POTC 5 ...our next version

Started by surfchikpir8fan30 pages

kk b4 ya kill me ill continue but i hav 2 be careful im not allowed 2 be here won't be 2 long lol

why aren't you allowed to be here? and please don't leave give us more...we WANT MORE

parents think im spending 2 much time on da net

lol ok but PLEASE post before you go! and come back when ever you can cause we have no idea what u are going to do

lol u can write im half way done wif my new post oh n i 4got 2 thank u n every1 else that liked my scripts it REALLY does mean alo thanz guys

The open ocean – Elizabeth is aboard a ship on the way back to England. She is standing at the top of a mast, letting the wind blow her hair and she gazing into the starry black sky … she is wearing a nice dress, but not anything too fancy. Subconsciously, she touches her stomach. It is still very early in the pregnancy, at the most a couple of months, but Elizabeth is ure for certain she is carrying Jack’s child.

Sailor 1#: Oi, young missy up there, Miss Lilly O’Brien! Everyone is dining now. Would ya join please, the food won’t last long.

Elizabeth: Oh no … I’m not hungry, thankyou.

Sailor 1#: As you wish, Miss O’Brien, but put something warmer on, it’s freezing out here.

Sailor 1# walks back through the doors and downstairs. Elizabeth doesn’t cry, or look even sad. She is being brave and fighting against what’s happened.

Elizabeth: (saying to herself) Please Elizabeth, get Mr. Sparrow out of your mind. You are Miss. O’Brien now, a lady. You can now put everything in the past. It’s all over … now …

Cut to – The open ocean.
The Black Pearl is in the middle of the ocean, not moving. There are no winds to drive her along.

On the main deck, the very large crew are sitting around, either drinking rum or talking. There isn’t anything to do.

Marty: (to Gibbs, Cotton and his parrot) It seems a bit, strange. All this calmness and stillness … it doesn’t feel right to me.

Gibbs: I told Jack, I told him that sailing on a Friday was bad luck, but did he listen to me – no. But what did he call me … aye –

Cotton’s parrot: Awk! Bloody suppositious eunuch! AWK!

Gibbs: Yes, Mr. Cotton. It doesn’t need to be repeated again!

Cut to – Jack’s Cabin

Grant and Jack a having a very harsh and furious argument.

Grant: JACK! Try to be reasonable! Bloody hell; think about something else other than that girl! She always seemed a bit fishy to me. You can do better than her -

Jack: Then why did you bloody well rescue her!

Grant: Do you think I’d really leave her on that horrible ship? Whether I liked her or not, had I of left her behind – do you know the horrible things they would’ve done to her!

Jack: Look, you just stay out of my life! I don’t need more people in it to wreck it!

Grant: If you keep pushing your friends and help away like this, you’ll have nothing left!

Jack: I don’t want your advice! Get out of my cabin, and then my ship and then my life! I won’t ever forget the way you treated me when I was a kid. You abandoned me and hated me. All you ever cared about was your money and precious reputation!

Grant: Jack, don’t say such things. I was tough on you, but never did I ever hate you –
Jack: Don’t give me that rubbish!

Grant: (mockingly) Now that sounds familiar. Last time I heard that, you were being caught for lying and cheating. Tsk! Tsk! You shouldn’t play on words Jack, especially when you're the one in fault –

Jack: (smashing a bottle of rum on the table) Get out! OUT!

Jacky: (timidly entering scared of her father’s and half-brother’s actions and words) Um … Jack!

JACK: WHAT!

Jacky: Jack, an unknown ship has been sighted and they’re flying a white flag … what should we do?

Jack: Whatever anyone damn well likes. Now both of you out!

Grant and Jacky don’t wait for another warning. They practically fly out and shut the door behind them as quickly as possible.

Jacky: Father, what should – do about … Jack?

Grant: Nothing, as far as I’m concerned he is no son of mine.

