stuff I've written!

hmmm..yes....true...🙂

ok ppl! just to put me back on the mark!

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reawakened pain I have never missed
this hatered, death has kissed
ink on paper, spoken words
nothing can express these feelings and nerves.

forced to face the reality that I'v avoided for so long
numb ignorance is not an option anymore
this anger and twisted bitterness, dragging me down through the floor
this, my confession, opening a once closed and locked door.

confronted with this vile passion thats rooted deep
the disgust for my actions overwhelms me
extented, the tears seep into my eyes, down my face they creep
disilusioned and dismayed, I cannot see.

my own mistakes haunt me with vengance
anger, pain, mistrust, guilt, regret and hatered in aligance
my heart a vigile-anti against my head
beyond numbness come the explosion, fuelled and fed.

beyond these mords is the connotation and comprehension
I can only tell the wrongs that have wronged me
even those are obscure.
explanation and comprehension illude both you and me.

well, consider yourself back on the mark, lara, very well written 🙂
though, I'm still waiting for a more happy one 😉

Sooo...when do we see a publication from u lara ?

that's the shit !! not too morbid at all, that's my fav. type of poetry. i write some myself...maybe one day i'll be as brave as you and show it all to you guys to see.[COLOR=indigo][B]

theres nothing brave about it. its just liking your work enough to let others enjoy it as well. although I still maintain the fact that poetry is a very personal thing, and you shouldnt show it if your really dont want to.

rusky! long time no see! no plans for a publication yet, unfortunately.
hows things?

yeah, poetry always very personal otherwise its just for the money that isn't in it. i have a crapload of poems and i think i will post some tonight if noone objects.

i am moved by so much emotion and sorrow in these poetry. brilliant work.

I really like your style of writing. It's great.

raw emotion is the best communicator. why dress up how you feel when it just confuses the issue and other ppl think that theres some thing deeper in what you write. I thank my gracious audience.

I'll always be more than interested in reading your stuff lara 🙂

*runs in and searches for Lara*

OMG!!! Am I too late?? Has she taken her life???

*spies her sitting at a table in the corner, feverishly working on her next poem*

TFI you girl! *hugs you tight*

Just keep on letting it out babe, I had to sit back in my chair and take a few deep breaths after reading some of your work, magnificent......

I received a poem a few days ago, nothing special cause it's more about the feeling

but I apperently deleted it, ... or it's on the other pc

TFI?????????

wow.....😖

wow????? what!

ok ppl, smthng a bit happier.
just a sort one though/

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looking to the sky, so bright and clear.
I've something to say, just wish you were here!
I hate being away, and when we're together I wish I could stay.
time gone in an instant, why cant it just stop?

looking to the sky, mottled pink, orange and purple.
warm and inviting just like you.
someone I can share everything with, wether it be a whim or a major tiff.

thankyou for the truth you give.
thankyou for your honestly.
thankyou for being you.
thankyou for loving me.

Originally posted by Lara
wow????? what!

that's intense......jeez........

ok now I'm like, MEGA CONFUSED

Pls! sm1 HELP me!

because of what?