I'm Making A New Novel

Started by Ultraman Baltan10 pages

I am greatly surprised you people merely wanting to crush my spirit and make me feel bad about myself. I don't know why, but it shows more about you than it does me.
Besides, the money is not going specifically to me. Something may happen, and it is my duty to see to it that three friends of mine are helped(and possibly saved) through POSSIBLE profit from my book. Besides, it allows me to gain more grammar and writing experience, learn new words, and keep an open mind to new techniques.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
I am greatly surprised you people merely wanting to crush my spirit and make me feel bad about myself. I don't know why, but it shows more about you than it does me.
Besides, the money is not going specifically to me. Something may happen, and it is my duty to see to it that three friends of mine are helped(and possibly saved) through IMPOSSIBLE profit from my book. Besides, it allows me to gain more grammar and writing experience, learn new words, and keep an open mind to new techniques.

😐

Originally posted by TheKingofKINGS!
😐

I love you too.

You're making a new novel, eh? hmm

I could be wrong, but wouldn't it work a little better if you wrote it? hmm

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
I am greatly surprised you people merely wanting to crush my spirit and make me feel bad about myself. I don't know why, but it shows more about you than it does me.
Besides, the money is not going specifically to me. Something may happen, and it is my duty to see to it that three friends of mine are helped(and possibly saved) through POSSIBLE profit from my book. Besides, it allows me to gain more grammar and writing experience, learn new words, and keep an open mind to new techniques.

I'm being seriously honest, in saying that it is VERY hard to get any sort of work published.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
I am greatly surprised you people merely wanting to crush my spirit and make me feel bad about myself.

Not that you don't bring it upon yourself by trying to own everyone every three posts.

Originally posted by Lana
I'm being seriously honest, in saying that it is VERY hard to get any sort of work published.

But there's always hope, no matter how slim.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
I love you too.
Gay 😬

Originally posted by Barker
Not that you don't bring it upon yourself by trying to own everyone every three posts.

But I didn't. Never wanted to, and never tried. 😐

Originally posted by TheKingofKINGS!
Gay 😬

This is coming from the guy who made the Penis thread.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
But there's always hope, no matter how slim.
Not with you there isn't.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
But I didn't. Never wanted to, and never tried. 😐

You just did.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
This is coming from the guy who made the Penis thread.
This coming from a guy who's making the worst "novel"(It's porbablly more acurate for me to call it toilet paper) ever, and can't understand what a joke is. 😐

Originally posted by TheKingofKINGS!
Not with you there isn't.

Until you read the entire book(which I am on Chapter 5 right now), you are in no position to say that. For example: Dark Lord, I thought, was terrible for the first fifty pages. But as I held onto reading it, it soon became one of the most entertaining books I have read this year(best book I read this year, though, was either Island Of Dr. Moreau or Animal Farm).

Originally posted by TheKingofKINGS!
This coming from a guy who's making the worst "novel"(It's porbablly more acurate for me to call it toilet paper) ever, and can't understand what a joke is. 😐

Yet you only read a segment that may not even BE in the the book. 😐 Also, that has nothing to do with being gay.

Originally posted by Barker
You just did.

That was reply, not a burn.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
Until you read the entire book(which I am on Chapter 5 right now), you are in no position to say that. For example: Dark Lord, I thought, was terrible for the first fifty pages. But as I held onto reading it, it soon became one of the most entertaining books I have read this year(best book I read this year, though, was either Island Of Dr. Moreau or Animal Farm).
If you wrote 5 chapters in less than 4 days, the book will most definately suck.
Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
Yet you only read a segment that may not even BE in the the book. 😐 Also, that has nothing to do with being gay.
I can tell from your style that it'll be horrible at best. Also, I wasn't saying anything about gay. However, you're just a dumbass.....

Originally posted by TheKingofKINGS!
If you wrote 5 chapters in less than 4 days, the book will most definately suck.

Not if I put the time and effort into it and spent hours on it it doesn't.

Originally posted by Ultraman Baltan
Yet you only read a segment that may not even BE in the the book.
Then why post a segment of a book you hope will make you money for us to judge if its not even going to make the final cut?

Baltan, I'm being completely honest with you when I say this...
that preview sucked. Seriously, it was the most random shit I've ever read in my life... "Then he suddenly pulled out a grenade with a semi automatic handgun" 🤨 At no point did it even slightly catch my attention, and most of the time I was actually laughing because it sucked so much.

Listen to Lana.... That will never get published. Sorry dude...