Why is it so F#$#@@@!!! hard to live in this world?

Originally posted by justjakk
dude.....i just noticed...if you put all your stuff together back to back..its almost like a story......

spike said we needed to talk more.........i never knew that all i rally needed was to read your poetry....

you really do love this girl....yanno how i doubted my kills and said i needed to listen to my friends when they tell me im good.......dude, if you dont tell this girl how you feel, she may not be there forever.....you remember i told you about the one that got away from me...she is in florida now with some guy i would have killed if i saw him around her...but yanno i missed my shot cuase i didnt think i had a shot. i was wrong...dont lose what i did.

Originally posted by Coldfire
You and your rhyming, its just so great ✅

That's right don't argue with me! 😉 😛 lol

Hahaha that's right cuz you know I'd win 😛 😉 😂

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
OK the ODE TO PIP (sorry gals ) SHOULD be an Ode to Diamond Eyes..... my mistake...

more to come soon.

thanks for the ode 😉 was unexpected I must say lol

Beautiful stuff all around! Especially this:

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Here is my heart ripped from my chest,
I give it to you expecting the best,
Can you treat it with care and soothe it's pain?
Will you toss it away in the downpouring rain?
It still beats strong, but erratically so,
The torture and torment beat it down slow,
No quick release no easy injuries,
Just a slow death from this gnawing disease,
For the love I love kills me slowly inside,
I take all your pain into me to hide,
But forgetting its yours rips the tear anew,
I cannot now give it back to you.
As I feel the pain and become confused,
The blood and poison mingle and ooze,
Down this cut below my breast,
I can only stare at my mangled chest,
And the beating bastardly heart, that traitorous beast,
It is still with me, finding no release,
For you do not care that I wither and die,
And turn away as glaze films over my eyes,
Even when I shiver with the chill of my bloody loss,
I knew before I paid what would be the cost,
Like a fool I accepted and signed with my blood,
And like a fool didn't see how you cannot love.

quite emotional 😄

he is a great one......

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Here is my heart ripped from my chest,
I give it to you expecting the best,
Can you treat it with care and soothe it's pain?
Will you toss it away in the downpouring rain?
It still beats strong, but erratically so,
The torture and torment beat it down slow,
No quick release no easy injuries,
Just a slow death from this gnawing disease,
For the love I love kills me slowly inside,
I take all your pain into me to hide,
But forgetting its yours rips the tear anew,
I cannot now give it back to you.
As I feel the pain and become confused,
The blood and poison mingle and ooze,
Down this cut below my breast,
I can only stare at my mangled chest,
And the beating bastardly heart, that traitorous beast,
It is still with me, finding no release,
For you do not care that I wither and die,
And turn away as glaze films over my eyes,
Even when I shiver with the chill of my bloody loss,
I knew before I paid what would be the cost,
Like a fool I accepted and signed with my blood,
And like a fool didn't see how you cannot love.

Originally posted by Coldfire
Hahaha that's right cuz you know I'd win 😛 😉 😂

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
not. hahahhahhaa
Thank you all. That poem, I call it Rent, is just about how I felt yesterday. ha... didn't think that it would hit all of you as well.

Ok, new stuff!!!

A face stained with tears and a mind clouded by fear,
The makeup runs down a shaking cheek, the blade quivers as it seeks,
Deafened ears heed not a warning cry, Once moist eyes becoming dry,
A delicate hand trembling quick, she stares at the blade, the edge, it's slick,
Trying it first on your hair, falling strands of golden fair,
Pushing towards the pulsing vein, You see an outlet for your pain,
But think now of that far away voice! It calls to you, begs a choice,
Reminding you that though Yours ends, OUR pain begins.
Your tears dry salty trails, ignoring our own new ones, our wails,
Please pause the pull of steel on flesh, reawaken your mind, see the world refreshed,
Feel again, and feel the hand, clasping your own in his, this man,
The bitter tears he weeps on you, close the wound, sew the hew,
Shatter the blade upon a touch, see this love? how deep? how much?
Not wanting anything from you but this; stay with him here, in the mist,
The moon shines again in your world dark and bleak, the light burst through, the one you seek,
Now even though he holds pain inside, he holds you closer, he's bonafide,
Rest easy in comforting arms, beating heart hear, feel no pain, no sadness, no fear.
Close tired eyes, the wound is healed, your pain soon gone, you hope sealed,
When you awake, he'll be gone, but leave you with this special song,
And when you need of his help once more, sing a line, he'll arrive like before,
A dragon swooping down from the skies, setting softly from wings on high,
You'll watch his form melt into a man, and once again, he'll hold your hand,
When this world your hearts starts to chafe, he'll be there to keep you safe.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Ok, new stuff!!!

A face stained with tears and a mind clouded by fear,
The makeup runs down a shaking cheek, the blade quivers as it seeks,
Deafened ears heed not a warning cry, Once moist eyes becoming dry,
A delicate hand trembling quick, she stares at the blade, the edge, it's slick,
Trying it first on your hair, falling strands of golden fair,
Pushing towards the pulsing vein, You see an outlet for your pain,
But think now of that far away voice! It calls to you, begs a choice,
Reminding you that though Yours ends, OUR pain begins.
Your tears dry salty trails, ignoring our own new ones, our wails,
Please pause the pull of steel on flesh, reawaken your mind, see the world refreshed,
Feel again, and feel the hand, clasping your own in his, this man,
The bitter tears he weeps on you, close the wound, sew the hew,
Shatter the blade upon a touch, see this love? how deep? how much?
Not wanting anything from you but this; stay with him here, in the mist,
The moon shines again in your world dark and bleak, the light burst through, the one you seek,
Now even though he holds pain inside, he holds you closer, he's bonafide,
Rest easy in comforting arms, beating heart hear, feel no pain, no sadness, no fear.
Close tired eyes, the wound is healed, your pain soon gone, you hope sealed,
When you awake, he'll be gone, but leave you with this special song,
And when you need of his help once more, sing a line, he'll arrive like before,
A dragon swooping down from the skies, setting softly from wings on high,
You'll watch his form melt into a man, and once again, he'll hold your hand,
When this world your hearts starts to chafe, he'll be there to keep you safe.

