stuff I've written!

We still on? We shall have to hope more posters add their thoughts in the morning! I don't think the two of us can carry this thread forever. 😄

Very much true GS.

Yes what we need is...fresh meat!

Yeah a new poster would enlighten this thread.

Um...what do you two mean?

We are looking for someone new to post his or her poetry/song lyrics for this thread so we can keep it up and running. We are on the verge of running out of new ideas ourselves.

Eyes of blue
Hair of brown
Princess of Sith
Destiny bound
Loves to hate
Hates to love
Fear of all
Fears for all
And yet she's torn
To be complete and feel right
She must make the choice
Dark or light
(((Okay I suck, If ya throw fruit make sure it's edible)))

Well I'll be out bro's hope this won't get deleted.

Anyways I think I'm a dark writer.

watching a bird
as a rainbow cracks the sky
a sun filled horizon
deceiving the eye
dazzling rain
as the wind
whispers my name
and the bird
starts to fly

Dont Push!

theres no in between,
theres only either end!
dont push me to the edge,
it's not my time to go.
follow the flow of water,
it leads to the way out.
if you lose your way.
dont bother to shout!

I'm on the out sinde looking in,
your the entertainment,
thats my sin!
you can look me in the eye,
but you'll find no emotion.
just a story telling how,
a heart got broken.

dont judge me,
I'm not what you think you see.
some tease, block and mock me,
people say:
let it be, let it be, let it be!
but in the end its just me!
dont try my patience,
dont push me!

I'm on the out sinde looking in,
your the entertainment,
thats my sin!
you can look me in the eye,
but you'll find no emotion.
just a story telling how,
a heart got broken.

I'm on the out sinde looking in,
your the entertainment,
thats my sin!
you can look me in the eye,
but you'll find no emotion.
just a story telling how,
a heart got broken.

unnatural origin of dreams

Dreams of unnatural origin,
So real and full of fear.
They make me jump in the night,
So frightened and fretful, I shed a tear.
I wonder if they’ll go away,
So I sit alone in the dark.
Somewhere I the distance I hear a dog bark.
The rain comes down hard,
As I drift to sleep again.
Only to jerk awake by some one calling my name.
They pressed down on my bed,
These dreams of unnatural origin,
So real and full of fear.
I wish they would just disappear.

Don’t let her go!

Whats going on?
Your there, I’m here.
We’re in the same place we were last year!
Have none of us learned?
We’ve all crashed and burned!
I have so much I want to say,
But the word just won’t come my way!
I remember the night you had to go,
The salt from my tears stung.
I’m up the ladder, your on the last rung.
I want to help but the gaps too wide!
That final night I cried and cried.

Don’t let her go!
Tell me, what went so wrong?
How long is it going to take?
For her sake, help us!
For her sake please,
Help us,
Help us, please, please, please!
Don’t let her go!

So much to do, so little time!
So little of it really mine.
Now its twenty past nine,
How much further do I have to climb?
Bring her back, she’s mine!
Don’t say she’s gone for a long, long time.
She’s mine, don’t make me climb,
Don’t make me leave her behind,
Don’t say its all in my mind!

Don’t let her go!
Tell me, what went so wrong?
How long is it going to take?
For her sake, help us!
For her sake please,
Help us,
Help us, please, please, please, please!
Don’t let her go!
Don’t let her go!
Please, please God! No!
Don’t let her go!

*bows to Lara*

Great stuff Lara really great stuff.

*nods in acknowledgement* thankyou
I like what you've written, I can see what point you were trying to make when you wrote it.

Thanks that means alot,very short though.But I'm glad you made this thread like I said before you guys are the first to read my stuff.

same here, this was the first place I posted any of my creative workings and I still continue to do so. you will get nothing but support here.

Yeah this place have many respectful people here so I can write freely like you Lara,and GS and Ush been very cool people.

*cuddles lara really really tight*
sis is all this hurt because of me i feel terible now i have read your beautiful poems
*holds head in hands and crys*

Hey did anyone besides Augey even read my contribution to this thread?

I did id was fantastic but my sisters were even better i fell I have causedall he hurt is it all my fault the first poem sounds like wha used to go on at home i feel terrible

Mine is amateurish compared to the ones written by Aug and Lara.