My.....intresting...attempt at poetry COME READ!!!

Sink your fangs into my heart
And pull out the love like a leech
You’ll find there it for it
Goes to you
My will, life, soul is for you
I can’t do without you
May you be mine
Forever and more

A warped love
Time and time again
You bash, hit, and scream
Is this your love?
These cuts and bruises
Is this your love?
Never once was there
A gentle word
This is a very warped love
You have for me

hmmm... good ones, like the first, the second is too much like my mom and stepdad's relationship. yech.... may you never have that come upon thee.

Never again will I look at you
You've losted me
I gave everything to you
My heart, my soul, my love
You've taken them away
Leaving me empty and cold
Delud ing myself
Thinking it might just work
But nothing can happen
In a one-sided relationship

Stupid pop-ups keep
getting in my way
DIE POPUPS DIE
may you choke upon
your own greed and
float in cyberspace
lost and helpless

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
Stupid pop-ups keep
getting in my way
DIE POPUPS DIE
may you choke upon
your own greed and
float in cyberspace
lost and helpless

😑 um...okay...i'm kinda wondering why i wrote that... 😱 😕

Regular boring days
make us change
our regular boring ways
into falling leaves of atumn
old and yellowed
ready to be renewed

alas... another product of boredom,,,but it sounds...kinda good

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
Regular boring days
make us change
our regular boring ways
into falling leaves of atumn
old and yellowed
ready to be renewed

alas... another product of boredom...but it sounds...kinda good

Another version...

Regular boring ways
make us change
our regular boring days
filled with
endless foggy gray

this one sounds even worse

Interesting stuff 😊

LOL!!! funny.... and die popups!!! 😄

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
LOL!!! funny.... and die popups!!! 😄

Originally posted by Coldfire
lol yeah no kidding eh 😛

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
😂 omfg, you said eh!!!! LOL!!!!! ohhhh i can just hear the canadia on that!!!! LOL!!!

Originally posted by Coldfire
😂 Haven't you ever heard me say that before?? 😛

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
LOL!!!! not like this!!! 😆

um...okay.... 😑

Stormy eyes look back into mine
remembering the days
long since blown away
into the never-endinding
blue of yesterday

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
um...okay.... 😑

Stormy eyes look back into mine
remembering the days
long since blown away
into the never-endinding
blue of yesterday

and I like that little piece 😊

wow.. i haven't posted in so long. It seems i've been suffering from some serious writer's block. Nothing would come and so this sat and become kinda permanent until finally my teacher asigned us a poem to write and i came up with this.

a revised version of Dreams (which is on page 1)

I Wish
I wish
I could soar
Above the clouds
And fall back into fairyland

I wish
I was invisible
Taking a peek
At the secrets
Of the world

I wish
The stars and moon
Would dance
For me
Only me

I wish
I could hear
The trees whisper
To the wind
Telling their unheard secrets

I wish
Peole wouldn’t laugh
At the sight of me
And the world
Would be my plaything

I wish…

This I wrote because my sister wouldn't leave me alone.

Somewhere Your Not
I wanna be
Somewhere your not
Somewhere away from
Your curious stares,
Your well- meaning phase
Of wanting to be near me
Have you ever
Wanted to wash the day
Away?
Scrub it from your mind?
That’s how I felt today
Looking at you looking at me
Wanting to get away,
Get away to
Somewhere your not
This place has almost become
A necessity
A reassurance that I can
Escape from humanity
But this is
Almost insanity
For there is no place
Such as where I want to be
Somewhere your not

Writer’s Block
Today
Staring at the blank screen
The little black cursor blinking,
Innocently
As if waiting,
Waiting for me
To put words to the jumbled
Mess in my head
But the words are eluding me
Just out of my reach

The keys upon the board
Are lonely, without sound
No click-clack of them singing
With joy
For there is only agony
Of trying to wrie
What seemed so easy
Just moments before
Now cursing the dreaded
Writer’s block

true story...