isn't the time for love. And besides, I don't think I believe in love anymore.

Kate: (laughs cynically) Spoken like a true bitter man.

Will: I'm not bitter! I've clearly reconciled myself to Elizabeth choosing Jack.

Kate: Do you still love her?

Will: No... (stops, and thinks for a minute, and suddenly realizes he is telling the truth!) No, I dont. Not in that way.

Kate: (smiling) You're taking your first steps toward healing. Someone hurt you. That's no reason to close yourself off for the rest of your life.

Will: I wont. I just... I'm afraid.

Kate: (softly) it's all right to be afraid sometimes.

Will: (grinning) I'm afraid of you sometimes.

Kate: I am rather frightening, in my own way.

She has stepped closer to him, without thinking. He smiles, and she stands up on tiptoe to kiss him. He pulls her in closer for a longer kiss.
Suddenly, they hear movement through the trees. Quickly, Will pulls her behind him and they stand, holding their breath...

Originally posted by Jacky Sparrow
someone could help us, it's sometimes difficult to be creative!!!!!

i'm only late in the night, till early morning...

Im not a fast typer but ive got a creative mind about me. 😕

allright i did a scene. who's going next?!

meeeeee!

Originally posted by katelovespirate
allright i did a scene. who's going next?!

fade into jack, jacky and gibbs approaching a huge volcano.

jack: If i know lizzie shes not one to rush about in things. So i would say we have about 15 minutes to find her,
Gibbs:Thats good to know, now were have young mr turner and kate run off too?
jacky:They have gone off on their own to find elizabeth.
jack: If i know will hes bound to get himself in some kind of trouble....

jacky: we must go find them.

jack, jacky and gibbs rush through the jungle.

Suddenly Jacky comes through the trees. (has found kate and will)

Jacky: (sarcastic) Oh, Will your wounds do not need much time to heal.
(a bit angry about the kiss)

Kate: (blushes) I've kissed him...

Jacky: No time for that. Liz is going to bomb the island, and I still haven't found the Voodooo man, but if I remeber correctly he lived somewhere in the volcano. I'm going to find him...tell Liz she should wait a moment, it's the only chance to free her from the spell.

Suddely Jack comes as well, he had been hiding behind the trees.

Jack: Oh, Mr. Turner, Why do you have the privilege to kiss all women first, and then me??? (glances at Kate)

Kate blushs

will: theres no time for this jack, we must get going.
jacky:hes right jack.
jack:i was only kidding with will, he and i both know my heart belongs to my dear lizzie and only she.
will: (under his breath)so you say
jack: (draws his sword)what was that mr turner mind repeating it.
kate: (stepping between them) there is no time for this you two
jacky😖hes right you two are like a couple of jelously stricken children

oo i likes!!!!! more more!!!! 😄 😄😄😄😄

ahhhahahaha! Abi and gibbs would be hilarious....

by the way, where did we lost abi?

Originally posted by Jacky Sparrow
by the way, where did we lost abi?
abi is with nori somewhere

BTW this is what abi looks like if she's all dressed up....

fade into to abi who is wlking with her father

abi:father can i ask you something?
nori: yes , what?
abi:how did you meet my mother?
nori:i meet your mother while i was in england prepareing to take mr swann and elizabeth to port royal, she was a waitress in a local cafe. We Fell in love almost instantly. She was beautiful your mother , she looked just like you. She was all set to sail to port royal with me , when she fell sick with the flu , she got better but she could not sail on a ship , i never saw your mother again. She died soon atfer you were born and i got word of your birth but i couldent find you.
abi: (her eyes are filled with tears)i love you father

you want i should draw kate and jacky too?