My.....intresting...attempt at poetry COME READ!!!

Started by MistressofSnape5 pages

I've had no one
For a long time
So when you
Lefted me
Relazation hit
Like a fist
To the gut
I'll never
Have anyone
Me and loneliness
Were ment to be

now i lay me
down to sleep
i pray to hell
my soul will reap
and should i die
before i wake
expect my heart
to find a stake

Landrymat
I leave today
the palce where
i used to wash
my clothes
gossip with friends
i leave the
thundering rythm
of the washing machines
behind and the telly
all black-and-white
maybe never coming back
to dicuss the
rise and fall
of detergent prices

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
now i lay me
down to sleep
i pray to hell
my soul will reap
and should i die
before i wake
expect my heart
to find a stake

wow... i like em all, sans the grammatical errors, but this really hits me. why so down yo? used to be in deed necromancy, blood magic... so this hits home like nothing else. talk to me! 😂

You like? FINALLY SOMEBODY! Everybody else I showed this poem to kinda cautiously backed away as if to say demon child!

Maybe
Maybe we can
Be happy
Maybe if we try
Maybe the sun won’t
Come up tomorrow
Maybe you wont die
Maybe you care enough
To make this work
Maybe that was
Just a friend
Maybe I’ll believe
What you say
Maybe she was
Just a friend
Maybe....

A massacre of words
That fly right by
Its absurd
The stuff I do
To stay true
Always die
Eternal
The inside
Filled with water
My organs mashed
I run from freedom
Oh how I dashed
The pencil mark
On my paper
Would not erase
Talk behind my back
Not in my face
Don’t think with haste
Don’t smear my skin
All over the place
Just step on my head
I’ll crush under your heel
My world will reel
And finally…
Finally…
I’ll be gone

It hurts
when they don't
understand the pain
and they ridicule you
with sniggers

This is just
another day
just another day
in the life
of a high school
outcast

maybe i'm not perfect
or have high grades
it may be that
i'm not popular
or have any friends
but at least
i'm not fake
unlike you
hiding behind
the label society
gave you

why are we here on earth?
was it ment to be?
or is heaven really hell,
we refuse to see?

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
You like? FINALLY SOMEBODY! Everybody else I showed this poem to kinda cautiously backed away as if to say demon child!
HAHAHAHAH!!!! well, i used to walk a very dark path. so stuff like that dont bother me any. 😂
Originally posted by MistressofSnape
It hurts
when they don't
understand the pain
and they ridicule you
with sniggers

This is just
another day
just another day
in the life
of a high school
outcast

pssht. good poems, yo. but outcast? bull$#!!. there are more like you and I than you think. ha... i was the guy in school everyone thought was gonna blow everything up, and even after i changed my ways they still made fun of me and were afraid of me too. fools... You are not some outcast, leftover, unwanted. You are a part of this world that is very much needed, a unique individual with no fear to express herself. clap and you got neat poetry! 😆

cool...everybody at school still thinks i'm gonna kill them. the idoits actully ask me if their on my hit list. i don't even have a hit list. IDOITS!

Satanic voices
The sheer madness
Has never
Creased to stop
And I let it be
For it whispers on…

The voices have
Always been there
Reassuring at times
Frighting at others

Ordering, condoling, controlling
No air to breathe
Suffocating under
The weight of
So much pressure
Satanic voices
Whisper on…

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
cool...everybody at school still thinks i'm gonna kill them. the idoits actully ask me if their on my hit list. i don't even have a hit list. IDOITS!
😆 man.... heard the same $#!!, and i started asking em why they thought that... did they think they needed to be on alist? then, i got to go to the principle's office under escort. 😂 so dont do that... just be you, and know thy limits. 😂

And good poem, yet one thing: the demonic forces, i have seen, come in two forms. The screamer, constantly yelling to hurt you, hurt them, kill, die, etc.... i fight him daily. The snake, who almost feels like he is licking my brain and ear as he whispers insidious things of pain and torment. I fight him daily as well... These can be ignore, you must choose to say "NO! I AM I! NOT YOU! And I shall do right!" stand up for yourself, and listen to the voice that just speaks to you, only with words of wisdom and comfort. He is who you should listen to. (ie, the one that warns you not to piss off teachers, or to say hello to a friend who is down) even if you dont believe in God, He believes in you. Ha... call it what you may, there is equal and greater good for all the evil here. It just moves slower. hug more poems yo! hahah!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
😆 man.... heard the same $#!!, and i started asking em why they thought that... did they think they needed to be on alist? then, i got to go to the principle's office under escort. 😂 so dont do that... just be you, and know thy limits. 😂

i got in trouble for that too. i said why would i have a hit list on paper? i got it all in my head. that create some commotion and i had to go to counseling.

😂 yeah id guess so! hahahaa.... well, hopefully you shall meet up with some more mature individuals in your near future. 😄

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
now i lay me
down to sleep
i pray to hell
my soul will reap
and should i die
before i wake
expect my heart
to find a stake

This one is sooo cool! 😄

Your stuff is good girly 😊 And you're a cool person, so don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise 😄

Originally posted by Coldfire
This one is sooo cool! 😄

Your stuff is good girly 😊 And you're a cool person, so don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise 😄

damn straight.

thanx at least somebody has faith! ^_^

hahah always.