A Broken Heart Is Hard To Heal

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A Broken Heart Is Hard To Heal

Hey guys just tell me what u think I'm sure some of you can relate to atleast one of these give any suggestions you have.

The Bridge
My heart my sole you took it all,
I reached out and made a call,
Your ears heard but kept away,
Your true feelings you have today,
You took my happiness at the egde,
And pushed me off that golden bridge,
I fell hard but did not die,
My heart it hurts and now I cry,
For you still have my loving need,
Look my heart it now bleeds,
I reached up to grab your hand,
But you let go and I fell toward land,
Once again I did not die,
But now I hardly begin to cry,
Now angry I climb for the view,
Read my lips **** U

Love and Hate
I love you for your talents, cuteness and personality,
You hate me for my appearance, clothes and weighted body,
I love you for yourself and nothing has to change,
You hate me thats it I'm out of your range,
I love who you are and where you've been,
You hate me and don't care if I'm there once and then again,
I love you so much your my everything,
You hate me and seem to not care if you give me pain,
I see to you I'm just another score,
So go on have fun with another stupid whore!!!!

Confused
Scared and confused my heart leaps,
For now we have new found feats,
No hope gained no hope lost,
For last it gave such a cost,
Today we broke that barrier,
That one last safety carrier,
Is there still a chance,
Is there still hope,
Is there still a chance for us to cope,
I'm scared to trust my own instincts,
My own true feelings that create a link,
God help us to find our one demand,
That has us loving hand in hand,
Confused and scared my heart resides,
Of your heart it lays inside.

~No Name~
My heart it aches,
My heart it breaks,
How it hates you,
How it loves you,
Whats my choice but 2 want you,
Sure you don't say a single word,
But now your person my heart has heard,
Don't deny my wanting need,
For your call I want to heed,
See my pain its all inside,
But infront of you its sure to hide,
Does that mean you make me find,
My one true happiness thats you inside.

Puzzle
Searching so hard my head is spinning,
This search is always never ending,
Asking every person I see,
Except the one who has what I need,
He's hiding it from me where could it be,
I look into his eyes but nothing I see,
I ask all of his friends but they have no clue,
Only helping are a few,
My mind confused his not thinking straight,
I need that last fit before it's too late,
My mind is leaking full give me a muzzle,
Still searching for that last piece to the puzzle!!!!

Give Up
Theres no chance theres no hope,
Goobye for now we'll never cope,
I thought we both felt that way,
I'm proved wrong in one day,
You say one thing and act another,
I'll just face it we are not lovers,
I wish I was wrong to say this truth,
We are separated by a hard steel roof,
One side love the other hate,
In the middle it's our hearts beating a fast rate,
I wish I was wrong to just give up,
I'll face it now I'm a love sick pup,
Tomorrow the sun rises nothing will change,
You still say I'm out of your range!!!!

ur poems are so damn kick ass. i love them.... alomst as much as i lub you flowers haha jp, thats lances job, to love you 😛. ur poems are pimpin....... just like meh pimp lol jp. keep 'em comin doped

Thx chickadee lol and those poems r lances fault lol so I guess I should thank him but no I won't lol he damn well better hurry up though thx for the comment keep em comin ppl
~Sierra~

ima beat that boi if he dont hurry up box lol, jpjpjp

Uh Oh I better get the sporks and the camera

Chyea, u kno it lol tongue

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
ima beat that boi if he dont hurry up box lol, jpjpjp

You talking about me😠, Bring itbat😛

Nice poems SG😄

Thx Demonic keep the comments comin ppl

NIce poems. Man! Why does everyone around here feel that they need to rhyme the ends of practically every line? Freeverse rhythm can be equally good.
But nice poems!

Yea sry bout the rhymin thing its just somthing I do otherwise I'm confused w/ it but thx immortality keep the comments comin ~Sierra~

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
You talking about me😠, Bring itbat😛

Nice poems SG😄

nah, im talkin bout the guy lance that hurt her 😠... thats the boi ima hurt 😇

Yea exactly but not every1 needs to know that lol but yes hes the main reason for half those poems

OH PULEAZE.... no one here knos him cept u and me 😬, ur avvy looks exactly like that fool tongue

Don't make fun of him god and I know

WHY DID U CHANGE UR AVVY?!?!?!?! GOD!!!

Cuz I just wanted 2 show u that one so can we plz get back 2 poetry here

NO..... cause ur avvy is creepy as sh*t, its scarin the fuk outta me ermm

Well its from the musical CATS its ok so back 2 the poems

IVE SEEN THAT MUSICAL....... so i believe i have the right to be slightly frightened by ur avvy...... i almost tried to kill myself while watchin that, dont remind me of it mhm so.......... fu im out

SRY