Transformers: Revenge Of The Fallen Trailer & Discussion *Possible Spoiler Orgy*

Started by CadoAngelus34 pages

Originally posted by stickman618
i think he should still be Megatron and have Unicron turn him into Galvatron in the third one

i like that lol...much better, that way it includes some of the original story

also, why doesn't Prime get any kills??

not quite sure, i guess i've sorta done what Bay did and had him dead for most of the film 😮

overall, much better, no mention of the twins(thank God), and the (other)new Autobots get more screen time

that was the intention 😛

i hope you still include all of the Megan Fox scenes though 😛

hellz yeah...of course, i'm red blooded, male, and straight lol

megan fox won't escape my pervy clutches hahaha

P.S Nice script there Sadako...very detailed, and i like the fact you're including transformers that are from the cartoons...very good

Thanks Cado. Im pleased you like it.

I'll get act II up real soon, just needed a break and need to think about tying story arcs together.

Been trying to work the original comic origins of the G1 comic in there with elements of Target:2006, in with the cartoon, like you say...
May be able to sequelise this also.... 😛

Originally posted by CadoAngelus
ok, i shall take the gauntlet...here goes

[b]3000-4000-god knows how many years ago: The 13 original Cybertronians (not Primes, keeping it true to the original story) are sent from Cybertron to harvest Energon...they find earth, blah blah blah. Vector Prime goes into the Void to watch time (like he does) ready to appear in the respective sequel to help the Autobots and Sam. Ultra Magnus stays on Cybertron to protect the All-Spark...jump forward to present day...

- Just to clear things up, a couple of things are just gonna be what i think should of been done in particular circumstances, not just a complete script re-write

Now from modern day: 'The Fallen' still included is trying to find this Sun-Harvester thing (I didn't have a problem with that). Autobots are part of an elite team of Cybertronians and Humans formed to protect the earth from the remaining threat of the Decepticons...(see i don't have many problems with the initial plot). Soundwave hacks military satellite to find location of Megatron, and Militarily store shard of the All-Spark (I thought it was silly having Sam have a shard in his pocket, 2 years after Megatrons death...stupid).

Soundwave drops Ravage to the location of the shard and the insecticons form that blade thing and steal the shard etc. Decepticons use the shard to resurrection Megatron, as Galvatron with all his respective powers (can't find a way to work Unicron in). Galvatron and the Decepticons return to where ever it is (one of Saturn's moons i think?). The Fallen says about "only a prime can destroy me blah".

Decepticons fall to earth again to make their presents known, Soundwave being used to broadcast the Fallen's message to the world. Autobots: Optimus Prime, Bumblebee, Iron Hide, Ratchet and Sideswipe find Decepticons: The Fallen, Starscream and Grindor (the Blackout clone) and an epic battle ensues. The Fallen is wounded but not severely, Grindor gets destroyed by Optimus's arm swords and iron hides massive cannons and starscream runs away like a girl. Optimus gets killed by The Fallen and The Fallen flys away somewhere...

Everyone's devastated by the death of Optimus, and the Autobots tell Sam that there is an Autobot (not ex-Decepticon turned Autobot) who knows how to resurrect Optimus - Jetfire, still the SR-71 Blackbird, but not decrepid. They go to whatever museum it is they find him in and awaken him, he tells them about the Matrix of Leadership. They go to the Egyptian desert they go to in the film and find the tomb of the Primes and the Matrix.

The army bring Optimus (to the same location as the film) and Sam and the Autobots go with him too. The Autobots already at the location with the army are: Arcee, Chromia, and Jolt (wasn't aware he was actually in the Film tbh). They defend against the impending wrath of the Decepticon army raining down, as much as possible, until the rest of the Autobots get there...

Meanwhile, The Fallen is roaming Egypt looking for the Sun-Harvester and eventually finds it...Galvatron has a disagreement with The Fallen, they battle but stalemate and Galvatron goes back to the Decepticon creating facility on Saturn's moon to harvest the power of the unborn Decepticons, and isn't heard from until the respective sequel.

The Fallen makes his last move, calling in Devastator (in his broken down form, and then they combine). Arcee and Sideswipe try to hold off Devastator as long as possible while the American navy power up that massive laser cannon, but instead of taking one hit, it takes several with help from Arcee and Sideswipe.