Jacky throws one more hopeful look at her father. She gets a blank and cold stare in return. Knowing there is nothing she can do for the moment, she goes off to Norrington.

Some time later –

A longboat pulls up alongside the Pearl. The crew help its occupants onto the Pearl. They are an anonymous pirate and Bootstrap Bill.
As soon as Will sees his father, he runs up to him immediately they engage in a conversation. The rest of the crew sees this as nothing too important, and return to their rum and card games. The anonymous sailor climbs back into the longboat and rows back to the ship, while receiving many thanks from Bootstrap.

Will: Father, it’s so god to see you. Where have you been all this time?

Bootstrap: In Tortuga son. When I heard of the Black Pearl and its crew in port, I came immediately to the wharf, but you all had already left. I boarded that ship, and with a bit a bartering and bribery involved they managed to drop me off here, as I was on the way to where they were heading.

Will: Well, that’s all good then. Father, there is someone you have to meet.

Will takes his father to Kate and introduces them to eachother.

Will: Kate, this is my father, Bill. Father this is Kate – my fiancée.

This turns the attention of the crew. Kate shows everyone a gorgeous ring on her ring finger on her left hand.

Kate: It’s only just been decided, but we’re engaged now. Will and I hope to marry, when Beckett will be defeated.

Will: And hopefully he won’t interrupt this marriage like the previous ones he has.

Crew is still quite shocked, but Abi is smiling, she knew of these plans.

Bootstrap: Well, congratulations! I’m very proud and happy for both of you. Welcome to the family, Kate.

Abi: I believe a feast is in order, to celebrate. But if ya all want it before tomorrow morning, then I’ll need a lot of help to feed all these mouths. (Laughs) That means you too Alex! (she playfully pokes her own fiancé in the ribs, then all Kate, Jacky and another handful of pirates follow them both downstairs to prepare.

Bootstrap: (suddenly notices) Will, where be Jack. I haven’t seen him on deck yet … my best guess is he’s passed out with too much rum! (Smiles, obviously and incredibly didn’t hear what happened between him and Elizabeth).

Will: Father, it’s a long story. I think I’ll explain at dinner. (leads his father instead over to somewhere private on the ship to catch up).

hope you guys like it sorry i took so long to post it on here

oh my god I LOVE IT! even more than the last one...if that's possible lol everyones going to LOVE this surfchik wait till evryone comes...omg this is just so classic you know? and you've put in ALL the characters AND there is still enough of jack and liz in the story...please please please just post ONE more thing before you go just one line even(wow seems like I'm really obssesed with this story lol) one line will be good and since you've inspired me so much I'm gonna post something on the story today...thanks again I loved it

Next Scene – At dinner

The dining room (if you can it that) has been transformed into what would remind you of the pub back at Tortuga. The pirates are throwing food, drinking rum, music is being played, there’s a deafening amount of talk and singing – it’s a happy mayhem.

Kate: (shouting over the noise to Abi) I don’t remember the last time I had more fun. This is absolutely crazy! (Laughs happily then goes over and kisses Will. She is slightly drunk).

Abi: ‘Scuse me, Alex (she goes over to her father, whom is talking to Jacky). Sorry Jacky, can I have a word with Dad.

Jacky: Course ya can, hon. Don’t mind me. (She goes over and talks to Gibbs)

Abi: Father, Will and Kate are getting married, Bootstrap didn’t try and put his foot down at all, and he didn’t even know Kate. When will you grant Alex and I permission to be engaged?

Norrington: That was all different. Will is Bootstrap’s son, a lad. You Abi are my daughter, and even though I have now known Alex for a long time, I still want to protect you. You are my only daughter. I don’t want anything bad or unhappy for you!

Abi: But I would be in perfect hands with Alex. I trust him with all my heart.

Norrington: I trust him too, Abi. I just want what is best for you. (He pulls her into a fatherly hug).

