POTC 5 ...our next version

Started by Jacky Sparrow30 pages

go on please, just a few lines!!!

diff page on the thread... 🙂

I'm loving this...

*waits for more*

who me....?

yes, you!!

Jack: yeah yeah, she has a stick up her butt just like her old man *he grins*

Abi: What! I certainly don't. Now you're going to tell me why you were giving me those funny looks when i came up or else?

Grant: should we tell her...

Abi: *eyes flaring*

and your turn....jacky...

no, no idea why?

huh..... it's your turn b/c i don't know what you were getting at with jack and grant giving abi funny looks...

ok then wait!

Jack: No, I think it’s not good…

Grant: Alright! I go to bed now, the rum is making me tired.

Jack: Oh, never felt this…I seem to be resistant! (smirks)

Grant walks away, Abi looks angry at Jack.

Abi: (spiteful) You all drive us crazy. It’s not just you’ve hurt Lizzie that much...not at all...now you have made Jacky confused too.

Jack: (glances at her) What???

Abi: Well...she’s now drinking as much as you...and it’s not good for her...and she has hurt my dad...all because of you.

this is going crazy...

and all becoz of jack!

pirate...

goodbye, everyone....I'll now have to go because I'll send my computer to Vienna....hope he'll arrive tomorrow...and maybe the day after that. So that I could go on!!

Jack: I don't know what you are talking 'bout love

Abi: *in exreme she anger slaps him* Don't you EVER call me love! Beside i think you do know about Jacky's problem! She's quite taken with you, her own brother. A horrible situation for her. YOU HAVE to do SOMETHING!

Jack: Hey, she's have to square her feelings for me on her own. It's not my fault the lass likes me..I can't help it if every maid swoons for me-

ABI: oh spare me your swill! If you don't help Jacky out of you phlight, i'll personaly make sure you-live-to-regret-it! Do I make myself clear CAPTAIN? *she was going to conitnue but opts not to and rushes towards the caotain* Oh no! *she thinks* I'm turning into my father!

like daughter like father 😖

you're good guys!

you all rock!

yeah...i love playing an angry character...lol...

go, on....please...only a little bit!!!

fine

*Abi breaks into a run and rushes towards the bunks that alx sleeps in*

Abi: ALEX ALEX ALEX ALEX! *she cries*

Alex: *he rubs his eyes* honest to God Abigail some one BETTER be dead or dying

Abi:*jumps on top of him with total disregard of humility she gets close to his face and shouts* I'm turning into my father!

Alex: *still to tired to process quickly*...huh?

Abi: I shouted at Captain Sparrow, made a complete, you know out of myself...It was SOO scary, I sounded just like him!

Alex: *he grins partly out of amusment and partly b/c she's laying on top of him. He kisses her forehead* I promose i wont let you turn into your father...alright....now-

Norrie: *coughs loudly* Abigail! What do you think you're doing? *he's right next to them*

Abi: *smile and begins to make it look like she's going to say something but doesn't*

cool, love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! go on with the scene between jack and jacky, will be fun, he has to wake her up and don't forget, she's still drunk!!

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

o...k.....

*gosh feels like slave*