Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

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thx tassie but not yet

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You have the talent to hun 🙂 But you're welcome to use mine for a while yet if you like

Originally posted by supernovadragon
thx tassie but not yet

ok, but you're pretty good. 🙂

Originally posted by Elessea
Tassie....get one msn 😛

I AM, you're not.. 😛

Originally posted by Tassie
ok, but you're pretty good. 🙂

I AM, you're not.. 😛


You WERE NOt when I typed that several hours ago 😛 silly girl.

i will oneday
thx coldfire
do i own u any rent tho lol

Thinking of u
Ur always there
Not physically but in spirit
When life has me down i think of u and i can carry on
Ur there during my classes at skool
U keep me going
So this is a little thank u
For u Coldfire
For always being there.
Plz make your comments
Good or bad

Gen Grievous
Solomn Guardian
Great ally
Someone to be talking to
Cos its a laugh a minute
Almost always there
Never giving up
Yea dats right this is a shout out to the man himself

Shot2gunsdeathrifle
sniper😇
The pain
The agony
The need to countinue
I feel like collapsing
And lying of the ground
But i see my allys
I Must keep running
I must Escape
I must Escape
I must survive
I must be free
The heavy footsteps of my killers
They r basically breathing down my neck
If i stop or slow down im dead
Im almost to my friends
They open fire
They mow down the soldiers
I am safe
I collapse
I LIVE
Ok this was on the spot like most of my poems but yea
Plz comment

Beautiful poetry Amber nice work. James has written some nice stuff too. And i recently wrote my first poem so it may suck. since this is coldfires poetry i wont post any more than one.
in_love
I care for you deeply, forever I will
Just to be beside, to hold you forever
There will always be a place for you deep in my heart
I have always loved you right from the start
This love is forbidden, my heart aches for you
A moment without you is like living in darkness, a long cold winter
Without my bright sun, I must be strong hold on to the memories
In my lifetime I want to hold you at least once, feel your sweet embrace
And your loving touch.
Is it any good? be as honest as you wish.

thats good adam ✅ keep it up

Originally posted by supernovadragon
i will oneday
thx coldfire
do i own u any rent tho lol

Haha yeah like $25 bucks a poem! 😂 Nah you owe nothing but some more of your poetry 😊
Originally posted by Gen. Grievous
Beautiful poetry Amber nice work. James has written some nice stuff too. And i recently wrote my first poem so it may suck. since this is coldfires poetry i wont post any more than one.
in_love
I care for you deeply, forever I will
Just to be beside, to hold you forever
There will always be a place for you deep in my heart
I have always loved you right from the start
This love is forbidden, my heart aches for you
A moment without you is like living in darkness, a long cold winter
Without my bright sun, I must be strong hold on to the memories
In my lifetime I want to hold you at least once, feel your sweet embrace
And your loving touch.
Is it any good? be as honest as you wish.

😱 Omg that was so sweet 😄 And your welcome to use my thread if you wish 🙂

And good stuff James 😊

What Does It Matter?

Society these days has,
Spiralled so far out of control,
That I fear it will never,
Pick itself back up again.
One of our most powerful,
And primal emotions,
Has been given rules that,
Should be specifically followed,
So that even in romance,
Our free will is being,
Snatched away from our grasp,
Age is especially,
A very touchy area,
And one that has been,
Subject to much debating.
A few years age difference between,
The man and the woman dating,
Is overlooked without any fuss,
However, if there is any more,
Than only a couple of years,
Everyone cries out in revolt and disgust.
Why is this?
Why should two people,
Deeply in love, be judged,
Just because one is,
Older than the other?
Does it make one a pervert,
And the other an innocent victim?
Is it comparable to incest,
Or prostitution, or rape?
Why is it wrong if both partners,
Are consenting and want to be together?
That is the problem,
With the world these days;
Everyone is much too opinionated,
And each person thinks,
What they believe is right.
No wonder there is so much,
Fighting and war on earth;
We cannot let anyone,
Wound our foolish pride,
And if it is injured well,
There will be hell to pay for sure.

🙂 Aww....that was nice cold ✅ and I agree....

((you should post some more stuff on your deviant accoutn....mrahw 😖hifty: 🙂))

Originally posted by Elessea
🙂 Aww....that was nice cold ✅ and I agree....

((you should post some more stuff on your deviant accoutn....mrahw 😖hifty: 🙂))


Thanks 😊

And I just posted 2 there 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
Thanks 😊

And I just posted 2 there 😛


I knows...I read them (( I fail at leaving comments though bag)) Have you read my recent stuff.....I'm curious as to what people thing of is 😖

Hunted
There is something out there
Its trying to get me
Its will shoot to kill
It will shoot merciless
It will hunt me down and kill me were i stand
Its on the hunt
Im on the run
Our destinys shall cross
And when they do i hope it is as friendssniper
Yea plz comment

Originally posted by Coldfire
Haha yeah like $25 bucks a poem! 😂 Nah you owe nothing but some more of your poetry 😊

And good stuff James 😊

Thx Coldfire

Slaughter
HAHAHAHAHA
None will survive
I walk up
Hangun in my left and a knife in my right hand
I get to the front of them they stare at me
They dont see my weapons
I stare back at the fat overpaid bussienseman and woman
They pretend they r invincible
But once that lead touchs them im sure they wont
And only then will they feel small and vunerable like everyone else
Then Bang BANG BANG
I let off a clip
Some emotion come to me
But i dont relise
The emotion of pity
Till its to late2guns
Some of my poem r based on my real life experinces
(can ya guess which ones 😉 😛 😂 😆 )

hahaha..... man, get out and start a thread! you will go far. hahaha hey Cold, good work. All of ya. hahaha.