Eventually, several of the Constructicons are destroyed, making it so Devastator has to break apart into it's individual parts...Sam resurrects Optimus with the Matrix. Optimus helps fight the Decepticon army for a while while Arcee and Sideswipe fight off Rampage, Long Haul and Mixmaster (the other Construcitons being dead). Iron Hide goes to help Arcee and Sideswipe.

The Fallen eventually comes to the main fight, while Soundwave falls out of orbit and uncovers the rest of the Sun-Harvester. The Fallen gets briefly deterred by some of the US Abrams tanks before using his magnet power, he then takes down Bumblebee (but doesn't kill him) and Ratchet before Optimus tackles him. The Fallen then flys over to where Soundwave is and both start uncovering the Sun-Harvester...Jetfire combines with Optimus and Optimus flys over to soundwave and punts him away (wounding him and he then flys back into space), then Optimus deals with The Fallen...an Epic Battle ensues resulting in many spare parts being sprawled across the desert and both Optimus and The Fallen being wounded heavily.

The rest of the Autobots gather round The Fallen as Optimus gets up. The Fallen then says about how they're all weak and they'll never stop him...he then sends out a shock wave, knocking them all back, and he flys into space...the Autobots regather themselves and do whatever they do...

Cutting to Saturn's Moon again...The Fallen, heavily wounded finds Galvatron harvesting the energon from the unborn Decepticons and accosts him, Galvatron - still worked up about the disagreement they had - turns to him and destroys him...Soundwave (because he didn't go straight to Saturn's Moon) lands at the moon at the base and see's Galvatron hanging over The Fallens destroyed body. Galvatron looks up to see Soundwave standing there, and Soundwave gets down on one knee and bows...Galvatron laughs to fade

END!

there's a couple of holes that i couldn't find ways to fill, but generally this is how i think the film shoulda turned out...nevertheless, tell me what you think 😄 , criticism expected and wanted 😛 [/B]

I like it good ideas.
The twins were good why do you hate them!
Leo was an idiot fair enough and there were too many jokes.

Originally posted by Sadako of Girth
Thanks Cado. Im pleased you like it.

I'll get act II up real soon, just needed a break and need to think about tying story arcs together.

Been trying to work the original comic origins of the G1 comic in there with elements of Target:2006, in with the cartoon, like you say...
May be able to sequelise this also.... 😛


haha awesome

Originally posted by Darth Rex
I like it good ideas.
The twins were good why do you hate them!
Leo was an idiot fair enough and there were too many jokes.

I didn't like the twins, they were stupid and annoying...and i feel the same way about Leo...

Thanks for the bits you liked though 😄

Care to comment on this
One second they're in the Smithsonian Air & Space museum in washington, then they bust through the wall and they're at the Air Force's bone yard in Arizona or at least that is what it looked like.

Originally posted by darthmaul1
Care to comment on this
One second they're in the Smithsonian Air & Space museum in washington, then they bust through the wall and they're at the Air Force's bone yard in Arizona or at least that is what it looked like.

yeah that was weird, didn't really think about it at the time, but now you mention it...

perhaps they were trying to make out that is wasn't necessarily the Smithsonian but a hanger of retired Air and Space craft that just so happens to be near the Arizona Air Force bone yard...just a hunch though, anyone could make this guess

Originally posted by Darth Rex
I like it good ideas.
The twins were good why do you hate them!
Leo was an idiot fair enough and there were too many jokes.

the only good scenes of the twins was when their ice-cream truck said"suck my popsicle", and when one said to the other "it's supposed to hurt, it's an a** kicking", but that lead to their upgrades and stealing of the spotlight

they should have left Leo at college and the jokes were not funny

I agree. Anytime your TFs characters are failing in humour bad enough to have a RC car toy humping Megan Fox to force a laugh out of you, then your ability to write humour fro your characters is deeply in the shit.

Its a totally un TFs moment bought to try to make you laugh, like Bumblebee pissing on a human.

Unneccesary base toilet humour.

Originally posted by CadoAngelus
yeah that was weird, didn't really think about it at the time, but now you mention it...

perhaps they were trying to make out that is wasn't necessarily the Smithsonian but a hanger of retired Air and Space craft that just so happens to be near the Arizona Air Force bone yard...just a hunch though, anyone could make this guess

Nope, the air and space museum is in downtown washington and that is where they said they were going.
It would of been better had they just put jetfire at the bone yard and that is where they go.

