Superboy Prime vs The Avengers

Originally posted by bluewaterrider
Superman actually lifted Mjolnir once and Prime is insanely strong so this part sounds accurate enough ...

I don't know if Rulk still has that swaggering style since joining the Avengers.

Think he's mellowed out a bit. Matured, maybe?

The part with Prime is absolutely in character, though.

I'll accept he's able to break Rulk's arm, too.
Namor with a percentage of the Phoenix Force did so; understandable Prime could.

Sounds about right ...

'Kay ...

This IS one possibility, though perhaps not quite the likeliest ...

Can't give up Rhodey just yet.

I agree: immediately after Ares, Rulk and War Machine ARE the weakest links on the battlefield and ready to go.

However, you haven't explained what happened to Thor.

You haven't so much as distracted him from your description.

Remember, WHATEVER method you chose for Prime disposing of Ares, Thor has just seen this boy KILL a teammate.

Let's say it was giving Ares the Voidtry treatment, i.e. ripping him in half.

Then Thor, besides general knowledge of Prime, knows that this boy is

a) strong enough to rip a superhuman in half
b) psychotic and violent enough to do so
c) tough enough to endure a VERY forceful hammer throw
d) strong enough to cause environmental effect
e) strong enough to break Rulk's arm
f) strong enough to match World War Hulk in grappling

All this tells me that Thor is going to be taking this extremely seriously, preventing Prime from getting to the weaker members (Tony, Rhodey, and Rulk) even at risk to himself.

And, again, you have not so much as distracted Thor, who is innately looking to get a piece of the action even without this extra incentive.

Clarify how Ares met his end, but I say War Machine under THESE circumstances, Thor still nearby and alert to the physical threat Prime represents, is saved by Thor trying a quick lightning strike or tackling Prime to prevent him from doing to Rhodey what he's ALREADY done to Ares and Rulk.

Rhodey will probably meet his end before this is through, but it doesn't sound reasonable that with an alert, as-yet-unwaylaid Thor being right there nearby that it happens THIS way.

Goldilocks won't permit that until he himself is too far away or has some circumstantial barrier to interceding, a blow, a heat vision wound, some crisis to innocent bystanders, SOMETHING to warrant essentially giving a second teammate to Prime.

Rulk still is the type to rush in and pound away. Maybe the gloating was a bit much but the action is very much in character. And you stated that these guy use the hammer lifting time to "close the distance" so Thor wouldn't be protecting them at this point.

Rulk is lucky i just gave him a broken arm here. Might have to alter when WM dies tho as you do make a good point. Thor was back trying to devise a plan with IM which is why he wasn't in the fray right away but it is more in character for his to just run in swinging huh?

The Rulk mini is generally a bad idea to use, tbh...

Originally posted by juggerman
Ok i like this. Let's see:

Prime fails to lift the hammer and Thor explains why (as he usually does). Prime gets even more serious as he strains to prove himself "worthy". The ground begins to tremble and Thor gets nervous Prime might actually override the enchantments.

But before it is confirmed he can or cannot Rulk drops Prime with a "double axe handle" to Primes head. Ross then begins to pummble Prime with a flurry of punches while he rants about being the one who brought down the mighty surfer and KO'd a Watcher! How could such a puny kid hope to contend?

Prime answers by effortlessly catching one of Rulk's fists and breaking his arm. Prime talks about how they aren't true heros and on his Earth everything was better and he was the only hero. He was the "strongest there is"!

Well Hulk doesn't take too kindly to this and engages Prime in a hit for hit type deal that they both love to do.

While all that went on (which really would be in the span of about 20 seconds) IM and Thor are trying to come up with a plan while WM tries to aid Hulk in taking down the wild child.

WM notices that Hulk seems to be slowly losing his bout with Prime and decides to unload full force on Prime giving Hulk the chance to gain the upperhand. This seems to annoy Prime more than anything and he quickly flies to WM and rips/cuts/punches him in half.

With two members dead and one seriously injured the Avengers are in deep doo doo.....

To be continued....

