Originally posted by justjakk
you mean they will think you have a deaper side??? joking... crash, sup? whats your username? and sign into msn IM. i dont think the adding me worked. i dunno if maybe i hit the wrong button or something.
Now I am confused, because what you say and what you do,
They don't agree with my instinct, but, hell, what do I have to lose?
I can be there and be with you and hang around and waste my time,
Or I can leave and run away, never try. Giving up is such a crime!
I may end up wishing to curse my birth, but that choice is up to me,
So in the meantime, here I am, here for you, willing, ready.
Let's go out, let's dance about, play some pool, have a drink,
And while you walk up to the bar, I'll sit down here, smoke and think,
Twirl my hands through this haze as I play out the possibilities,
And who knows? Maybe you could actually like me for me.
I promise I will no longer scoff at that Idea some hold true,
For if you like me for me, I can like you for you.
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Tanks cold. and another one, Finished on break today.Kneel and laugh with me, dry those tears that fall,
Throw back your head with glee, I'll catch you if you bawl,
Find joy again in life and smile, That beautiful (mous) smile you use,
Sit with me here a while, this offer please don't refuse,
Clear those gems once clouded by doubt, make them sparkle again,
Release your pain with a great shout! Your soul's peace now reawaken.Hold my hand, grasp my waist, now dance about this glade,
See the green, feel the peace, we dance 'till the moonlight fades,
Now as the sun begins it's run to chase off the darkness,
I kneel before I disappear, take your hand, and it kiss,
While I fade with the shadows, I 'll smile for you, bright.
And promise you:"My word true, I'll see you again tonight."
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
So glad you are gettin to your feet,
Stand tall and proud M'lady please!
Feel you are worthy once again,
And blessed among all women
For you have been to the end,
Against you has man sinned,
Yet you now rise, and rise above,
And yet again, you may find love,
So be strong and true like you are,
And I tell you now you will go far.
Trust in me ma cheri,
You're something special, You WILL BE.
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
😂 thanks guys (and doll) hahaha! hey, who knows, mebbe a nice gal will read this stuff and think i am actually alright?! hahahahahha! more to come!
So cute and small, and smiling wide,
As you look up at me for a piggy-back ride,
And telling me no just like mommy taught you,
Dang it you are just too cute.
And though you guys are so far from me,
In my head and heart you'll always be,
I'll remember the laughs and forget the tears.
Hey, who knows? Mebbe I'll see you in a few years.
You will have grown up into fine young folks,
And I'll make you laugh with my corny jokes,
I feel like you are two of my own,
Flesh of my flesh, bone of my bone,
And though I cannot be there for real,
If you tap into your spirit, my love you'll feel.
When you dream at night, I'll keep you safe,
Wings spread wide, no nightmares or aches,
Just sweet little fantasies of toys and games,
Bob the Builder, Sesame Street, soft rains.
And when you rise to awake the day,
My image may fade, my heart will stay.
For P and D, my little neice and nephew. So far away, yet so close. BE safe, you two! 😄
If you look at this, tell me what you think.
If we were to kiss, would it be a potent drink?
If my touch could set you afire,
Would you give into your desire?
If my eyes reflected the flames in your own,
Would you reap what you have sewn?
Could you take the heat, the power,
Night to night, hour to hour?
Can YOU handle ME?
(BTW, heh... this and the next came to me while listening to Garbage the rock band about 5 minutes ago.... hahaha so they aren't what I would typically write... heh....) 😮 😄
This is for a lady I know irl... can't say who, but ha see what my imagination can conjure up?
We talked and shared our war stories of life and pain,
Discussing future plans that could be shared.
I just wanted to lean over and kiss you deep.
I see eyes that rivet me in space and time.
A smile so rarely given I cherish like pearls.
Your body that I want to hold tightly
You.
Then you started talking to me of what you saw.
It put me in shock, awed that you could view so deep.
How can you pass my barrier?
Then I remembered you saw my eyes fully, without shadows.
I had let you stare so far in it took me by suprise.
I felt your breath on my face, you were so close.
Our eyes mirror such similarities it is as yang found yin,
You fit pieces of me that I equally fit you.
Wild.
Now I am left wanting more, of you, and your works.
I would like to see what you see in me fully.
Can you feel the wings that fold away to hide my good,
And see the same time the lightning flashing in my eyes of bad?
Can you handle me without any masks, just pure and me?
Could you kiss me deep without losing your breath?
Could I you?
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Ha.... I'll pm you the one I can't post. It isn't like gross or perverse, but it is..... intense. haha. yeah, intense.
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
This is for a lady I know irl... can't say who, but ha see what my imagination can conjure up?We talked and shared our war stories of life and pain,
Discussing future plans that could be shared.
I just wanted to lean over and kiss you deep.
I see eyes that rivet me in space and time.
A smile so rarely given I cherish like pearls.
Your body that I want to hold tightly
You.Then you started talking to me of what you saw.
It put me in shock, awed that you could view so deep.
How can you pass my barrier?
Then I remembered you saw my eyes fully, without shadows.
I had let you stare so far in it took me by suprise.
I felt your breath on my face, you were so close.
Our eyes mirror such similarities it is as yang found yin,
You fit pieces of me that I equally fit you.
Wild.Now I am left wanting more, of you, and your works.
I would like to see what you see in me fully.