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol well it did ✅ Hope you're feeling lots better today hug

Why Give a Damn?

I am asked a simple question, by my own mind and others.
Why do I care so much for my earthly sisters and brothers?
A simple question asking such a complex thought:
Do I care too often, too much, much more than I ought?
I tell you this true, as an angel from the light,
I did not choose, but I will gladly battle this fight,
So much hurt, so many souls in anguish amongst you.
I was chosen to wage war and protect thee through.
My power is great; what mighty forces I wield!
But I can only use them as a guard, your shield.
Regardless of the cost to my soul, body or heart,
I shall finish the work God chose me to start.

For all the souls I defend, have defended, will defend.
And all those I love, loved and will love.
You may scorn, hate, deride, ignore, or forget me,
But my loving wings will always cover thee.
This I swear!

Tanks cold. and another one, Finished on break today.

Kneel and laugh with me, dry those tears that fall,
Throw back your head with glee, I'll catch you if you bawl,
Find joy again in life and smile, That beautiful (mous) smile you use,
Sit with me here a while, this offer please don't refuse,
Clear those gems once clouded by doubt, make them sparkle again,
Release your pain with a great shout! Your soul's peace now reawaken.

Hold my hand, grasp my waist, now dance about this glade,
See the green, feel the peace, we dance 'till the moonlight fades,
Now as the sun begins it's run to chase off the darkness,
I kneel before I disappear, take your hand, and it kiss,
While I fade with the shadows, I 'll smile for you, bright.
And promise you:"My word true, I'll see you again tonight."

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Sorta mostly... hahaha here is another one.

Why Give a Damn?

I am asked a simple question, by my own mind and others.
Why do I care so much for my earthly sisters and brothers?
A simple question asking such a complex thought:
Do I care too often, too much, much more than I ought?
I tell you this true, as an angel from the light,
I did not choose, but I will gladly battle this fight,
So much hurt, so many souls in anguish amongst you.
I was chosen to wage war and protect thee through.
My power is great; what mighty forces I wield!
But I can only use them as a guard, your shield.
Regardless of the cost to my soul, body or heart,
I shall finish the work God chose me to start.

For all the souls I defend, have defended, will defend.
And all those I love, loved and will love.
You may scorn, hate, deride, ignore, or forget me,
But my loving wings will always cover thee.
This I swear!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Sorta mostly... hahaha here is another one.

Why Give a Damn?

I am asked a simple question, by my own mind and others.
Why do I care so much for my earthly sisters and brothers?
A simple question asking such a complex thought:
Do I care too often, too much, much more than I ought?
I tell you this true, as an angel from the light,
I did not choose, but I will gladly battle this fight,
So much hurt, so many souls in anguish amongst you.
I was chosen to wage war and protect thee through.
My power is great; what mighty forces I wield!
But I can only use them as a guard, your shield.
Regardless of the cost to my soul, body or heart,
I shall finish the work God chose me to start.

For all the souls I defend, have defended, will defend.
And all those I love, loved and will love.
You may scorn, hate, deride, ignore, or forget me,
But my loving wings will always cover thee.
This I swear!

👆

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Tanks cold. and another one, Finished on break today.

Kneel and laugh with me, dry those tears that fall,
Throw back your head with glee, I'll catch you if you bawl,
Find joy again in life and smile, That beautiful (mous) smile you use,
Sit with me here a while, this offer please don't refuse,
Clear those gems once clouded by doubt, make them sparkle again,
Release your pain with a great shout! Your soul's peace now reawaken.

Hold my hand, grasp my waist, now dance about this glade,
See the green, feel the peace, we dance 'till the moonlight fades,
Now as the sun begins it's run to chase off the darkness,
I kneel before I disappear, take your hand, and it kiss,
While I fade with the shadows, I 'll smile for you, bright.
And promise you:"My word true, I'll see you again tonight."

Wow, 😱 I just read that one, Bravo man, that's beautiful.

Your writing reminds me a little bit of mine.

😂 thanks guys (and doll) hahaha! hey, who knows, mebbe a nice gal will read this stuff and think i am actually alright?! hahahahahha! more to come!

So glad you are gettin to your feet,
Stand tall and proud M'lady please!
Feel you are worthy once again,
And blessed among all women
For you have been to the end,
Against you has man sinned,
Yet you now rise, and rise above,
And yet again, you may find love,
So be strong and true like you are,
And I tell you now you will go far.
Trust in me ma cheri,
You're something special, You WILL BE.

If you cant figure who that is for, pay attention to folks better yo. Am, it IS yours alone. thanks for being you. hahahaha

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
😂 thanks guys (and doll) hahaha! hey, who knows, mebbe a nice gal will read this stuff and think i am actually alright?! hahahahahha! more to come!

you mean they will think you have a deaper side??? joking... crash, sup? whats your username? and sign into msn IM. i dont think the adding me worked. i dunno if maybe i hit the wrong button or something.