I'm Making A New Novel

Started by Strangelove10 pages

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
Oh, and I read Spartan's post. REPORTED.
report, report, report, report

You report posts a lot. Either people really hate you or you're paranoid.

And sorry KOK if that is not the interperetation meant for your post. So if it wasn't, it doesn't matter.

Originally posted by masterkit
How Far Are You On It Now?

Originally posted by Strangelove
report, report, report, report

You report posts a lot. Either people really hate you or your paranoid.

It's the fact that people here are really mean to people with new ideas or the motivation to help others(which this novel may do if it does well). Helping is one thing, but insulting and trying to ruin one's confidence is another. I don't hate Spartan or King Of Kings, but if they are jerks to me for wishing to try something, then I believe that I have the right to report them.

Originally posted by masterkit

Oh, whoops! Forgot to answer. Well, I won't say, but I'm around the middle. I'm trying to keep the beggining short so I can get to the major events such as a very long, very dramatic fight scene and an immensely dark turn of events.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
So I'm an idiot for being respectful?
REPORTED
I wasn't saying that about you. I had it in quotes, indicating that it's something you should've/could've said. Though it does prove that you lack reading comprehension, and if you can't read, you can't write.

Originally posted by TheKingofKINGS!
I wasn't saying that about you. I had it in quotes, indicating that it's something you should've/could've said.

Which is why I apologized.

Did you rewrite the preview part yet?

If he did, he should post it here.

Originally posted by Spartan005
Did you rewrite the preview part yet?

I didn't rewrite it. Never said I did. I added something to it. Because believe it or not, it isn't random. The gun part was taken away.

Still seems pretty lame.

Originally posted by TheKingofKINGS!
Still seems pretty lame.

You never even SAW it!
🙄

If all you did to the intro was take out the gun part, then you're slightly exciting, badly written intro loses all it's good qualities. It's slight excitement,

Originally posted by TheKingofKINGS!
If all you did to the intro was take out the gun part, then you're slightly exciting, badly written intro loses all it's good qualities. It's slight excitement,

I said that I SWITCHED and ADDED parts.
🙄

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
I said that I SWITCHED and ADDED parts.
🙄
Regardless, until you prove to me that it doesn't suck, I will continue saying it sucks.

Hint to Baltan: Show us the preview

Originally posted by Spartan005
Hint to Baltan: Show us the preview

Hint: NO. To many flames from that. Besides, I'm not gonna cheat by using editing from random guys on the internet. I am showing someone close to me it as we speak.

Originally posted by TheKingofKINGS!
Regardless, until you prove to me that it doesn't suck, I will continue saying it sucks.

Showing how shallow you are and how much of a mean person you are by trying to rub it in while it's not true one bit(or won't be).