POTC 4... our version

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yeah thats good

helloo everybody!! great job on the at world's end.. our version or w/e but im reading this one except im only on the first page! lol i dont gotta lot of free time =\ but im workin on it! =]

I guess I'll continue, although I don't want to end it, so I'll cut off somewhere.

Dumas: Now, let's go into your office and make this official, hmm?
Will: Why not?
Kate: Will, Will you don't want to do this. He'll kill Port Royal. It will be destroyed at his hand.
Will: It doesn't matter so long as you're safe. (awkwardly notices she's still in the blanket)
Kate (blushes): Sorry. I....
(Will pulls her close to him and kisses her. It's long and deep and ALMOST makes those of us who think he's girly to second guess ourselves. His hands reach around to her back and hold her tight and their breathing gets a little shallow)
Will: I love you, Kate. You have nothing to be sorry about. At least not with me.
(Kate looks like she could fly)
Dumas: Up here, Mr. Turner.

awww so sweet! i love it!!!!!

will learned how to kiss...uh OH!

hahahaha

That's cuz it's true love this time around! 😮‍💨

Kate, or somebody. Continue. I'm a total block. I can think of one thing and that's to end it, so I will give someone else the honors.

THAT WAS AMAZING>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Omgsh... SOOOOO dramatic. you are so good.

I dont want to end it! sniff sniff. that would be so sad. but we are kind of at the end?!?!?

I will write some in like an hour... but please, first, willofthewisp continue!!!!! 🙂

who says we have to end it...?

willofthewsip, i sure hope you are continuing...

*tosses kate an M-16* ....she is now...lol

We could always make a pirates of the caribbean five lol.

HaHahahaha 🙂

i think we will have to... seriously. or we could go back and remake 3 with a whole different plot. or something. hahaha.

but first we have to finish this one!!!!! willofthewisp!!!

Will walks up the stairs as jack slyly (sp) follows with his pistol in hand....

Dumas:will im glad you finally have come around

will: I woulden't be doing this if you hadent harmed kate

dumas: HARM KATE! i didnt harm the girl.

will: not physicly dumas but mentally , you have harmed her.

dumas: I bet the girl liked evey minute of it.

will: ( instantly catchs dumas and holds a knife at his throat) Why in gods name would a lady like kate enjoy the company of a slimey monster like you.

dumas: Its not time for any rash actions Mr. turner!

Will: rash is my middle name dumas.

Originally posted by katelovespirate
i think we will have to... seriously. or we could go back and remake 3 with a whole different plot. or something. hahaha.

but first we have to finish this one!!!!! willofthewisp!!!

ha yeah lol

WOAH THATS HOTT!!!!

rash is my middle name....

i LOVE how Will has changed! it makes me SOOOO HAPPY!!!

well done you!

Originally posted by katelovespirate
WOAH THATS HOTT!!!!

rash is my middle name....

i LOVE how Will has changed! it makes me SOOOO HAPPY!!!

well done you!

Ha yeah i thought i would put that rash part in because nori says it in the first movie.

well keep going then!!!! 🙂 YAYAY!