Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

Thx to everybody who said that i should start a thread but will u all come and will it rival coldfire's

Originally posted by supernovadragon
Thinking of u
Ur always there
Not physically but in spirit
When life has me down i think of u and i can carry on
Ur there during my classes at skool
U keep me going
So this is a little thank u
For u Coldfire
For always being there.
Plz make your comments
Good or bad

Originally posted by Gen. Grievous
Beautiful poetry Amber nice work. James has written some nice stuff too. And i recently wrote my first poem so it may suck. since this is coldfires poetry i wont post any more than one.
in_love
I care for you deeply, forever I will
Just to be beside, to hold you forever
There will always be a place for you deep in my heart
I have always loved you right from the start
This love is forbidden, my heart aches for you
A moment without you is like living in darkness, a long cold winter
Without my bright sun, I must be strong hold on to the memories
In my lifetime I want to hold you at least once, feel your sweet embrace
And your loving touch.
Is it any good? be as honest as you wish.

😐............................dontgetit.......................🤨

That bad huh?

Originally posted by Gen. Grievous
That bad huh?

Betrayal
A Friendship now killed
A hope now faded
A life now shattered
This is based on my personal experincec
😐

Originally posted by supernovadragon
Betrayal
A Friendship now killed
A hope now faded
A life now shattered
This is based on my personal experincec
😐

Yea it is a personal experiance but iv neva told u about it adam
closedeyes

In the cold
Im out side in the cold
but im not cold
im warm with the thought of u
u keep me Warm and
u keep me going
So thank u Coldfire
For always being there
😱 ✅

🤨..........................glare

Originally posted by Fëanor
🤨..........................glare

hug

Originally posted by Fëanor
🤨..........................glare

Good stuff all 😊

Elessea- I didn't read your new stuff... yet 🙂

Originally posted by Coldfire
Shush dear hug 😍

Originally posted by Fëanor
🤨..........................glare

Originally posted by supernovadragon
OK....we can go with that

He knows how I adore him 😍

Human Nature

A small kitten,
Curled up in my lap,
Fast asleep,
So cute, so sweet,
So innocent, so vulnerable,
Putting all of its trust,
Into a human,
Feeling completely safe.
Could we be like that,
Having our guard down,
Every waking minute?
The answer of course is no,
For if we were like kittens,
We would all be dead,
Because the human race,
Is cruel and conniving,
Two-faced and unloyal,
Changing sides as soon,
As a better deal appears.
How we have survived,
Long after some species,
Have fallen into extinction,
Is because we simply cannot,
Have anyone or anything better,
Than we think we ourselves are,
Because we’ve been programmed to dominate,
And any price we have to pay,
Will be paid without any care at all.

Your poem is to true

yea it is

~I have football practice so I wont be on much~

Originally posted by Coldfire
Human Nature

A small kitten,
Curled up in my lap,
Fast asleep,
So cute, so sweet,
So innocent, so vulnerable,
Putting all of its trust,
Into a human,
Feeling completely safe.
Could we be like that,
Having our guard down,
Every waking minute?
The answer of course is no,
For if we were like kittens,
We would all be dead,
Because the human race,
Is cruel and conniving,
Two-faced and unloyal,
Changing sides as soon,
As a better deal appears.
How we have survived,
Long after some species,
Have fallen into extinction,
Is because we simply cannot,
Have anyone or anything better,
Than we think we ourselves are,
Because we’ve been programmed to dominate,
And any price we have to pay,
Will be paid without any care at all.

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