hmph you guys are great writers I need more...it's like a drug or something. I'll add a few lines cause you guys are right everyone should write
Liz:you'll TELL me..what you know cause I need to find my husbend savvy?
scarlet is taken aback NO ONE not even jack sparrow himself has ever stood up to her like that.
she pulled her self back together and pulled her hand out of liz's.
scarlet: last I heard of him was BEFORE he got married...great times they were as we..
liz cuts her off by throwing he swig of rum in her face..sighs as if to say "when will these people ever have enogh of my husbend.."
then runs off to see if he can find any off the crew or anyone who has info on jack...
she enters a tavern and to her surprise there they are..cotton and pintel and raggeti and a few other crew members drinking rum around a small table.
Back at the pub, the whole crew are having a rum drinking competition. It looks like now it’s between Jack, Will, Kate, Marty (midget bald pirate) and Norrington. But the rest of the crew keep drinking. Abi arrives back at the table with another large tray of rum bottles. Within the second she places them on the table, they are gone instantly.
Elizabeth comes running into the pub; Grant arrives a bit later, out of breath as if he has tried to keep up with Elizabeth the whole time. Elizabeth sees Jack (who has his back to her). She runs straight to him and throws her arms around him. Jack drops the rum his holding, is taken by complete shock, then picks her up and they kiss.
ELIZABETH: Jack, how much i missed you.
JACK: Of course you would darling.
Elizabeth laughs at his joke, and then shows him her arm. It is wrapped in a bandage. He unwraps it gently as Elizabeth winces. Underneath is a horrible scald burn, the faint lines of the P starting to be recognisable now.
JACK: (Raising his own arm) Peas in a pod darling. Though I must say you suffered a lot more than I did
Jack kisses her. Suddenly, pushing through the crowds comes a woman around Elizabeth, Kate and Abi’s age. Jack sees her and is horrified. She takes one look at him and Elizabeth.
WOMAN: I thought you told me she was dead!
JACK: Rose, ummm … this isn’t a good time. Aye, I’ve only just discovered Elizabeth is safe and well.
Elizabeth is shocked, frozen in Jack’s arms, unable to believe what’s happening.
ROSE: Aye, Jack. Why don’t you forget this wench? Besides, you always told me how you needed some fun on the sea, where I cannot go. She’s you’re substitute, a whore. Come back with me.
ELIZABETH: (jumping from Jack’s arms, the rest of the pub is quieting down, curious about this new bit of gossip) Jack! (Pleading) Jack, please tell me this isn’t true. That you never cheated on me?
JACK: Of – of course I’ve never cheated on you, Lizzie. Rose is just an old partner of mine. We’re entirely over.
ELIZABETH: Don’t lie to me, you stinking lying bastard! Tell me the TRUTH!
JACK: (now the whole pub is absolutely still and silent now) Now, Lizzie, dear –
ELIZABETH: DON’T YOU DARE CALL ME LIZZIE, OR DEAR OR ANYTHING! I THOUGHT YOU CARED FOR ME! I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME!
JACK: (actually cowering at Elizabeth’s rage) I do love you, this isn’t what it looks like –
ELIZABETH: I find THAT hard to believe you’re no better than her, or any of your other playmates. How long have you been with – with HER!
JACK: I haven’t been with her; there is nothing between Rose and me!
ELIZABETH: Yes you have. So that is all I meant to you then, was I always just another one of your common girls.
JACK: No! Don’t be stupid. I love you more than anyone else in this whole world –
ELIZABETH: Don’t tell me that rubbish
JACK: Okay, it was only one night, but it was ages ago. Just when we got rid of Dumas. That night you spent back at you're old house, when i went out for a walk late that night. But nothing really happened. I'm beyond sorry and regret for what i did, Elizabeth.
