Jedireaper
PSN ID > DarkJedireaper
"Only a personal tragedy, sir." Denzral pauses, taking a deep breath. "I had not quite finished my apprenticeship when my Master had been assassinated. We had been investigating a Senator that had possible ties with the Hutts. During our investigation, we stumbled upon a strange murder in the Senators own courtyard. It was the senators attendant. Being inexperienced to a degree, I connected the murder to either a warning to us to back off, or a warning to the Senator from some source, Hutts or other. My Master agreed with me." Denzral took a sip of liquid from the goblet in front of him, and then cast a glance around the table. "The man had been killed in a very odd way and put on display in an almost ritualistic fashion, unbecoming of the Hutts; as you probably are aware, the vile Gangstas tended to prefer methods that were a little more straight forward. The body had had his eye's removed and replaced with coins," Denzral takes one of the coins in question, and holds it to the light before offering it to the King to inspect. "This is one of the coins we removed from the body."
(OOC: Not sure if this was what you mean, I am not a fan of creating a story that may not fit. I guess I've become lazy. Below are perhaps place holders for a future story regarding Denzral...
What I originally wrote after 'personal tragedy, sir'
"It was two years ago; I was en-route to begin a political investigation with the Governor of a planetary system known as Balner (originally named; Balnesh), a little know system a few light years off the Braxant Run, near the Lahara Sector. You may have heard of Agamar, perhaps? A common misconception of their culture being slow, and dim-witted has spread galaxy wide. Well, Balner is on the outskirts of that sector. The system consisted of five planetoids, and two asteroid belts, centered on a binary system, (although the stars were that close they appeared as one, except under close scrutiny). A bitter war between the two major nations on the planet, a war that had lasted for generations, suddenly ended. The rulers of both nations requested Republic aid to prevent a planetary disaster. I was sent in..."
And and alternate description from 'galaxy wide' onwards;
"Well Balnesh is a system of two populated worlds that existed in a symbiotic relationship, not only did the humanoid species of both worlds form a sort of coalition, in which technologies, and information was shared, but also the two planets were impossibly in orbit of each other around a trinary star group. The two species at first contacted each other by signals, and later by primitive space flight. Republic monitor stations detected that both species had developed an effective hyperdrive design that allowed the Republic to send a dignitary to make peaceful contact with them." Denzral took a sip from a glass of liquid. "It was deemed a Jedi would be appropriate for first contact, and I was chosen. It was one of my first tasks"😉