POTC 5 ...our next version

Started by tee_pirategirl30 pages

I LOVE the story someone has to continue I LOVE IT

yeah, continue!!!

Alright PIRATES=SEX to the rescue mates

I have been reading the story and realized since they came to ship Vicky and Julian have not been included so i will bring them in.

Basically Jillian and Vicky have been keeping to them selves being new to the ship and all,Vicky has made quite good friends with Kate and Jillian with will their both around 17 or 18!

Julian: who would have thought it ME being part of the famous pirate captain jack sparrow's crew.
jack: Did i hear famous
Julian😮h yes captain sparrow , You are all they talk about in england, You are very famous , especially with the Lady's.
jack🙁Jacks smiles)Of course i am I'M captain jack sparrow
Julian:Captain sparrow can i ask you a question??
jack😖ure mate
Julian:I want to tell Vicky my feelings but I'M not sure if she will accept me seeing as I'M a blacksmith.
jack:Vicky is just like he cousin mate will and i have had our doughts about her "liking us" but Ive started to realize Lizzy is just like me self , you see mate we both are always going after things forbidden to us and we always succeed at doing it. You see Lizzy is like the forbidden fruit in the bible story , shes sweet and the brightest woman i have ever met and yet she was forbidden , but just like Adam with the apple i plucked her from the tree and now we have thrown the world into chaos. I can guaranty Vicky's parents have the whole royal navy out in the sea searching just like Lizzy's father had done. So i say tell he pluck that forbidden apple from the tree and take a chance(Sorry for using the reference to the bible i thought it would make for something interesting to relate Lizzy and jack to)*jack was puzzled at how intelligent he had just sounded*
Jillian😮h thank you captain sparrow.
jack:and mate your not a blacksmith any longer your a pirate!

Lizzy had heard the whole thing and rushed into the room

Lizzy:Jack sparrow (she thrusts herself into his arms)i love you my forbidden fruit

All it took was one bible reference to make Lizzy realize how much she truly loved jack.

Fade into Vicky out on the deck starring into the water

Julian: Vicky may i have a moment please?
Vicky:why yes Julian
Julian: I love you Vicky and i have loved you since the day i met you.
Vicky:*here eyes filled with tears embraces Jillian)I love you too.

Alright PIRATES=SEX to the rescue mates

I have been reading the story and realized since they came to ship vicky annd julian have not been included so i will bring them in.

Basicly jullian and vicky have been keeping to them selves being new to the ship and all,vicky has made quite good friends with kate and jullian with will thier both around 17 or 18!

julian: who would have thought it ME being part of the famous pirate captain jack sparrow's crew.
jack: Did i hear famous
julian😮h yes captain sparrow , You are all they talk about in england, You are very famous , especially with the ladys.
jack: (Jacks smiles)Ofcourse i am IM captain jack sparrow
julian:Captain sparrow can i ask you a question??
jack😖ure mate
julian:I want to tell vicky my feelings but im not sure if she will accept me seeing as im a blacksmith.
jack:Vicky is just like he cousin mate will and i have had our doughts about her "likeing us" but ive started to realize lizzy is just like me self , you see mate we both are always going after things forbbiden to us and we always succeed at doing it. You see lizzy is like the forbbiden fruit in the bible story , shes sweet and the brightest woman i have ever met and yet she was forbbiden , but just like adam with the apple i plucked her from the tree and now we have thrown the world into chaos. I can garunty vickys parents have the whole royal navy out in the sea serching just like lizzys father had done. So i say tell he pluck that forbidden apple from the tree and take a chance(Sorry for useing the refrence to the bible i thought it would make for something intresting to relate lizzy and jack to)*jack was puzzled at how intelligent he had just sounded*
jullian😮h thank you captain sparrow.
jack:and mate your not a blacksmith any longer your a pirate!

Lizzy had heard the whole thing and rushed into the room

lizzy:Jack sparrow (she thrusts herself into his arms)i love you my forbbiden fruit

All it took was one bible refrence to make lizzy realize how much she truely loved jack.

Fade into vicky out on the deck stareing into the water

julian: Vicky may i have a moment please?
vicky:why yes julian
julian: I love you vicky and i have loved you since the day i met you.
vicky:*here eyes filled with tears embraces jullian)I love you too.

ok, so most of us on here are anti will/liz, but what about vicky/julian

is this supposed to be like what could have happened with will/liz or something???

im confuzzled🙁

i like the Vicky/Jillian ship

yeah me too lets just say they stay together cause JULIAN learns how to be a real pirate whilst liz/will never stayed together cause will could never be the wild child that liz was savvy?

what time is it where u r, Tee?

I don't know I don't have the time it's sometime past midnight around 3 or 4 AM

it's really wierd but I loose track of time after midnight

wow! its only 11:30 here

so who's gonna continue?

not me. go on, tee

I'm gonna go sleep it's 1:30 here now that I checked the time*yawns* farewell but I'll post something tomorrow promise bye you guys

cya! good luck at school!

yah u made vicky n julian a couple YAH! da plan worked! im happy n hope we don split thse 2 up! yah! some1 make the the navy ship the parents r on sink but they escape in a longboat or something n wat the survival of da crew (including Vickys parents) come across da black pearl haha they hav 2 beg 4 a spot on it otherwise theyll drown lol that would be a funny scene harry n jennifer da ANTI-Pirates lol onboard da black pearl theyd be so proud of vicky n lizzie lol luv da story guys keep it up! but i think we need a bit more sword fighting (thats y i split liz n jack up, but da plan failed lol! ) i LUV dis script tho funny if some of the ideas from any of da scripts appeared in da movies lol! i don know how we'd react. lol! good job guys

I need some ideas kiddos lol

wat did just post lol just jokin ill add some more asap soz gotta go bibi every1

well, hurry! ur driving me cra-z!!

plz someone continue...I really really love the story and everyone was doing so great you can't stop...not now