POTC 4... our version

Started by sailorleo33 pages

Originally posted by katelovespirate
Okay, I am standing up clapping for you.

That was FABULOUS.

You are brilliant. I never get tired of reading your stuff. seriously. as sailorleo put it, i love you in a nonlesbian way!!!!!!

i am seriously soooooo impressed. awesome.

allrighty i'll continue for a bit...

...yes! I've been quoted!!! ๐Ÿ’ƒ

somebody else turn now lol

wow
i was only gone for a day, and when i came back here to read this.....
THERE WAS 12 NEW PAGES!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฑ

and it's all so brilliant!!๐Ÿ˜„ you're all so great at this. i can't even think of the right word to describe how good this story is. brilliant isnt enough ๐Ÿ˜Š

i know huh....wish willo and kate was here tho...

me too were were going pretty strong the kate left.

the story is so emotional....my heart was beating fast, while Jack was supposed to be dead...oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and the erotic tension I don't know how it could be created just with words...

Originally posted by Jacky Sparrow
the story is so emotional....my heart was beating fast, while Jack was supposed to be dead...oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and the erotic tension I don't know how it could be created just with words...
Glad you like it.

Like it???????????? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

...I LOVE it... I can't think of anything....please continue

Originally posted by Jacky Sparrow
Like it???????????? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

...I [B]LOVE it... I can't think of anything....please continue [/B]

...here....take my m-16...for effect....*tosses her a gun*

Originally posted by Jacky Sparrow
Like it???????????? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

...I [B]LOVE it... I can't think of anything....please continue [/B]

((GAWK OKAY but i have to go pretty soon))

Gibbs on the deck with the rest of the crew.

gibbs:ANOCHOR OUT
crew:aye
The ship uneasyily ancohors down
liz: (awakes suddenly , puts on a robe and goes outside) Wheres jack mr. gibbs?
gibbs: he went to wake the rest of the crew
liz: okay , do you want me to ready the long boats?
gibbs:aye ms. elizabeth

lizzie hurrys and readys the long boats just as jack come on deck with the rest of the crew following.

jack: to the longboats , we have a deal to strike with dumas.

(thats all i can do i have to get off now ๐Ÿ™ )

who's next?

Okay, to summarize. Everyone is safely aboard the Pearl. The girls get a little closer as they talk about the men and Alex asks Norrington for permission to marry Abi. Norrington says no to protect Abi. Kate also turns herself in so Will will not have to do it. They're back in Port Royal and are getting ready to meet Dumas again.

Liz: Make a deal? We don't have Kate anymore. How can we make a deal?
Jack: We may not have his first love, but we have his second (points at Will)
Will: I'm growing a little tired of all your suggestive jokes, Jack.
Jack: Your position, boy. Governor. Top billing. He plans to overthrow you.
Gibbs: You're bartering the position of governor?
Jack: Why not?
Jacky: I like it. Come on! It's not like we're bartering the position of king.
Liz: So we trade Kate for Will and then what? Trade someone else for him?
Jack: No. We offer to trade Will and one of us simply shoots Dumas.
Will: I like that idea.
Jacky: I told you. Bloody brilliant.
(they approach the mansion)
Abi: Do you think Kate is there yet?
Alex: I hope not. I feel so terrible about putting her through all this.
Abi: She did a lot of it herself, but just wants out of it. Sound familiar, Father?
(Norrington knows what she's getting at, but doesn't answer her)
Jacky: Will, maybe you should knock on the door yourself. We don't want to look like a posse. We'll be right behind you.
Will: I'll take your word for it. (knocks on the door) No one's answering.
Liz: See if it's unlocked and slip in. It's your house.
(Will opens the door and walks into the main foyer where he sees Dumas and Kate, um, "playing cards."๐Ÿ˜‰

(playing cards )
is that what it's called now?

good job lol

YAY! willofthewisp! your back! and the story continues! YAY! luv it! ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ brilliant! wonderful! amazing!

Kate: Will!
Dumas: Turner!
(Will is too stunned to speak. Dumas runs to the side to put on his clothes as Kate wraps a blanket around herself)
Kate: It meant nothing, Will! It's what he wants!
Will: I believe you (still stunned)
Dumas: You turned pirate again when you had important visitors coming. That could be grounds for your impeachment.
Will: I've come to make a trade.
Kate: Will, no!
Will: If you leave Kate alone, never make her do....things against her will again, I vow to voluntarily give you my position.
Dumas: Governor?
Will: Governor. Take it or leave it. It's all I have.
Dumas: Sorry, Kate. I already got what I wanted from you.
Kate: You slimy waste of flesh! I'll have my revenge on you, you son of a *****!
Dumas: All in good time. Until then, I believe I can enjoy Mr. Turner's position.

Someone else's turn.

it's bobet time more mr. badaras! lol

omg!!! luv it! poor Will having to see that. but great job! its bloody brilliant! ๐Ÿ˜„

Okay, can we all be on the same page about everyone's age? Just for our own enjoyment and information?

Will and Liz: by now, what, about 22, 23?
Jack: 32, 33?
Gibbs: 50s? Remember the sea life will have aged him so he'll look older than he is.
Jacky: 30?
Abi: about 20
Kate: about 20
Alex: 22, 23?
Norrington: 40? 45?
Dumas: 40?

yeah..that looks about right...