My.....intresting...attempt at poetry COME READ!!!

Since I currently have nothing to do and write peoms constantly this is going to be my outlet. So feedback would be nice thaks. ^_^

DREAMS
If dreams were really real
I would soar
Above the clouds
Reach for the moon
And fall down back down into fairyland

If dreams were really real
You wouldn’t see me
I’d be invisible
Taking a peek
At the secrets
Of the world

If dreams were really real
The sky would be at my command
The moon and the stars would dance
For me
Only me

If dreams were really real
I’d be the only one to hear
The winds rustle though
The trees
Telling their unheard secrets

If dreams were really real
People wouldn’t laugh
At the sight of me
And the world
Would be my plaything

Newborn
So softly now
I hear it beating
So gently now
I touch its skin
Like a fleece comforter it feels
Smells like baby powder
I stare in wonder
At the baby in my arms
The newborn sister I had acquired
Feeling the jealousy and envy melt away
As I realize all of that was pointless
Nothing mattered
When I held her
So softly now

Silence
The silence is killing me
Literally and figuratively
No food in the fridge
I’m shoplifting again
The lights are turned of
Where am I to go
Nobody is home
Where is the help
When I got a little bro
Who still wets and whines
Trapped in this never-ending void
Of secrets and lies
Trying so desperately
To get away
From the silence

Night
Star show at night
When they shine so very bright
Sky dark as midnight

that Haiku poem is so cute to me for some unknown reason

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
that Haiku poem is so cute to me for some unknown reason

They were all pretty good ✅ But I liked Dreams and the Haiku the most 🙂

those are my favorite too!

Mrs. Big
Beautiful
Intelligent
Great

that was a by product of my boredom *points to Mrs. Big*

Okay i'm really bored now so the results may be disatrous.........

The new beat
I was walking up the street
When I heard this great new beat
I tripped and stumbled
Plus started to mumble
Then walked right up the street

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
Okay i'm really bored now so the results may be disatrous.........

The new beat
I was walking up the street
When I heard this great new beat
I tripped and stumbled
Plus started to mumble
Then walked right up the street

that was just sad. so very sad 😮

Bottom of the Bottle
What do you see at the
bottom of the bottle?
Do you see your love lost
forever gone?
Do you see yourself?
Or do you see me ?
Crying for all that's lost
and what was never
ment to be

Sidewalks
You left me
running away
from the sidewalks
dear to me
rubbish to you

you should submit something to our contest!

Transparent
I've gone away
but nobody noticed
me fading into the background
just a whisper on the wind
just a rustle in the trees

Because
Because? Because?
because it just does
you don't understand
because....?

That seems to be
the answer for everything
the anthem of teenagers
worried about fickle problems
because.....

er....Because was supposed to be a conversation between a teen and his/her parents...but now i don't know what it is. its just thoughts that were swirling in my head...

Not so pretty
Those lines spelling destruction
Unsafe for any coming near
Caught up in your own world
Your own game
Foolish problems
Trying to forget
Drowning the pain
Scars disfiguring your body
This is not the way
Pain for pain
Playing games
With a razor

It’s not that hard
A little cut there
A little scar here
This will go on
Never noticed
Never cared
For why look
At that girl there
Relishing in her
Emotional turmoil