Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

Started by supernovadragon90 pages

Assasin
Creeping slowly in the darkness
hidden in the shadows
He waits for the right moment
on which to make his move
He finds his target
Attaches the silencer to his pistol
and pulls the trigger
the trigger makes the hammer strike and the bullet is away
It hits the target in the head and strait into the brain
One shot was all it took
Ok thats it Plz comment

Cold, very nice. Bossk(SND), hahahaha man yeah, we will come and read. hahaha!

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Your poem is to true

Originally posted by supernovadragon
yea it is

Thanks 😊
Originally posted by Sveny
~I have football practice so I wont be on much~

Awww we'll miss ya Sveny
Originally posted by Oiram62205
cat?

no comment


lol

Originally posted by supernovadragon
Assasin
Creeping slowly in the darkness
hidden in the shadows
He waits for the right moment
on which to make his move
He finds his target
Attaches the silencer to his pistol
and pulls the trigger
the trigger makes the hammer strike and the bullet is away
It hits the target in the head and strait into the brain
One shot was all it took
Ok thats it Plz comment

Lol I can guess where you got the idea for that 😛 Nice 🙂

Just wanted to let you know that I won't be around after today until either Sunday night or Monday morning.... Goin camping again 😛

alright ill miss u amber

Originally posted by supernovadragon
alright ill miss u amber

I'll miss ya too hun 🙂 I'll miss all of ya ✅

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol I can guess where you got the idea for that 😛 Nice 🙂

Just wanted to let you know that I won't be around after today until either Sunday night or Monday morning.... Goin camping again 😛


okies tty then

wow...its so weird to go back and read your first few poems, and then read your most recent

(no offence- I'm not tyring to say you used to suck or anything) but you have improved SOO much in just a few month 😊 its really neat to look at 😱

yea

Originally posted by Elessea
wow...its so weird to go back and read your first few poems, and then read your most recent

(no offence- I'm not tyring to say you used to suck or anything) but you have improved SOO much in just a few month 😊 its really neat to look at 😱

same^
I really like the message of the last one. 😊 I'm always up for stabbing at the human race. 😉

Originally posted by Elessea
wow...its so weird to go back and read your first few poems, and then read your most recent

(no offence- I'm not tyring to say you used to suck or anything) but you have improved SOO much in just a few month 😊 its really neat to look at 😱


Originally posted by supernovadragon
yea

😱 Thanks! 😄 hug
Originally posted by Tassie
same^
I really like the message of the last one. 😊 I'm always up for stabbing at the human race. 😉

Lol me too haha

hahahaaha.... hey, humans aren't that bad... well, yeah, they kinda are... hahaha (yes, i am not human, i am IMMORTAL! hahahahhahhaha! 😉)

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahahaaha.... hey, humans aren't that bad... well, yeah, they kinda are... hahaha (yes, i am not human, i am IMMORTAL! hahahahhahhaha! 😉)

Hey that makes 2 of us

3 of us 😛
or at least a self-hating antihuman o.o

4 😱

hahahahahha yeah, and how many of you are SERIOUS? hahahah!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahahahahha yeah, and how many of you are SERIOUS? hahahah!

Me of course ✅ 😛 We Elves are immortal as everyone knows 😄

So are Pirates 🙂

Originally posted by Elessea
So are Pirates 🙂

✅ 😛

Here's a poem that kinda came out of nowhere...

Heart's Demise

My heart jumped off the edge,
Beating strongly with love,
Spreading its wings in utter joy,
For it knew that with your love,
It could flap its wings and fly,
Soaring away with you at its side,
But as it reached out for you,
Longing for you to join it in flight,
You turned away from it,
Looking towards another heart,
Leaving mine to fend for itself,
And suddenly it could no longer fly,
Its wings shriveling and turning black,
No longer supporting its weight,
And it began to fall so fast,
Desperately flapping broken wings,
But it kept on falling downwards,
And there, far beneath it,
Were many sharp, tall stones,
Littering the harsh and lonely ground,
My heart cried out for help,
But you ignored it for the other,
And then the ground met it,
As it was punctured again and again,
By those cruel and evil stones,
Blood spattering everywhere at once,
My heart screaming once in agony,
Twitching as pain raced through it,
Then my heart was completely still.
You, you unthinking, uncaring man,
Have murdered my poor, trusting heart.