stuff I've written!

I hate writing poems, but I can stand reading them.

Good stuff peeps.

Thanks

Your welcome. 🙂

At first I thought this was going to be a "Stories I've written" thread, but it's poems and songs.

Why doesn't anyone write stories!?

*goes insane*

Oh wait...Lauren writes stories...

*smiles and realizes something*

But she's not here...

*goes even more insane than the first time*

Hey, *I* write stories Rex! Remember?

Gordon, I have been writing for nearly 8 years. I didnt mean to patronise you, I was just offering some tips! not just for you, but for every one here.
no offence was intended.

I write stories too but there to long to type and some of my stories or not complete.

I tried story writing and it went really wrong so I stick with what I know.

Let us say I have been writing far longer than you Lara and have more practical experience in writing.

Yeah I tried writing song lyrics but it went terriblely wrong and so I converted it into a poem.Story writing hard because when your on page 12 and you decide to go back and change something on page 4 veerything after has to be changed to fit it.But I normally do poems.

can we stop the "I'm better than you" crap, cause thats not what I intended. I'm just good with words and getting them down on paper thats all, and I'm sure some of your stuff is better than mine. so, peace? *offers hand*

Aww, it was just getting interesting...

Well were all good at something guys some better then otherrs.

But when it comes to poems even if someone else doesn't think it's right or it makes no sense to someone else all that matters is that the person writing it understands for that should be he's only concern.

idd! some excell where others flounder.

Amen.

I'm trying to find another poem so everyone relaxes even though my poems aren't relaxing anyone of you got anything also to share.

Hey guys got anything else to share I'll try to look for a poem in my computer or think of one wrtie now.

No I ain't offended Lara.

ok, quick on the spot creation:

Realisation Dawning

the morning sunlight drenches my skin
for one second I forget about my kin.
I wipe my eyes,
then realise that it was all a dream.
the taps running!
some ones awake.
the space next to me is empty,
like it always has been.
the questions remain,
who will take away my pain?
who will fill the emptiness I feel?

Very nice Lara. I would post some more of my own but somehow I don't think I can take any more criticism at the moment.