Originally posted by juggerman
After witnessing this Stark can no long hold Thor at bay and Thor and Hulk take the fight to Prime. They beat on Prime and Prime beats on them. Blood is flying everywhere. Prime makes a joke about all this red and green blood reminding him of Christmas.

Thor is even more pissed off now that Prime is taking the killing of his friends so lightly. He instructs Hulk to back off and begins to rain lightning down on Prime.

When the dust settles they see not only is Prime still standing but he is laughing! Rulk ,embarrased at what the kid did to him earlier, decides to sap some of Hulk's strength to better combat this foe. Hulk doesn't like this too much and the two begin to bicker.

After a few seconds of this they hear a very loud "THUD". When they turn to see what has happened the see SBP standing over a KO'd Thor. The can't help but notice Thor is still cluching his hammer which is resting neatly on his own face. The Hulks both facepalm....

😂 more! Also tweak the parts that Blue mentioned.

Ok here's the updated version:

Part 1

Prime fails to lift the hammer and Thor explains why (as he usually does). Prime gets even more serious as he strains to prove himself "worthy". The ground begins to tremble and Thor gets nervous Prime might actually override the enchantments.

But before it is confirmed he can or cannot Rulk drops Prime with a "double axe handle" to Primes head. Ross then begins to pummble Prime with a flurry of punches. How could such a puny kid hope to contend with the Mighty Red Hulk, Ross thinks to himself.

As if in response Prime answers by effortlessly catching one of Rulk's fists and breaking his arm. Prime talks about how they aren't true heros and on his Earth everything was better and he was the only hero. He was the "strongest there is"!

Well Hulk doesn't take too kindly to this and engages Prime in a hit for hit type deal that they both love to do.

While all that went on (which really would be in the span of about 20 seconds) Thor retrieves his hammer but before he can enter the fray IM grabs his arm explaining that this is not the type of enemy to just attack head on. IM tells Thor that he may have a way to win but he needs Thor not to attack head on. Thor agrees and they start to go over said plan.

IM notices that Hulk seems to be slowly losing his bout with Prime and sends WM to unload full force on Prime giving Hulk the chance to gain the upperhand. He warns WM to be very careful as this enemy could kill him easily. WM heads in and keeps a relatively far distance between himself and Prime and then starts the bombardment. This seems to annoy Prime more than anything and he quickly flies to WM and rips/cuts/punches him in half. IM realises WM and indeed himself have greatly underestimated SBP's speed.

With two members dead and one seriously injured the Avengers are in deep doo doo.....

Part 2

After witnessing this Stark can no long hold Thor at bay and Thor and Hulk take the fight to Prime. They beat on Prime and Prime beats on them. Blood is flying everywhere. Prime makes a joke about all this red and green blood reminding him of Christmas.

Thor is even more pissed off now that Prime is taking the killing of his friends so lightly. He instructs Hulk to back off and begins to rain lightning down on Prime.

When the dust settles they see not only is Prime still standing but he is laughing! Rulk, embarrased at what the kid did to him earlier, decides to sap some of Hulk's strength to better combat this foe. Hulk doesn't like this too much and the two begin to bicker.

After a few seconds of this they hear a very loud "THUD". When they turn to see what has happened the see SBP standing over a KO'd Thor. The ycan't help but notice Thor is still cluching his hammer which is resting neatly on his own face. The Hulks both facepalm....

Corrections are in BOLD.

How's this so far?

Originally posted by juggerman
Ok here's the updated version:

Corrections are in [b]BOLD.

How's this so far? [/B]

👆

Originally posted by juggerman
Ok here's the updated version:

Corrections are in [b]BOLD.

How's this so far? [/B]

I hate it.

Originally posted by carver9
I hate it.

Well ur gay.

Originally posted by carver9
I hate it.

WHY????????????????????????????????? 🙁

Originally posted by Blight
Well ur gay.

Lol...that just made me hate it even more.

Originally posted by juggerman
WHY????????????????????????????????? 🙁

I explained why.

Seriously, probably because you didn't elevate Hulk to nearly one shotting Prime.

Originally posted by Blight
I explained why.

