POTC 4... our version

Started by katelovespirate33 pages

it isnt supposed to be accurate, its just supposed to be fun!!!! 🙂

someone else's turn...

not me

The crew is back on the pearl and are sailing to port royal , they are all in jacks cabin drinking rum with kate tied to a chair.

kate:Is this really nessasary?
jack:we cant have you running off while were all drunk, now can we?
kate:but i think i have proven myself to be trustworthy.
jack😖till kate, you my dear are leverage.
kate: (has a very deranged look in her eye) why must you give me to dumas.
will: Because kate its the only way.
liz: just like i had to chain jack up to the pearl when the kraken was after him , do you honestly think i wanted to do that?
jack:just when i begin to forget that love, you must remind me.
liz: I have apoligized over a thousend times jack.
jack: I know love and its only been 520 Ive been counting.
liz😖till you know what i mean. (she places her hand on his)
jack: (grins wildly) you know lizzie darling i think im growing tierd i think everybody should leave.(he winks at lizzie)
The crew gets the clue and gets up to leave.
jack:will take kate to your cabin.
will:very well jack (he unties kate and leads her out)

luv it! you guys are brilliant!!! 😄

Originally posted by CaptinJackLover
luv it! you guys are brilliant!!! 😄

thanks i think our story has so much excitement i really think someone should show it to disney , but it wouldent work because i think nori dies

wow that was great!!!!!

Back in Will's cabin.

Kate: Why won't you untie me? You have no idea how awful it is for me to be tied up.

Will: (sarcastically) I can imagine.

Kate: You know Dumas. Would you really surrender me to him?

Will: He's a decent fellow, reasonable handsome, and related to royalty. He'll give you wealth. Isn't that what you want?

Kate: William Turner, you're a fool. Don't you know what I want?

Will: Stop playing games with me, Kate.

Kate: You know what's going on in the next cabin... doesn't that make you a bit... curious?

Will: Whats that supposed to mean?

Kate: Lock the door. Keep the key. Then untie me, and I'll show you what I mean.

Will is intrigued. And tempted. He locks the door and pockets the key, and then moves towards Kate.

Will: No funny business, promise?

Kate: Will, when will you learn to trust me?

Will: Never, if you keep acting the way you have been.

Will leans and unties Kate. She wastes no time. SHe pushes him down onto his bed and kisses him passionately.

Kate: Allright, I made the first move. It's your turn now.

Will pulls Kate down onto the bed next to him...

Meanwhile, the rest of the crew has continued drinking on deck. Gibbs and Norrington are having a chat.

Gibbs: So, did you even know you had a daughter?

Norrington: (laughing) Not for a long time... but when I found out, it made me incredibly happy. I thought I had no family left.

Gibbs: Your daughter really is something. You ought to be very proud.

Norrington: I am. I am slightly concerned at how much of a pirate she is.

Gibbs: (laughing) I guess you'll have to give up your quest to destroy all the pirates, now that your daughter and you are both pirates.

luv it!!!!! once i again i must say you guys are brilliant!!!!

ya,.. whos Kate??

Hours later, Kate sneaks out of Will's cabin, where he is asleep on the bed. She gazes at him for a moment, longingly, and then climbs up onto deck, which is deserted. She finishes buttoning her shirt and moves toward the longboat, when suddenly she hears something.

Jack: Where do you think you're going, Missy?

Kate: Jack!

Jack observes her disheveled hair and wrinkled clothing with a wide grin.

Jack: Ah... Mr. Turner is not so much a prig as I thought. And not a eunuch either! Did you have a lovely time with him?

Kate: Jack, please.

Jack: So you've corrupted dear William and now you're going to run out on him? I don't think so, lass.

Kate: Jack, it's not what it looks like. If you're still mad that I shot you...

Jack: Hardly. I've gotten shot many times before. But never after being kissed!

Kate: Admit it, I'm a good kisser.

Jack: Very well. I admit it. So what are you up to?

