POTC 5 ...our next version

Started by shannstar7930 pages

I truly do love Abi's Character, I hope you come up with a good plan to rescue her from Beckett, I am so sick of Beckett doing all thses mean things to the sparrow camp. Maybe Abi will whip Becketts ass and escape 🙂

hmmm....should beckett tell her that alex is dead or threaten her life if she ever sees him again...

tell her that Alex is dead and he has Norrie locked up in the Brig!! really make her mad and really want to kill beckett

hmm....yeah....but i think jack or lizzie should kill beckett....hmmm

if you want to make Abi a main character she will need to do something ike Kill beckett, or you could even have norri do it because Beckett is about to kill Abi and Norri saves her life?
What say you ?

hmmm....yeah... http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/2776243/?q=pirate+death+boost%3Apopular+age_sigma%3A24h+age_scale%3A5

that just reminded me of kate, alex and either jacky or abi

any way....yeah i think norrie or alex might kill beckett

remids me of ABi and Alex most Def!! Cool pic looks awsome! thats how I imagined them looking
and i think it would be cool if Norri Killed Baeckett

yeah well should we skip ahead in time to when they meet up with becketts ship again?

anyone else have any ideas??
we have been brainstorming for a while🙂

i don't know if anyone's gonna pipe up...i hope so...

i know , we may have to come up with it one our own 🙂

well i have an idea i just don't know if i should skip ahead...

do it, skip ahead I am ready for more story 🙂

k

(Abi recolecting) Beckett: Alex is dead, I killed him myself...*he laughs*...it was so easy

Abi: You hearltess bastard!

Beckett: It isn't all bad news, I spared your fathers life, for the time being....He's locked in the brig, and if you even think about trying to find him I'll kill you and Him! (end recolecting)

since being taken on board beckett's ship Abigail found herself working as a sailor cleaning and other menial tasks. It's been a month since she's seen a familiar face. Unbeknownst to her the Pearl has caught up with Beckett's ship. Tonights the night they kill Beckett and Jack's 'graciously' allowed Alex and Norrington *who's not in the brig at all) the task of killing him.

Alex walks down the hall and spies a sailor with his back turned to him cleaning and seemingly lost in thought. Alex has become a pathetic drunk as of late and has let his grief consume him.

Alex: *he puts a sword to the sailors back coldy he says* I come here for Beckett and the body of Miss Abigail, where are they? *the sailor trembles and stays silent* Tell me damn you! *in the commotion another sailor appears to defend the inquisitioned one.

Sailor: you just leave the lad alone and come with me to the brig.

Alex: To hell I will! *and knocks the man out with the blunt end of the sword while he did this the other sailor ran away and alex growls. He runs after the sailor grabing 'his' hand spinning the sailor around to find it's Abi she's crying*

Alex and Abi: Beckett told me you were dead!

Alex: I-I can't believe it! you're alive *he hugs her out of the corner of abi's eyes she sees norrington and runs to her father*

Norrie: You're alive! *he falls to his knees and she embraces him*

Abi: I'm so sorry father...

Beckett: Isn't this a touching sight to behold *he scoffs and norrignton stands up and pulls out his sword*

Norrie: Alex, I want you to take Abi to the pearl, I'll meet up with you soon.

Abi: but father-

norrie: but nothing, I trust him, now go! *alex takes abi and heads for the pearl* So it seems that you and i have some unfinished business to attend to

Beckett: (nervously) indeed

Norrie: but i wonder, where are your guards? *he lundges his sword into beckett not giving him time to respond. Norrie removes his sword and leaves leaving the slumped dead body of Beckett to be found by his crew*

very good love it!!

[Norrington comes back to the ship with a big smile on his face everyone knows what has happened without him saying anything]

Jack(starts to smile too!):everyone below deck! drinks all around!

(everyone starts to cheer and head down, the last two people to go down was jack and liz)

Jack:Elizabeth, may i escort you to the little partay?
(Liz can't help but to grin and starts to walk away so he can't see her, but he still sees her grinning)
Liz: No thank you mr. sparrow
Jack: Very well...but I know you will come back to my side.
Liz: And what makes you so certain?
Jack:Curiosity
Liz:I can assure you, I'm no longer curious jack.
Jack:Maybe...maybe thats remembrance i sense. (gets close to her face)do you long to remember of what use to be? do you want another taste?
(liz opens her mouth for a kiss, but then closes it quickly)
Liz:No, (gets closer to him) but i'm sure you do. (gives him a gentle push out the way and walks away.)

hahaha denyied!

make a note that alex and abi aren't at this party...they're....busy....yeah...in private...with eachohther lol

lol, okay someone can continue with their own little private party

yeah...who ever wants to do that....