POTC 5 ...our next version

Norrie wakes up from a night of poor sleep. He has to make things right with Jacky. He goes to her room and knocks on her door.

Jacky: Come in! *she says a little hungover*

Norrie: How are you

Jacky: I'm as well as can be expected

Norrie: But is that enough? *he sighs and sits on the bed next to her* I'm not going to pretend that everything's alright between us. I know your unhappy, and I think I know why..

Jacky: Oh *she says a little nervous*

Norrie: It's because I'm not a pirate...I'm too uptight, even my daughter thinks so *groans and looks down*...I just wish that...*suddenly JAcky hugs him tightly*

Jacky: Someone once told me something..I think it went like someone for their virtues love them for their faults. ANd If that's the case I must be swimming in love for you *it's corny i know....it's 2 in the morning*

Norrie: *blushes* I love you too jacky, and if you want to i still want you to marry me...

Jacky: of course *she kisses his cheek*

Norrie: *stands up* glad we had this talk *he leaves to see a glaring abi

Abi: You hypocrite *she storms off*

so should i continue...?

wooooooow this is so intense I love it...yes please continue a little bit more I wanna know what happens really badly

k

norrington rushes off towards his daughter closely followed by alex.

Norrie: Abigail, wait!

Abi: *truns around to face him* No! Your horrible you keep trying to push Alex away from you claiming our conduct is unbecoming and here you are calling on Jacky! You're dipicable and i hate you! *she turns back around

Alex: Abi...*Abi gasps loudly*

Abi: Ship! Captain! Beckett's on our tail! towards the port astern!

Norrington pulls out his telescope. and gasps

Norrie: Abi down! *he shouts she turns around to look at him quizzicly suddenly there's cannon fire and it makes it mark on the pearl hurling ABi into the ocean

Norrie and Alex: ABIGAIL!

love it except for that norri already let them get married so...oh you meant the time he stopped them kissing on deck? I'm a little confused on that LOVED the rest though that was quit a cliffhanger

well he allows it reluctantly....he tries to push him away from her tho....

got it 😄 that was really great and now alex and will have to help save abi whicj will bond them and show norri alex deserves abi and in the fight maybe we can get jack/liz back together.

yeah you can be in charge of the jack liz situation...

i have a plan tho....

uuuuh what is it?

this is just before the cannon fire.
Liz is standing looking out to sea, which seems to be her fav occupation. the sea to her is so peaceful and therapeutic. She looked at her stomach. the tiniest sign of a bump had appeared.
She sighed, she just wanted to be close to Jack at the moment. She felt a pang of guiltiness run through her as she thought about the accident that happened to Jack.

"Well, this is a familiar sight" Jack had strolled up and was trying to make the mood which surrounded her light.
He got no reply.
"You know if you stare at that long enough you might end up talking to it."
"Is everything a joke to you?" she finally spoke to him, more like snapped at him.
"I'm only trying to lighten the mood Miss Swann" he said
"Mrs Sparrow...." she answered back unconciously.
He smiled and she turned away to stare again at the sea.
"Well, i want it called Jack....i like that name."
She turned around "Who said it's a boy!"
Jack smiles "My intuitive sense of the female creature."
Liz grins slowly.
Then the cannon fire strikes the ship.

oooo....i reallly like that! good job!

anyone want me to continue or do they wnat to give it a go?

oy! hello? anyone listening?

I AM listening 🙂 I am dying for someone to continue writingh the story is getting REALLY GOOD

ok then *cracks knuckles* i'll try....

bring it on 🙂 I love the Jack and Liz story line 🙂

On beckett's ship

Random crew member: Lord Beckett! There's a girl in the water!

Beckett: Well just don't stand there, bring her aboard. *the gears in his head begin spinning and he wonders if they're about to bring over Mrs. Sparrow quite a catch for anyone wanting to ensare the infamous pirate. Beckett's crew pull the woman aborad and beckett goes over to inspect the lass.

Beckett: *snarls* that's not Elizabeth *he says after grabbing her face at the jaw line (the woman is not conscious) he looks again and begins to smirk* Oh, this is serendipitous. Why I do believe this is the former Commodore's daughter, I may have use of her yet. *he eyes a simple gold ring on her finger. After a moment he takes it* lock her in my office. It's time we pay a visit to the pearl.

After a fair amount of cannon fire and fighting on both ends Beckett's crew finally manages to board the ship. Jack Liz and everyone else arrange themselves to great them nervously. Beckett arrives with to body guards.

Beckett: Mr. Sparrow, so good to see you again. *he scoffs*

Jack: Likewise...*he looks disgusted Norrington and Alex face the flor looking tires and heartbroken*

Beckett: Mr. Norrington, I have unfortunate tidings to report. *norrie and alex look up* It seems your daughter was found dead floating on the water near my ship. We brought her on board of course. My men deserve a treat...even a dead one-

Alex: You Bastard! I'll kill you! *he rushes Beckett but id knocked over by beckett's body guard.

Norrington: You'r lying! *beckett smirks and produces abi's gold ring*

Beckett: Decidedly not...*he walks over to alex and smirks* You'll be wanting this back, I imagine *he drops it on alex and kicks him in the stomach. He motions to his body guards to leave* We may not be killing you know mr. sparrow, but we'll be back, believe me...*he leaves*

well what should happen next?