Abi: What is best for me is to marry Alex, please – Daddy. Please give us your word.

Norrington: (considers it for a moment, it looks like he won’t – then he sees his daughter’s face, and changes his mind) Alright then Abi – I give you two permission to be married, just remember I always wanted what’s best for you. (But Abi has already thrown her arms around him, kisses him on the cheek and then pulls away looking extremely happy).

Abi: Thankyou Daddy. I love you! (She then runs to Alex to tell him that they have Norrington’s blessings)

Norrington: (muttering to a young cabin boy, passing by) I warn you son, having a daughter is a personal risk for a father.

Young cabin boy throws Norrington a weird and confused look, and then scampers away to join the celebrations again. Norrington sighs to himself, and then takes a swig full of rum, looking happy and at ease).

That’s all 4 2nite guys sorry mum says ive gotta go 2 bed tlk 2 every1 2morrow goodnite! 🙂

ur probably all confused but i live in australia so my times r different 2 urs lol im not going 2 bed at 5:30 lol or wateva time it is in United States lol oh n thanx sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much tee_pirategirl all ur complements really mean alot im really glad every1 likes my scripts instead of getting out their pitchforks and saying die surfchikpir8fan die lol goodnite every1 dont let the bedbugs bite!

I love you thanks for posting that last part go to bed it's late there bye

yes, a wonderful story....I love it, can't wait for more!!

I love your new siggi did you make it? where did you get it?

don't know, from another forum, but can't remember where exactly

really cool

thank you 😉 but your is cool too...and now where is surfchikpir8fan?????

I dunno she said she can't stay long +it's still really early in the morning in australia I wish she would come back and post some more

woot that was but kicking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ABI ROXER MY SOXER!!!!!!!!!!! lol!!!!!!!!!

just keeping this alive...

this is still awesome!

ok you guys from the inspiration I got from all these writings I'm going to write a short scene that has nothing to do with the story just you know a little character thing:
everyone is still drinking and having fun norrington turns around to find jacky at his side.
jacky: what was THAT all about?
norri(still smiling):just another wedding on top of the others...speaking of which when is ours going to be.
he holds jacky's hand and looks in her eyes.
jacky: I need you to make me a promise...James I'm a sparrow at heart I can't LEAVE a life without adventure..promise me we'll have adventures even when we go back to port roayl..
norri: ofcourse we will..my new post means I have to spend alot of time on a ship and...
he is cut off with a passionate kiss from jacky.
camera cuts to the deck where we see will and bootstrap go out of the dining room and start strolling..
bootstrap: kate is a magnificent girl...oh by the way where IS jack not like him to miss all that rum..(laughs)
will:there is something you should know about jack father...
camera cuts to jack in his cabin looking at the items on his desk as they go back and forth with the movement of the ship..he's holding a bottle of rum..
jack:.....and blacksheep and really bad eggs..drink up me hearties YOHO!
takes a swig of rum. then his expration changes to anger he holds up the bottle like he's going to smash it on the table.
jack:then again it is your fault I was drunk enough to do something stupid anyways..
his hand slows down as it gets close to the table.he laughs one of those tarde mark laughs of his.
jack:and THEN again...you WERE responsible for me and liz getting close on that island.
camera cuts to the deck.
bootstrap😖he WHAT?
will😖he left...and she's still my friend..and he's still my friend...if you can call him that. and I can't help but think how everything would've been more wonderful for me and kate tonight if jack and liz were sitting in there and teasing each other and the good ol captain making jokes and calling me a eunich...(he laughs) what has the world come to? I'm asking for jack sparrow to call me a eunich.
voice(OS): wow you really are dumb you whelp...It's still CAPTAIN jack sparrow.
they turn around to see jack making his way out of his cabin.
jack(still rambling on and on and on): I mean you would think after ALL this time you would remember CAP--
will:jack what what is it?
jack:yeeeesh...can't a man take a stroll on his own ship?