You're right my mistake

Seriously, probably because you didn't elevate Hulk to nearly one shotting Prime.

I can see that...

Originally posted by Blight
I explained why.

Seriously, probably because you didn't elevate Hulk to nearly one shotting Prime.

Lol...I'm just messing with Jugs. The story is great and well thought but he is making the fight easier than what it is suppose to be. I like it though. I think I read it 3 times so far so it must be good.

Originally posted by carver9
Lol...I'm just messing with Jugs. The story is great and well thought but he is making the fight easier than what it is suppose to be. I like it though. I think I read it 3 times so far so it must be good.

And I, sir, am just messing with you. 🙂

Anyway where's the rest of the story?

Honestly, this team would need more raw power to stand a chance.

Originally posted by Blight
Anyway where's the rest of the story?

It's coming. They got me doing actual job related crap at work at the moment. How dare they?! 😠

I'm actually glad im getting positive reviews. 😄

This one has a bit more detail

Part 3.

Ok so IM, now realising what a bad situation they are in, begins to worry. Alot. Without Thor his original plan, and honestly their only real hope, is gone. He very quickly informs them that they have no chance of winning as long as Prime has that suit of armor on and that they must make every effort to remove it.

Hulk and Rulk begin to charge Prime but IM tells Rulk to hang back awhile. As Hulk and SBP go blow for blow again Ross questions Stark's call. Didn't this already happen and Hulk was clearly being beaten?

Stark just smiles and tells Ross to start absorbing Hulks gamma again. Ross is confused but knows the billionaire must be up to something. And honestly he craves the strength Hulk posses.

Hulk and Prime's blows land one after another. It's a miracle the Earth can withstand such fury! Prime realises Hulk's blows are decreasing in strength. He begins to taunt Hulk's so called "power". How could this jolly green clown be the strongest anywhere?! Suddenly Prime is hit with punches so hard he can hardly keep his footing! How is this possible? I had you beaten!

Hulk explains how the madder he gets the stronger he gets. And Prime is pissing him off! And Hulk also realised Rulk sapping his gamma radiation. While weakening him at first Hulk embraced how angry the additional strain on him made him. Also the fact that he hates how Ross is using him!

All that is boiling up in him is making his power grow and grow. Hulk realises Stark's plan. He remembers when he fought Ross and he tried to absorb his power but it had little effect on him since his power grows so radically in this form. While his power can't grow as quickly with Rulk absorbing it it still grows. And Rulk's power grows as well. Now instead of having one Hulk whose power is increasing, Stark has found a way to create two!

Soon both Red and Green Hulk are on top of Prime. Both with power beyond measure. Prime is taking shot after painful shot. Each hit more devestating than the last.

Finally the brutes succeed in stripping the armor off of the man child. That and the look in Prime's eye tells Stark all he needs to know. Victory is at hand.

Prime is scared. His foes, these wanna be heros, are getting stronger and stronger. And now his armor is gone! If this keep up he will surely be killed! Thinking very quickly he realises going toe to toe with these monsters is not very smart. It's downright dumb in fact. But how could they ever match his other abilities? Moving very very fast Prime creates distance from the Hulks.

After a quick break from the beating Prime returns the punishment to them going faster than they can really react to. Dozens of punches land in a second on them. Prime easily evades anything they throw at him. The Hulks give ground.

Stark begins to get that terrible feeling in his stomach again. The Mighty Avengers are in big trouble once again...

Thor begins to stir..........

pizza

The messed up part is that i think Prime would easily win but making this story i really want the Avengers to pull one out!

He really wouldn't easily win looking at fts on both side and ignoring what members on the team has withstood. Like this...

Rulk amped off of Hulk strength...he took so much power from Hulk that he was able to punch him with enough force that it created a nuclear blast.

http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/8339/hulk2401718.jpg

Hulk tanks it (this punch >>>>>> Black Adam punch).

http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/6448/hulk24019.jpg
http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/4844/hulk24020.jpg

Like I said before, Prime would be hard pressed at taking out WWH. It would be a HELL of a fight with an undecided outcome imo.