Originally posted by darthmaul1
Nope, the air and space museum is in downtown washington and that is where they said they were going.
It would of been better had they just put jetfire at the bone yard and that is where they go.

fair enough...

sorry, my US geography is crap...for christs sake, my English geography is shite

Originally posted by CadoAngelus
fair enough...

sorry, my US geography is crap...for christs sake, my English geography is shite

No problem, and that is probably what Bay is counting on people not knowing the locations, but people from washington will know for sure.
They should of just made up a museum where he was, then they could of done what they did.

[QUOTE=12002093]Originally posted by Sadako of Girth
[B]Act I:
2009: Skywarp, Thundercracker and Starscream are attacking Los Angeles. They pursue Sideswipe, Bluestreak and Brawn through the streets seeking to torture Prime to get the matrix.
After they cleverly isolate Bluestreak and Brawn from Prime, they all close in from three different angles and manage to overpower him.
They try to no avail to rip the matrix out from inside him and fly off With Prime's head, for reasons that we see leaving Prime body outside Mann's Chinese theater in quite the state of decapitation.

Back at the decepticon base in Oregon, they report back to and expectant Acting commander Shockwave who is waiting to give life to the newly constructed Constructicons (with a new body for Bonecrusher), and Jetfire..
He has also recovered Megatron from the abyss, but Megatron is hanging up in a state of repair on the biomechanical walls, along with the other damaged decepticons .

Megatron is NOT happy about being usurped by Shockwave.
And neither is Starscream either, as he sees himself as leader, but serves Shockwave for now.

They put Prime's head on a machine that was built to extract data.
But they have problems with the hardware in accessing what they need from Prime.

In a scene with some exposition about Shockwave about how Starscream's team will have to go find some component for it, it is revealed that as predicted safe guard, Prime absorbed the energy of the Matrix case in his chest and has been heavily encrypted in some awesome fashion that will take the deceps a few days to break.

At the Autobots new base dubbed affectionately the Ark, made from the craft that bought them to our solar system in the first movie.. (not that we saw it.) Ratchet and Wheeljack work on Primes body and ascertain what has happened to Prime's head and the Matrix.
At the meeting Prowl, Ironhide and Huffer are disappear suddenly in bright blue flash (with the sound of thunder backwards).

Meanwhile at decepticon HQ Megatron, Skywarp and Bombshell are suddenly not there anymore. The decepticons take it as an attack and go out to sort out the Autobots.

Prompted by the disappearance of the missing autobots,
Ratchet goes with Sam to go see what they can find out at the decepticons base, with Bluesteak, Sidewipe, Bumblebee and Cliffjumper as backup..
After a brief incursion with Decepticon security, the Autobots withdraw, being outgunned by Starscream and Thundercracker.

They fail to notice Sam jumping out of Ratchet before the left.
Sam finds his way inside the deceptibase (Trypticon) and uses a tracking device Ratchet gave him to find Primes head.
The tracking dev also has a dampening field around the user, designed to prevent detection by decep sensors, but leaves the user totally visible to the eye.

Prime's eyes light up in recognition of Sam and Prime reveals that the decep plan must be to extract the Matrix energy from his head in order to create sentiency among the Constructicons
Sam realises that he cant move Prime himself.

As the decepticons are outside pursuing the withdrawing Autobots,
(Gratuitous battle scenes intercut with Sam's mission) it'd be hard to get Primes headpast them even if he could move the head. Prime warns that the Decepticons must never get the matrix as it could tip the fortunes of the war. As he says this, Prime Appears to shoot Sam in the eyes with his own for second or two.
Prime looks wiped out for now and when sam regains conciousness after what looked like a trace for 10 secs he tells Optimus that he'll come back for him and leaves, all messed up.

(End of act I.)

(Act II.)

Sam makes it to the rendevous site with the Autobots who sustained damage against the decepticons.

As we see the Autobot convoy approach the ark, they drive past a rock, which we stay focused on as they go by.

Out from behind that rock springs Ravage who scurries off back away to decepticon base. (Implication that he has been inside the Ark whilst the Autobot strikeforce was away.

