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Vanity
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i love it mario

Nov 25th, 2005 05:49 PM

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Sancty
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Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
Unforgivable

I gave you so much of my time
Trying To prove to you that I loved you
But what am I to do now
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my energy
Fighting to prove that I loved you
But what am I to do mow
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my trust
Believing to prove to you that I loved you
But what am I to do now
After you have played your games
And turned my love into hate
I gave you so much of my love
Caring to prove to you that loved you
And for what?
So you could play your games,
And turn my love into hate?

Way to make me feel bad! After reading this I feel SO guilty about earlier.. I really went to far...

Nov 25th, 2005 11:11 PM

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xtheusedxbillyx
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that poem is really good

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Nov 26th, 2005 04:42 AM

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bloody_tears
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Originally posted by Coldfire
I really liked that one

dats realli gd

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Coldfire
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Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.

I wanted so desperately to have
something I could write about
It seems no matter how many times
the lesson is thought
I never learn to be careful
If I seem a little bitter
It is because I am
I took a chance on someone
Opened up my heart once more
Only to be betrayed again
Like so many times before
Maybe it was her beauty
Maybe I just wanted to believe
But what does it matter
When my heart cannot find truth
And longs to remain broken

awww

It's good hun

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Nov 26th, 2005 05:47 AM

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XjainaX
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I love it, your poems are so great, I love them!!!

V. intense
V. beautiful

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Nov 26th, 2005 03:20 PM

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Dante Vlada
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ty to all of you.

Nov 28th, 2005 01:04 AM

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Dante Vlada
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Nothing Left

Countless times in my mind
I have questioned if we were friends
I kept my many doubts unspoken
So afraid of what you might think
The person I taught myself to be
Always thought it best to ranaway from truth
I have learned that only leads me in circles
Repeating past mistakes over and over
When last we spoke I realized
This charade could no longer be upheld
I am hoping these words will not fall upon deaf ears
And you accept them without much offense
If our friendship does not survive this
Then I guess we never were truly friends

Dec 2nd, 2005 04:53 PM

Kharhmah
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I really like that one. yes

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and now I die..

Dec 2nd, 2005 08:05 PM

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Dante Vlada
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Kharhmah
I really like that one.

Thank You "woman" laughing

Dec 2nd, 2005 08:16 PM

XjainaX
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Location: City of LIfe

cool poem... love it, tis gud

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Dec 2nd, 2005 08:46 PM

Kharhmah
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
Thank You "woman"

Your welcome.

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and now I die..

Dec 2nd, 2005 08:57 PM

Dante Vlada
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by starmovie-jaina
cool poem... love it, tis gud

that makes 2 ppl who read it. happy

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Originally posted by Kharhmah
Your welcome.

Dec 5th, 2005 03:04 PM

Unknown Girl
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v good as always smile

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Dec 6th, 2005 11:01 PM

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Dante Vlada
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Originally posted by Unknown Girl
v good as always

Thnx. I have had the worst case of writer's block lately. It was nice ti finally ge something down on paper. Amyways, I am working on something new ATM. I sure hope it does turn out to be craptacular. lol

Dec 7th, 2005 02:30 PM

sweetness
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I love them all....they are so good

Dec 8th, 2005 12:17 AM

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Syren
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by xtheusedxbillyx
that poem is really good

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Originally posted by bloody_tears
dats realli gd

Check out these two, it's like seeing double

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Dec 10th, 2005 12:15 PM

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Tha C-Master
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nice mario....

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Dec 10th, 2005 09:25 PM

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Dante Vlada
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thnx

I still cant think of anything to write

Dec 12th, 2005 02:44 PM

Dante Vlada
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Searching For Words To Explain

Lately I have not had a lot to write about
It would only be me being me
To question why that might be
It is a saddening thought to think
That my life has lost all of it's spontaneity
I remember times when smiling came easy
And although crying isn't pleasant
At least I felt some type of emotion
I guess my life could be
Summed up as a ballad-less ballad
Confusion has been a part of me for such a long time
That now I cannot shake the feeling
That a piece of me is somehow forever lost
How am I ever to be whole in the proverbial sense
When what I am missing is forgotten

Dec 16th, 2005 01:11 PM

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