A Broken Heart Is Hard To Heal

Started by SouthernGirl8147 pages

Thx immortality but that wasnt my best I was just bored

Well then I guess it's safe to say it suckeddoped.....I'm kiddin ya, it's good✅

Yea and idc if u say it sucked I'd rather know the truth than be lied 2

Oh trust me, I didn't lie when I said it was good.

ok thx

Heres another one it ryhmes but idc

Secrets are told
Heartbreaks are lost
When did love come at such a cost
It's made itself known
That it shouldn't be beat
This new year I hope
My true match I will meet
Hope that was lost is once gained again
Confusion once dropped
Came back to drop in
Questions are asked
Tears are now falling
For no one knows what answers are calling
Let this new year bring one I want most
Please God I pray we are each others host
Falling off a cliff of rocks
Time ticking away on every clock
Let love give me the one I'm wishing for
One day I hope we'll meet at the door

AWESOME JOB SIERRA!!!!! yay.... good poem, i really liked it. HURRY UP AND GET ONLINE!!! i have things to tell you bout the party lol. anyways like i said b4 good poem. peace out girl scout lol pimp

Nice work but you coulda worked on the endin a bit, it sounds....unfinished, if ya get my drift.

I know it sounds unfinished im workin on that I had 2 get off the computer kinda fast

No probs, it was a great poem though

Ok is it good now

Secrets are told
Heartbreaks are lost
When did love come at such a cost
It's made itself known
That it shouldn't be beat
This new year I hope
My true match I will meet
Hope that was lost is once gained again
Confusion once dropped
Came back to drop in
Questions are asked
Tears are now falling
For no one knows what answers are calling
Let this new year bring the one I want most
Please God I pray we are each others host
Falling off a cliff of rocks
Time ticking away on every clock
Let love give me the one I'm wishing for
One day I hope we'll meet at the door
Our eyes will meet the hope of each others
Our lips will then lock with one anothers
Our hearts will beat three times at quick
Knowing theres no hope makes me sick
But it's all just a dream a stupid illusion
I'm starting to realize I'm in delusion
Unless I'm told to the face by him
Theres no truth not one little wim
So the games will keep going
Until he catches me alone
Until then no pain or confusion will be gone

and that is the truth

the truth sux hun, but ur poem rox my sox ...... if that boi doesnt make a move soon, ima take him the fuk out

Yea the truth does suck and I wish sum1 could find out sum goddam answers

dont look at me... ill help ya all the way girl... but i cant even figure out my own life

same here, my existance is in chaos!
Good Poem! I was confused for a second if that was the modified version of the one before! Keep 'em cumin!

Thx Katz it's ok nobody else is gettin answers so I don't expect u to it's too late anywayz and thx Immortality

Its never too late biotch doped

Don't be callin me a biotch I do think its 2 late and u know that

What will be the final chapter
When will it all end
How will the truth be shown
Why is he doing this to me
What happens after everything is told
When will all of the questions turn to answers
How will we end up as people
Why isn't anything going right
What is the chance of what I want
When will he finally notice how much I care
How is the story going to end
Why is it neverending
Who will we trun out to be

I just did baybay tongue................ awesome poem, but for real we will figure this thing out