Can you feel the wings that fold away to hide my good,
And see the same time the lightning flashing in my eyes of bad?
Can you handle me without any masks, just pure and me?
Could you kiss me deep without losing your breath?
Could I you?
finally caught up lol, great stuff I've been completely engrossed like that last one alot. I cant say I have a favorite because they are all so excellent. and I can see the point from which your writting too which is some thing I'm finding hard to get my head around cuz its so rare for me. keep writting. have you ever thought of publishing your work DW?
I have, just dont actually know how to go about it. never looked into it. TY both.
Ruth, you know why I wrote this.
I am so confused and concerned,
The more I stay the more I burn,
Being with you is like riding the wind.
You have stolen away my heart,
Guarded well from the start,
And now I simply want to know the end.
Is this fake or real what the hell is wrong with me?
Is my mind losing it, why can I not see?
I feel cooler than cold with you,
But also butterfly stomached too,
Why do I feel so f@#$@@! lost?
Should I run and hide away,
Or let you know what I know today,
Am I ready to pay this cost?
I can't seem to get my hands back on the ledge.
The more I struggle the farther I go off the edge,
I am lost and falling into a maelstrom of confusion,
Now my mind cries out what the hell have I done?
I am eaten up by these feelings I shouldn't have,
If I bothered to open up would you even listen?
Or, what I bet on, Just give me the shaft?
Will I even be missed then?
I don't call this love, I have never been there.
All I know is how I feel whenever you're near.
And the confusion of it all that courses through my veins
Is worse and greater than the best drugs and birth pains.
Am I losing it am I finally going mad?
This song is how I feel right now. It is by Dishwalla, and is called So Blind. http://display.lyrics.astraweb.com:2000/display.cgi?dishwalla..and_you_think_you_know_what_lifes_about..so_blind
Specifically, this verse:
She makes me feel
Like a man in a spaceship going down
Where no one has gone before
Far away so far away from here...
HAhahahaha..... well, as a woman would have it, my aunt is telling me i should send the last poem to the gal I wrote it for.... and I dunno. hahaha.... oi... dontcha just love being so confused?
So anyway, here is more.
I'm not afraid of the consequences,
I'd just rather not hurt you.
You've bypassed my defenses,
And You'll see it soon.
My soul is an open book,
If you'd simply see my eyes,
If I ever let you look,
Would you feel truly suprised?
I do my best to shadow them,
Hidden in the darkness to save me,
Was this righteous or sin?
Do I not give you enough credit baby?
If I show you this feeling of mine,
Will you run like others before?
It isn't the same, different this time,
It burns strangely, hurting less, yet more!
When you catch glimpses into my soul,
Do you shudder or lean in for the rest?
Might you be able to see me whole?
Can you pass this simple test?
Simple yet hard, for you see,
Even if you can withstand my stare,
You must then deal with me,
Can you, will you, do you dare?
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
I have, just dont actually know how to go about it. never looked into it. TY both.Ruth, you know why I wrote this.
I am so confused and concerned,
The more I stay the more I burn,
Being with you is like riding the wind.
You have stolen away my heart,
Guarded well from the start,
And now I simply want to know the end.Is this fake or real what the hell is wrong with me?
Is my mind losing it, why can I not see?I feel cooler than cold with you,
But also butterfly stomached too,
Why do I feel so f@#$@@! lost?
Should I run and hide away,
Or let you know what I know today,
Am I ready to pay this cost?I can't seem to get my hands back on the ledge.
The more I struggle the farther I go off the edge,
I am lost and falling into a maelstrom of confusion,
Now my mind cries out what the hell have I done?I am eaten up by these feelings I shouldn't have,
If I bothered to open up would you even listen?
Or, what I bet on, Just give me the shaft?
Will I even be missed then?I don't call this love, I have never been there.
All I know is how I feel whenever you're near.
And the confusion of it all that courses through my veins
Is worse and greater than the best drugs and birth pains.Am I losing it am I finally going mad?
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
HAhahahaha..... well, as a woman would have it, my aunt is telling me i should send the last poem to the gal I wrote it for.... and I dunno. hahaha.... oi... dontcha just love being so confused?So anyway, here is more.
I'm not afraid of the consequences,
I'd just rather not hurt you.
You've bypassed my defenses,
And You'll see it soon.
My soul is an open book,
If you'd simply see my eyes,
If I ever let you look,
Would you feel truly suprised?
I do my best to shadow them,
Hidden in the darkness to save me,
Was this righteous or sin?
Do I not give you enough credit baby?
If I show you this feeling of mine,
Will you run like others before?
It isn't the same, different this time,
It burns strangely, hurting less, yet more!
When you catch glimpses into my soul,
Do you shudder or lean in for the rest?
Might you be able to see me whole?
Can you pass this simple test?
Simple yet hard, for you see,
Even if you can withstand my stare,
You must then deal with me,
Can you, will you, do you dare?
Originally posted by Coldfire
Omg words that described me so well before....Lol I wish I knew more guys like you.... immature bunch of retards they all are 😛
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Hahahaha... well ty. Thank you M'lady Cold, also, for the fan-freaking-tastic poem that you wrote. I am like I told you, in wow and astonished.... I was gonna write some, but that one is out the window, cause all trains of thought went right off track when I read your stuff. Very deeply in your debt.