He reports to tjhe newly returned Shockwave that the Autobots are as clueless about what happened to their lost numbers, as the deceps are.

Ext: quiet countryside.
Massive blue flash and a clap of thunder
And Two futurisic Jets, one lookin like a flying hovercraft the other is long nosed and has wings that angle forward rather than backwards.

They fliy to the nearest human airbase, and destroy a few buildings, shoot down planes and announce themselves to all present. Their weapons tech is incredible.
It yields much devastation.
The Jets fly to the Pentagon and transform as they land and they throw one such weapon to the floor. It transforms and increases in size and forms a massively powerful looking robot mode with a big orange cannon on his right arm he immedately uses it to level a nearby rockface as a demonstration of his might.
He announces to all and sundry that Galvatron has arrived and that earth is now his.

Back at Trypticon, the deceps efforts to unencrypt Prime's Matrix succeed. The manage to get prime to give a life giving energy burst of Matrix, enough to make them animate, but not yet fully sentient.
Shockwave realises what has happened and sees that Prime has already uploaded and moved the file.
Ravage shows that the Autobots returned to the ark with a human in tow. Shockwave begins to realise what has occurred, and after Jetfire has also been given life, its not really full sentience either, he orders the capture of Bumbleebee and the fleshling.

The constructicons transform and leave for the ark.

New York Times square.
Bright blue light and thunderclap.

Hot Rod, Kup and Blurr emerge from the rip in spacetime and immediately set about finding the Ark.

Acting City Commander Ultra Magnus scans the Ark's long range monitoring and sattelite feed out to find the source of the commotion caused by Galvatron, Scourge and Cyclonus.
Thats when he notices the times square arrivals too.

Trypticon picks ups signals too. Three of them and they approach fast.

Galvatron tackles on Shockwave and his lietenants, the seekers and overpower them with massive ease. Soundwave appears in G1 robot mode form and ejects Lazerbeak, Buzzsaw, Rumble, Ravage and Frenzy, but they cannot help him in his fight against Cyclonus.

Cyclonus beats him unconcious.
Galvatron commandeers the Decpticon forces and Trypticon.
and informs the decpticons that they will be building a new weapon of interplanetary range in Oregon.

The constructicons arrive at the ark and stop. The all treandform to robot mode. The Arks' sensors go off and Ultra Magnus Leads Sideswipe, Sunstreaker, Cliffjumper Red Alert and Tracks outside to meet the threat. The Constructicons (partly contolled by Shockwave), attack and the Autobots retaliate.

The battle seems even at first Constructicon strength against Autobot speed and sentience. But then the Constructicons combine and form (G1) Devastator who starts trudging forward to destroy the ark.

Magnus soon look likes he is on his own after many of the Autobots take even more of a beating..

..until Hot Rod, Kup and Blurr arrive to back his up. Magnus doenst recognise them, yet can tell they are Autobots. Blurr uses his ridiculous speed to attack devastator at his joints as Devastator rips a chunk off of the back of the Ark and throws it at Magnus, which he only just manages to avoid.
Hot rod blasts away with his arm cannons at Devastator's face and eyes. Kup attacks the legs, hoping to destroy Devastator's support.
The battle rages for a good five minutes and in the end the constructicons reteat after Kup forces the right leg to seperate and Devastator is half blinded and sustaining injuries from Magnus's shoulder mounted rocket attacks and Blurrs high powered laser rifle.

Kup steps up to explain that they are from 2026 and that they have travelled back in time to stop Galvatron from destroying the Moon in a test with a new weapon that he plans to build.

Cut to Sam who now for reasons he doesnt yet know, understands deep mechanical and physical and math equations that are in Wheeljacks' logs, which he and the Autobots are studying to plan a strike on Trypticon. He has a connection with the new Jet Shockwave built. And keeps seeing things through the Jets' "eyes" at random intervals and as it happens metal objects near him start to float and combine.

Kup and Magnus realise what symptons this may be and they ascertain that Sam has been burned with the Matrix..
They realise that Prime must be rescued because of his pivotal role in things to come, and prepare their counter attack on decep HQ.

Galvatron visits Megatron in the medibay and tells him his little story about 2026 and about a battle at an Autobot city in the future.
And about an encounter in space.

