POTC 5 ...our next version

Jack walks down to the cabin where Jacky lies unconscious. He pokes her shoulder with a finger rousing her slowly.

Jack: Oy! You awake?

Jacky: mumsy? Is that you..? *her eyes squint*

Jack: uh...know...it's jack, YOUR BROTHER! We need to talk...

Jacky: Oh no, did the faeries go blabering about again?

Jack: No, Jacky I want to make this quite clear. I love you...like a sister, because you ARE my sister, savvy. And the feelings you have for me must be stopped

Jacky: Oh, but I can't just stop Loving you! *jack winces jacky grabs on to him*

Jack: I think you'll find it's in the best intrests that you stop. Besides, what wrong with Norrington, he's a fine chap...I've been rooting for him you know.

JAcky: Oh, but James is so predictable....and BORING! He's not as good looking or clever as you!

Jack: *rolls his eyes* Jacky, trust me on this be with Norrington he loves you like nothing else in the world...you complete him..get it?

Jacky: *pouts*

Jack:if nothing else do it..for me *he grins*

Jacky: Oh alright...*she gives in* I'll try

Jack: good! *he gets up* no gets some sleep *he leaves*

love it!!!!!!!

The next day Jacky felt strange. She decided to stay in her cabin, saying to the others she was ill. Her father steps in.

Grant: Well, luv, what’s the matter of staying in your cabin?

Jacky: Nothing….I just had too much rum.

Grant: That can’t be the reason.

Jacky: Alright I tell you…but please hate me not for what I’ve done. In the last time…there were these feelings…for Jack, I know he’s my brother…and…

Grant: Wait!

Jacky glances at him.

Jacky: Why?

Grant: Well…It’s a secret you must keep, till I die. I never told him, but he is no real Sparrow. His mother was pregnant before I married her. But I’ll not tell him that! He’ll hate me.

Jacky felt better. She now knew she’s nothing forbidden done.

Jacky: But I’ll not hurt her or Jack. She is pregnant and she’ll forgive him soon.

Grant: Aye, you’re right!

Jacky and Grant now go on deck.

omg wat a major turn arounf JACK isn't a reall sparrow omg dis is turning around and around wif somany twists its so cool i luv wat u guuys hav written i gtg now mum told me 2 get off da comp bibi every1 n congratz i can wait till i can come bak on lol!

you GUYS...JACK isn't a real SPARROW? I mean if anything i thought JACKY wouldn't be a real sparrow...oh well this is so great..I love to read more..PLEASE someone write more...I LOVE THIS

yeah....oh boy.....anyways did you guys look at the dress i posted here 2 pages back?

I saw it it was beauitful!!! Your a great artist 🙂

yay thanks!

Your welcome!! I am new o the boards (kinda) Ive been reading but havent potsed a lot🙂 I love reading the stories 🙂

yeah me too....i even tried writing last night...well this morning....

I have been trying to write as well 🙂 But its kinda hard I am at work and I shouldnt even be on here but I am so dang addicted to POTC its not even funny. I cant stay off this board heheheh

uh oh.....i hope you don't get in trouble at work for it.....

Its ok 🙂 I am the boss hhehehe how much punishment can I give myself heheheh

oh that's cool...do you work from home?

No I am in Marketing and sales, I am at the office right now before I go on my next call so I kinda work out of my car🙂 but Its cool I can use the break everyday to be on here and get my captain Jack fix

that's good

someone needs to continue...and get back on topic🙂lol

yeah well who's gonna continue?

gosh! im gone 4 one day and theres like, 200 posts!

yeah well that happens... man im bored....