ROSE: Yes, dear. "NOTHING" happened (giggles)
ELIZABETH: (accepting the truth) (softly and calmly, but tears forming in her eyes) I hate you, Jack! You - can die and burn in hell again for all i care! It's Miss. Swann from now on (turns and runs out from bar).
kk every1 is so going 2 get out their pitchforks n stab me but we need a big bump n liz and jack relationship, cuz its really strong (until now) soz guys but hat can be da happy ending, them getting bak 2gether again
I LOVE what your doind with this it will only make them stronger and it will be fun to play with the tension it has to go on a bit long...like they go to the edge of breaking up for good but then they have to reunite in a fight and realize they love each other and they become stronger...I LOVE IT but please don't leave us on a cliffhanger go on I might die from anxiety right now..
Cut to Elizabeth running along a deserted beach. We can hear her crying. She collapses into the sand and into her hands.
Cut to a wharf, a few hours later. Elizabeth is climbing up to the deck of the Black Pearl. She runs across the deck, and into Jack’s cabin. He is already in there sitting in his chair. Elizabeth totally ignores him and opens the wardrobe with a loud Bang! She takes out her sword, her rifle, hat, coat and a few other items. Jack gets up and stands next to her. As soon as he comes near she walks in the other direction and throws her stuff on the table, smashing a almost full rum bottle. Rum goes everywhere, but Jack for once ignores this.
JACK: Elizabeth, I know you probably don’t believe this or want too, but I admit to seeing Rose. It was the worst mistake of my life. I knew someday you would find out and – (takes her hands) you have every right to be upset –
Elizabeth snatches her hands out of his grip and starts tying her effects to her belt.
JACK: Please, you have no idea. (Jack is beyond seriousness now, he’s actually begging – something we’ve seen him do before) I want to start over so badly. I’ll do anything for you. I’ll be the best husband I can be. I’m never going to hurt you again. The pain is too horrible for both of us.
Jack pulls her into a hug.
JACK: Please, Miss Swann. Will you start over again with me, and be together again?
Elizabeth gently and calmly gets out of his grip.
ELIZABETH: I can’t Jack. I am too beyond being upset. I don’t know how to trust you anymore. Yes, we’ve done horrible things to eachother, but never did I go behind your back to be with someone else. It may of only of been for a night, but we were still together and close. With Will, we were already falling apart. But us, we were together. I don’t know what to do now, Jack.
JACK: I promise, I swear I’ll forever be loyal to you. Just give me one more chance. Let’s get married again. Can I try again?
ELIZABETH: Jack, we can’t start over again … I’m pregnant, and for real this time! (at that she puts on her hat and coat, and runs from the cabin, leaving Jack behind heartbroken and dumbstruck).
hope u like it folks god dis im getting scared by my own imagination lol
oh my god you can't leave us on a cliffhanger like THAT where did you go you HAVE to continue...you just can't do that to me!!! I can't imagine them having kids...uh maybe it'll end up in a miscarriage and she'll realize she still trusts jack and only jack to stick around and heal her pain...I don't know but you have to continue PLEASE
Cut to back to pub – the tavern is empty except for the barmaids and barmen cleaning up, and a few of Jack’s crew.
WILL: Something is telling me Jack’s plan didn’t go that well
PINTEL: So, it took you almost three hours to work that one out, did it? Well done, Will
RAGETTI: (counts three of his fingers slowly, then mutters something to himself. Suddenly very brightly) Oh yeah, it did too!
Pintel slaps his forward, but says nothing.
JACKY: Well, we can’t just sit around here wondering if my brother and his *wife* will ever talk again
ALEX: So then what do you propose we do instead?
KATE: (who is holding herself well, considering the amount of rum she had had) I say we follow what is left of Jack’s plans. We should rest back on ship for a bit, and then tomorrow we look for some crew. Break-up or not, Jack knows at the moment nothing is more important than building up an army and fighting against Beckett, for what is left of the Golden Age of Piracy
WILL: Well said (puts his arm around her) maybe we should instead though rent a few rooms here instead, I think we best leave Jack and Elizabeth alone to sort out this, arrrrr – problem
Right on cue, the door opens and Elizabeth steps inside. She is wearing her travelling clothes. Gibbs knows straight away her decision and what she is going to do.
