POTC 5 ...our next version

Started by -savvychick-30 pages

i dont think so...i think they just arent still arguing about everything, they're not together again yet..i think😐...ill have to check...............

no, they're not back together, liz just got jack out of the party, but they weren't back 'together' on jack/lizzie terms, just feeling a little less hostlie towards each other🙂i think

ok, now i think it's someone elses turn, b/c ive posted 3 scenes all by myself, so someone else should have a go at it🙂plz?

ha! like it! so cool!

i think you should write something sailorleo, you havent written anything in a while, and i cant write this by myself...plz🙂

maybe......sure...what scene?

do the one that mmoviejunkie suggested a couple pages back

saliorleo are you writting something up right now? 'cause i was going to add a little short thing that would transition into them going after the treasure but then run into an enemy

go ahead

alrighty
hold on give me a minute to finish typing it up

[jack walks into cabin]
jack:Good Morning Elizabeth
Liz: Morning
jack:Had a good night's sleep?
liz: Yes
jack:and what about little jack?
liz:its a girl
jack:and what makes you so sure?
liz:a mother knows these things...what were you talking about with abi?
jack: oh, she just want a little pirate mar-ri-age
liz:well...i wish them better luck than us(starts to leave)
jack:indeed,...you know lizzie, my dear, i still intend on spoiling you rich with that treasure we find...along with little jack
liz(stops and turns to him):and what makes you so sure its a boy?
jack: oh, a father knows these things

i just thought it'd be cute with the boy/girl baby thingy...lol anyways take it away saliorleo

i like it🙂

i like the fact that they're arguing about something, they get so close when they do, and they flirt without even realizing it🙂 good job

lol, thanks though it could have been better

is sailorleo even on here?

i dont think so

im here just watching couplings....i'll start it sonn promise...

darn, um, i would write something but i dont know where to take this🙁

o, goody!!!🙂

neither do i so is it ok if i do the wedding?

some one say if this is ok or not fast b/c house is starting in 15.....then you'll be left hanging for an hour or two