My.....intresting...attempt at poetry COME READ!!!

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
Mrs. Big
Beautiful
Intelligent
Great

This is an more...animated...version of Mrs Big:

Mrs. Big
"Who are you?"
"Mrs. Big"
"The B stands for?"
"BEAUTIFUL"
"The I stands for?"
"INTELLIGENT"
"And the G stands for"
"GREAT!!!!"

My grandma is actrully came up with Mrs. BIG. I just put into a poem, if you can call it that.

i like

thanx i like ur poems too.

i finally found it! MOS, you are really really good with your poems. keep up the good work. i will check here again later...

Find compassion in your heart
Please look at me
Why is there scorn in your smile?
Why is there disgust upon your face?
What happened to I love you?
Have the words dried up and blown away?

that poem is about my sister, which is just sad. it just tells you about our relationship but i don't think she actully notices it

Screams echo in my mind
from not long ago
Your solution is yell
but noone is hearing you
Tuning you out
uncaring for your pain

Gone
Just the noises come as one
And the world blurs
My vision blacks
My ears here the num
Of the constant talk
Yet I hear no words
And feel no feelings
Taste not the spit
That fills my mouth as
I become the wind
And float away

Substitution
Air from the A.C
On hot clammy skin
When a cool breeze
On a summers day
Is all I want

A trip on the Ferris wheel
Cold empty seat beside me
When I’d rather be
Screaming on a
Monster rollercoaster

A night out with friends
As they laugh and talk
While I sit all alone
Not enjoying myself
Is like me without you

Free
Eager mind
Ready to see
Open up its eyes
Peel back the thoughts
That hold us back
Common sense
Thrown away
As the air feels the touch
Of a young girl’s hands
The hair on your neck
Stands up
Tingling sensation
In the pit on your stomach
And you feel
That you are free

Hopeless
Permanent tears
On a ashen face
A star falls
Into the palm
Of a hopeful child
And it burns
Through his skin
I watch as he screams
Into the black hopeless night

Bring it on!
I’ve got all day
The thunder sings
The lighting plays
As I look out into
The happy storm
Called a hurricane

wow.... neat works. different style too. cool.

A gain for you
Is a loss for me
And every smile
Is snatched away

I try to be bold
But every time
I’m left alone…

The world is cruel
But so are you
And sweet music
Is sourly crude

In this life
Lies are truth
And the soft thuds
Are pounding you

But even though
It seems so bad
We’re all gonna die
So don’t be sad

It's not as simple
As it seems
Watching the puddles fill
Dancing in the rain
Outside a school building
While teachers yell
“Get inside!”

dang....

Originally posted by MistressofSnape
A gain for you
Is a loss for me
And every smile
Is snatched away

I try to be bold
But every time
I’m left alone…

The world is cruel
But so are you
And sweet music
Is sourly crude

In this life
Lies are truth
And the soft thuds
Are pounding you

But even though
It seems so bad
We’re all gonna die
So don’t be sad

Never mind
This blood you see
Staining the canvas
Of my life
Never mind
The hurt you see
That I’ve cleverly disguised
As flowers blooming
Everywhere
To dazzle
And distract
The eye

hmmm... reminiscent of young women i knew in high school. as in they disguised all their pain and the wounds upon their flesh with lies, flattery, and jewelry or long sleeves... very nice.

They all say
I’m going to
That burning pit
In the earth
Preacher, pastor, friend
Why do they condemn me?
They all say
That is my destiny
That’s why I’ve
Always thought
Hell was cold

There’s nothing to see here
I’m an empty soul
Devoid of all emotions
Expressionless in everyway

Maybe if you hadn’t
Left me here
All alone
Nobody cared but you

Now I’m lost
Drifting away
Like the autumn leaves
On a cold fall day