POTC 5 ...our next version

Started by -savvychick-30 pages

thats fine🙂

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~Alex and ABi's Wedding~

Jack: and do you Alex blah somethin' or other take this, woman, to be your lawful wedded, blah- get what i'm saying lad?

Alex: I do...

Jack: Oh good! Then by the authority invested in me by the crew of the black pearl yadda yadda, I know pronounce you man and WOman, er wife...right...any ways kiss-the-wench-yer-married!

(Alex and Abi Kiss)

Jack: *claps* yeay! drinks on me! Less'go...

Jacky: *holding on to Norrington* there, you made it. Good job

Norrie: *sighs while he's watching them leave* There she goes, my little girl *wipes a tear* i wish i could have known her when she was younger...

Jacky: There, there..*she hugs him*...I know, let's go have some drinks...alright

Norrie: Yes, alright. *they follow evryone else for drinks*

yay!!!!!!!!...i like it...if no one else has any ideas im gonna post

go ahead

abi and alex head the group going down to the party, but jack follows liz as she sneaks off to the side
he follows her and finds her sitting and crying by the anchor
jack sits next to her
jack: (gently) what’s wrong, love
liz sighs
liz: you can’t keep doing this to me jack
jack: I don’t know what you mean
liz: this, every time I’m around you, something brings back a memory, and, and…
jack just stares at the ground
liz just stares at him
jack: what now, I still love you, I can’t just start over, pretend we never happened
liz: but jack, we—
jack: no lizzie, I’m sorry, but I’m not going to give up without a fight
their eyes lock for a brief moment, but it was enough to send liz over the edge
liz leans closer, and for a second, it seems as if she was going to kiss him
liz: trust me, I don’t want to forget what it tastes like
with that, she gets up, and walks away, leaving jack staring hopefully after her

almost there🙂

is there more you're doing?

um, i was going to try a scene at the party with will and kate, they havent been brought up in a LONG time

Yes do it!

nevermind, i don't have enough time before i get off, o well, maybe tomorrow

Anybody else?

how bout you?

I was thinking more like you.

i was allowed to stay on a little bit longer, so i wrote something, here it is, hope you like it

meanwhile, down at the party, kate and will are dancing to some awful music played by a band of pirates, with a parrot as the back-up singer
will: I can¡¦t wait until we can get married
kate: I can¡¦t wait until our honeymoonƒº
will grins
will: don¡¦t you think we¡¦ve spoiled that part already though?
kate: you can never spoil a honeymoon, but practice never hurt anything
wills grin widens, and he takes a long swig of rum
will: what do you say we go practice right now?
kate giggles, and they start to run off to wills cabin
kate grabs will¡¦s hand
kate: o, wait, I forgot to wish abi and alex luck
she turns, but can¡¦t see either of them anywhere
kate turns back to will
kate: maybe I should just wait until tomorrow
will: yes, well, we wouldn¡¦t want to interrupt anything now would we?
they both laugh, then rush off to will¡¦s cabin to get in some ¡¥practice¡¦ before passing out from drinking so much rum the past few nights

THank you that was awesome! I am seriously adicted to this story so keep it coming.

aah! love it! more more more Jack/Liz!! they gotta get back together sometime 4 little Jack/Jacky! rather sooner than later!

I need another dose of this, please can someone post I know I'm very demanding but you guys all have great talent waaay better then some of the things i've read at fan fiction.

AT JACKYS CABIN AFTER THE WEDDING

jack walks in

jacky: hello jack
nods his head(hi)
jack:I dont feel so hot jacky
jacky:why?
jack:Its liz shes driveing me crazy
jacky:tell me about it im here for you
jack: well she keeps sending me mixed signals . one momment she wants to be with me and the next she doesent , i dont even think she loves me anymore jacky its really not fair i mean im captain jack sparrow i get what i want and right now i want lizzy!
jacky: You gotta give her time jack
jack stomps oFF angry
jack: TIME.....TIME ive tierd of giveing her time
jacky runs after him
jacky:JACK STOP
jack: why should i , i think if she doesent forgive me ill jump ship
jacky: Dont be an idoit jack, she loves you i know she does
jack:WELL SHE HAS A SURE FINE WAY OF SHOWING IT.
jacky:If she didnt love you do you honestly think she would still be on the pearl ?
jack: She is just useing me for a ride.
jacky:you honestly think that jack?
jacks mouth turns from a scowl to a innocent frown
jack:yes
jacky: oh jack she loves you just give her time.
jack: do me a favor jacky
jacky:yes
jack:NEVER SAY TIME AGAIN
He winks at her, and leaves.

uuuuuuuuuuh I LOVE IT please do one more scene...

Hey guys if ya don't like it scrap it.

It's the next morning and most the crew are asleep.
Liz is outside, humming to herself.
Jack watches her from the cabin.
He sighs.
"Well, Mrs Sparrow, today's the day. if i can't get you today i'll...i'll...."
Jack frowns "i'm talking to myself"

Liz is by the railing, but unusually she is not day-dreaming, or in a trance from the lapping of the gentle waves. She reaches into a pocket and pulls out a piece of fabric, but at closer look it is a baby's frock.

"Let's start hoping it's a girl if ya payed for that" Jack had just sauntered up to her.
"What do you want?" she snapped, his voice had just brought back a dreadful headache from the previous night.
"No need to snap, dearie"
Liz's bump is getting visible clearer. (soz guys i don't know how many months she's preggers, so i'm just going ahead)
"I'm sorry Jack, I didn't me..Oh!"
Liz grips at her bump. Jack face is painted with worry. jack held Liz close to him.
She finally broke the silence. "It's alright Jack, this one is quite a little fighter"
"Jack sighs with relief. Liz pulls away from the warmth of Jack's arms, with more than a little bit of reluctance.
"that's my little boy, a fighter like his dad"
"Fighter meaning talking your way out of things, and besides it's a girl"
Liz walks off.

Jack watches her walk away, at the same moment Liz realises the same thing as Jack.
They had been a family for the first time in a long while......and both of them enjoyed it.