POTC 5 ...our next version

Started by sailorleo30 pages

so who's gonna continue that's not me?

you really should I loved your writing...I mean not that you have to but if have ANY idea

are you high? lol...why writings no good...how is it good?

well I really loved the scene you did

which one?

the one with jack and jacky....the mumsy part was priceless and I can IMAGINE jack going : it's jack...YOUR BROTHER!

jack's no real sparrow???

no...!

wOw! suprising and good at the same time! keep up the good work!

you should turn this in to disney!

*sighs* i was hoping ya'll liked alex and abi.....any hoo....what should the next scene be about?

maybe about becket cause becket is tracking them down right now

oh well to be honest i skim thro this story...i'm so bad...i only stop when something intrests me.....so if you could fill me in on the whole beckett thing...

well becket kidnapped jack in the begining and liz traded herself for him and grant saved liz from the ship and they all met again in tortuga where it was revealed that jack had cheated on liz and liz left and becket is trying to find jack to kill him and now they're all back together and becket is still on their tail....bit complicated really?

i don't know if i should do beckett's scene..maybe you should i just don't know if i can

ok I'll try but don't blame me if it's no good I'm way bad at thi stuff but I'll try give me a few mins

good ok then *waits*

beckets ship.
becket has a pleased expression on his face.
soldier#1-what has you on such a fine mood sir.
becket-we're VERY close to our friend Mr.sparrow. if we manage to catch him off-gaurd distroy his ship and his crew and HIM.(stops at this point turns around a smirk on his face) than that will be the end of the golden age of piracy as they call it..and we have the slight advantage of...surprise.
soldier#1-shal I tell the men to load the guns and prepare for a fight sir?
becketno we aren't THAT close yet.don't forget we are chasing the fastest ship in the caribbean.back to your post then.
turns back to stare at the horizon.
becket(whispers)-this will be settled sooner than you expect it *captain* sparrow.
he stares at a chart a very UNUSUAL chart with mystiriouse markings on it.becket is obviousely using it to find the pearl.

ok...now what do you want me to do?

any scene you like do something on liz/jack

uh..what's the situation on them?

or on nori/jacky these are the two couples who need help right now

hmmm...ok