Originally posted by truejedi
this is why this website died. none of us have the energy to explain. Not even to correct his spelling... Gosh, i remember when RN and Slash would at least help with that...
it's just so rare anymore to need to help anyone here that the marginal helping of a post on KMC is lower than the marginal helping in real life.
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I guess I can spare the time for this guy, if it'll make you feel better.
Originally posted by Head shot 97
Ok let me get this straight if you think the empire will win you guys are retards to think the empire would win
It is a convention among users of the English language to denote the end of sentences with periods. Periods are punctuation symbols found on typical keyboards two keys to the right of the letter "m." In addition to that structural tip (rules pertaining to the structure of sentences deal with "syntax"😉 you may also be surprised to learn that some members of your audience could meet the experience of being diagnosed "retarded" with some dismay; if you wish to garner support from such individuals you ought to consider a different tone. (Furthermore, some find the use of the term "retard" as a pejorative to be in particularly bad taste.)
Originally posted by Head shot 97
First- the covenant control a huge part of the galaxy along with the unsc containing hundreds of planets which means a lot more resources and soldiers.
I find it necessary here to remark again on the nature of sentences. While in this instance your assemblage of words includes the majority of requisite syntactical components (the capitalization of the word "First" may be disputed by pedants, as it is serving the role of of section header rather than being contained within the sentence, but if I pride myself on anything, it is not being a pedant) you have failed to include both a subject
and a
predicate. You have identified a thing (i.e. the territorial holdings and logistical capabilities of the unsc and the covenant[
sic]) and refrained from acting upon, or with, that identification. To put it more blatantly, "
First- the covenant [[i]sic] control a huge part of the galaxy along with the unsc [
sic] containing hundreds of planets which means a lot more resources and soldiers[/i]...
what? What you've typed is not a complete sentence.
Along with that rather significant oversight comes more than a few extra infractions of the rules regarding capitalization. Again ignoring the header/preposition pedantry regarding "First," I must observe that the acronym U.N.S.C was not capitalized, nor was "Covenant." It is considered appropriate to capitalize both terms because they are proper nouns.
Originally posted by Head shot 97
Second- they have huge fleets. Like a covenant super carrier like from halo reach can destroy an entire fleet of empire ships since it's so huge. Also the unsc has many ships.
It is worth the repetition to again note that "Empire" requires a capital letter.
Originally posted by Head shot 97
Third- the covenant can "glass" an entire planet within a few hours including the number of nuclear bombs the unsc has so pretty much every planet the empire has can be burned and destroyed.
This is a slightly more obscure rule of punctuation, but still very important. I hope you will not feel too foolish for misusing the comma because many of its complexities mystify even the great writers of our age. (Christopher Paolini, for example, has been utterly defeated by the subject.) When deciding to use a comma remember these simple rules:
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[*]Use commas to separate independent clauses when they are joined by any of these seven coordinating conjunctions: and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet.
[*]Use commas after introductory a) clauses, b) phrases, or c) words that come before the main clause.
[*]Use a pair of commas in the middle of a sentence to set off clauses, phrases, and words that are not essential to the meaning of the sentence. Use one comma before to indicate the beginning of the pause and one at the end to indicate the end of the pause.
[*]Do not use commas to set off essential elements of the sentence, such as clauses beginning with that (relative clauses). That clauses after nouns are always essential. That clauses following a verb expressing mental action are always essential.
[*]Use commas to separate three or more words, phrases, or clauses written in a series.
[*]Use commas to separate two or more coordinate adjectives that describe the same noun. Be sure never to add an extra comma between the final adjective and the noun itself or to use commas with non-coordinate adjectives.
[*]Use a comma near the end of a sentence to separate contrasted coordinate elements or to indicate a distinct pause or shift.
[*]Use commas to set off phrases at the end of the sentence that refer to the beginning or middle of the sentence. Such phrases are free modifiers that can be placed anywhere in the sentence without causing confusion. (If the placement of the modifier causes confusion, then it is not "free" and must remain "bound" to the word it modifies.)
[*]Use commas to set off all geographical names, items in dates (except the month and day), addresses (except the street number and name), and titles in names.
[*]Use a comma to shift between the main discourse and a quotation.
[*]Use commas wherever necessary to prevent possible confusion or misreading.
Some easy reminders about when not to use this tricky skill follow:
[*]Don't use a comma to separate the subject from the verb.
[*]Don't put a comma between the two nouns, noun phrases, or noun clauses in a compound subject or compound object.
[*]Don't put a comma after the main clause when a dependent (subordinate) clause follows it (except for cases of extreme contrast).
[/list]I hope that helped!
Originally posted by Head shot 97
Fourth- lastly the unsc has the Spartans which are like super Jedi compared to regular ones also the covenant have the high command elite and the arbiter with there energy swords and other weapons.
So basically the empire LOOSES.
At this point I'm beginning to suspect that an investigation into the placement of semicolons may be a bit premature, to say nothing of an examination of the roles of comparison and contrast when dealing with proof, or even of simple evidential support. Once we've mastered these concepts (next week!) we'll be ready for an investigation of how to apply ethos, logos, and pathos properly, as well as easy-to-avoid logical missteps like
begging the question and
ad hominem attacks.