ELIZABETH: Everyone, Mr Sparrow and I will no longer be together. This is the end of everything, for me. Not just Mr. Sparrow, but piracy, this life. I intend to go back to England. There is my home, and I will be protected there. This – life has been incredible. I loved it, but now, I know I have to settle down and live a normal life. I’m sorry everyone, but it is what’s best. I loved knowing you all
WILL: (suddenly angry) Liz, you can’t do this to yourself. All you’ve ever wanted was to be a pirate. This is your childhood dream, and you’re going to give it up
ELIZABETH: It is my childhood dream, you’re right. But I’ve lived it now. It’s time to face reality
ABI: Liz, this is reality. Please don’t give being a pirate up! (Runs over and hugs her, so do Kate and Jacky) It would be the worst mistake of your life
ELIZABETH: No, Abi. (Choking back tears) My mind is made up; please don’t make this any harder. I've had enough of piracy!
KATE: Then at least stay for a bit longer. Until this episode with Beckett is over. I want – we all want to be together when Beckett will be overthrown at last.
Elizabeth just shakes her head. She hugs the three girls again, then Norrington, Marty, Gibbs and then finally Will. This is a tense moment, all the memories flood back to them, but when they break apart, the memories are gone. Silently Elizabeth waves goodbye to the rest of the crew, then runs out.
Cut to Beckett’s ship – the next day, sunny and bright. Beckett is in his cabin, writing a letter. There is a knock on the door, and then the First Mate enters.
FM: Captain, the Black Pearl has not left port at Tortuga for almost a day. Do we attack it now, or when?
BECKETT: No, wait until the set sail. Wait for the … opportune moment! (Chuckles evilly and madly to himself) When Captain – Jack – Sparrow, least expects. And finally, I’ll be even
His eyes gleam crazily, and the Fm backs out the office, completely scared and freaked by his Captain. The Bo’sun passes him.
FM: (to the Bo’sun) Maybe it would be best to keep half hourly checks on the Captain. He doesn’t … seem right in the head.
Cut to that afternoon – the crew are on the main deck of the Black Pearl. A long line of men are lining up and signing their names.
GIBBS: (saying to Jack, who is sitting down in a chair, welcoming unenthusiastically his new crew) Well, it’s a lot better than last time, we might get at least twenty new men. That’ll help. (We get the idea he is trying to please Jack and take his mind off things)
JACK: (not really listen to Gibbs or the sailor telling his story. Cuts him off) Yes, yes you’ll do. Sign the bloody book.
GIBBS: Well, the weather’s good, perfect conditions for casting off.
JACK: (at same time as Gibbs’s sentence, O.S (off screen))
Whatever, join the blasted crew if ya want. Come on hurry up, I’ve got better things to do than -
GIBBS: (kindly) Jack, you could try to be a bit nicer, it’ll only mean everyone will respect ya more, aye.
JACK: Very well, Gibbs. You take over. (Thrusts the book into Gibbs’s arms and storms off into his cabin).
WILL: (joining Gibbs) I must say, he is handling it quite well. He hasn’t called me a eunuch once yet.
Suddenly the door of Jack’s cabin bursts open and Jack stomps out, looking ready to kill.
JACK: What’s happened to my private stoke of rum!
GIBBS: (timidly) I don’t know sir.
WILL: (trying to be helpful and logical) Maybe you’ve already drunk it all Jack?
JACK: SHUT IT - YOU BLOODY STUPID EUNUCH! (stomps angrily down the other stairs to the bottom deck where the cellars are).
WILL: Well, there you go. So much for even hoping.
lol love it...go on go on it's getting really intresting I'm thinking of helping you after a few more scenes...you know after I get the flow of what your doing...LOVED the eunich thing lol..go on..OMG your like my fave writer I should be mad at you for what you did to jack and liz but I'm not I think you'll do something twisted with it..and you always end it at a point where I'm wanting more..to bad no one else is online everyones going to love this!