Kate: I'm going back to Dumas.

Jack: WHat?! There's one I didn't expect.

Kate: You're all going to turn me in to him anyways. I figured this way Will wouldn't have to feel bad about trading me. I've caused you a lot of trouble. This way, you all can get away and Will can get back to his life.

Jack: (stepping back) I think it's incredibly stupid... and strangely noble. So you're an honest one at heart, eh?

Kate: I don't know what I am. I just know I have to do this. I'm tired of hurting Will, and everyone.

Jack: Well, off you go then. (yawns) I;m going back to bed.

Kate and Jack shake hands.

Kate: Thank you, Jack. Explain everything to them for me, will you?

Jack: Of course.

Kate: I'll always remember this as the time as I got to have an adventure lead by Captain Jack Sparrow...

Kate climbs into the longboat and sails off...

i cant believ Jack would say she was a good kisser! especially after what he wqas doing with Liz! ugh....im mad at him for that! but still luv it!😄

FADE into the cabin where abi and jackey are staying

jackey:makes me a bit uncomfortable thinking what my brother is doing with elizabeth.

abi: Yeah me too.

jackey: Think about it abi , if jack wasent in the picture you would have a stepmother the same age as you are.

abi: (shudders at the thought) that is a strange thought.

abi: (pulling herself together) well im going to talk to alex. (exits)

Meanwhile, Abi and Alex are chatting below deck.

Alex: All this sexual tension on this ship. It's rather exciting.

Abi: You have no idea. (grins)

Alex: So darling, once we get married where do you want to live? Do you want to go back to England?

Abi: No! I love the caribbean. Where else can you be an honest pirate??

Alex: Are you saying you want to stay pirate?

Abi: DOn't you?

Alex: Yes... But only if we can first take a looooong honeymoon to Singapore.

Abi: SOunds perfect. (kisses him)

Suddenly, Norrington walks through the door.

Norri: What is going on here??

Abi: Well, we're just talking about the future.

Norri: You want me to believe in a dark cabin, scantily clad, in the middle of the night, sitting on his lap you are discussing you future???

Alex: I'm in love with your daughter, sir. I want your permission to marry her.

Norri: Permission denied. You're a pirate.

Abi: So am i!

Norri: No you aren't, young lady. Perhaps we've had to bend the rules a bit to survive, but after we return to Port Royal, its time for you to start acting like a lady.

Abi: (with tears in her eyes) You can't say that! You know you hate that lifestyle now too. Alex has loved me longer than you've even known me!

Norri: (taken aback) Abi, I'm just trying to protect you!

hahha i liked that scene, pirate=sex!

me too, sorry mine kinda overlapped... just pretend Abi went and found Alex after she talked to Jackie.

Originally posted by CaptinJackLover
hahha i liked that scene, pirate=sex!
ha thanks. 🙂

is anyone goping to continue! im luving this story! its even better than the last! 😄😄😄

Originally posted by katelovespirate
me too, sorry mine kinda overlapped... just pretend Abi went and found Alex after she talked to Jackie.
go look at the scene i made it were she kinda just up and left to go talk to alex.

Originally posted by CaptinJackLover
i cant believ Jack would say she was a good kisser! especially after what he wqas doing with Liz! ugh....im mad at him for that! but still luv it!😄

Jack is just being himself... lol. We all know he loves Lizzie, so its okay. hehe

fade into jacks cabin elizabeth just wakeing up

LIZ: jack darling i just had a dream that kate had escaped.

jack: It wasent a dream love , she did.

Liz: HUH. WHAT, ROUSE THE CREW JACK.

jack: calm down love , i let her leave.

liz:what? why?

jack😖hes noble at heart and is going to turn her self into dumas

liz: oh. (yawning)

jack: go back to sleep love , we will dock at port royal soon

liz: (yawning) okay jack.

Originally posted by katelovespirate
Jack is just being himself... lol. We all know he loves Lizzie, so its okay. hehe

lol ya i know...im still ashamed in him lol