End of Act II. [/B][/QUOTE]

Act III: We open with Sam sitting in Bumbleebee as they drive in convoy on the way to the Decepticon base. They drive behind Magnus, on who's trailer, Optimus' Body lies.

He has a Matrix vision moment in which he sees Two massive giants fighting in a New York city. The sun burns from behind the giants and we see the silhouttes raging and smashing against each other ripping pieces out of buildings as the struggle...The silhoutte on the left seemed to have wings and aeroplane parts in its outline. The other distinctive by the its apparent use of a helicopter for an arm and..
Sam snaps back to reality and wipes the blood from his nose.
A sensation of his head being split in two subsides.

They have to get him to Prime fast.

As Sam's vision finishes we show the Decepticon Jet spark to life.
It blasts out of its docking cradle and fires off past the decepticions and over head the base...as the camera tracks along with Jetfire we get a shot of the weapong that Galvatron has had the constructicons constructing. Its a Space gun with a barrel the size of a 747 thats mounted to swivel skywards. Its base its comparable to an oil rig.

Galvatron is dicussing with Cyclonus that the weapon will their best hope in 2026, of freeing themselves from a being that Galvatron hatefully spits the name of...Unicron....when the alarm goes off because of Jetfire's departure. Scourge goes in pursuit of the rogue shell.

Back at the convoy, Sam has another vision and starts seeing hilly terrain speeding by at ridiculous speed and gets and feels sick.We see his face in non-vision reality, and his nose starts to bleed.
He sees a canyon wall rise at at a fast rate on the horizon and
in his mind feels to pull up and left to avoid it, it does.... Sam then feeling a connection to the jet, realises that he controls the jet.
He blurts out barely able to speak that, what is happening, to Bumblebee, spreads the word throughout the convoy that there is friendly incoming. Still vigilant, the entire convoy stops and transforms ready incase Sam doenst have total control.

Sam guides Jetfire in and he tries to transform Jetfire and land which thanks to the matrix, he somehow can, only he does it a little early and he crashes half transformed, into the last few autobots in the line, knocking over the twins, Sideswipe and Sunstreaker and destroying Wheelie. While Magnus is horrified, the autobots look dutifully sad for a second and carry on helping Jetfire up. He is huge
and well armed. Sam walks forward to the giant and it kneels and transforms back into cybertronian jet mode.
Sam announces that he can feel the pull of the matrix to go with Jetfire. Magnus and Prowl argue about that very quickly and tell Sam to watch his lower back assembly as they eye he climbs into the jet and blasts off.
Jazz remarks that the odds have just gone up a little.
Magnus and Prowl lead the convoy in transforming and rolling at top speed to the base.

The decepticons have nearly completed the weapon when Soundwave picks up a transmission from Scourge that he has found Jetfire and is engaging him.

We see Scourge lower from above some distance behind Jetfire as he and Sam near the base. He fires a fusilade of future tech weapon fire at Jetfire and the Autobot evades with maximum banking to avoid. A few shots hit, but Jetfire takes it well.

In the air, nearby, Jetfire turns, tranforms, lets off a rapid burst of Particle beam cannon fire, rockets, wrist blasters, then changes back to jet continuing towards the base.
The rocket shots do damage to Scourge catching him in mid transformation, making him land.

Jetfire blows a hole through the side of the area where the decepticons kept Primes head and He takes out Bombshell, Kickback and Dirge. He grabs Prime's head, then clears a path through Soundwave and Ramjet on the way out. Shockwave blasts after him, seeing that he has Prime's head, which one arm of the jet sticks out to hold... He misses by Scrouge doesnt.
Jetfire blacksout as Sam does after the surprise assault and forunately built in decepticon designed self preservation safety protocals take over as they make Jetfire compensate and come in for a controlled crash Landing.

The two regain conciousness, but Sams hurt badly, his nose is way bloodier than before and his sledgehammer headache is back...He cant take many more of these.

Magnus transforms at just beyond the base limits and readies Primes Body and Ratchet transforms and quickly reattaches Prime's head.
Prime awakens whole again and Goes to Sam, Apologises for what he has Put Sam through and opens his chest to take out the Matrix of Leadership and puts it in front of Sam. Prime does something weve never seen him do to it, like he twists the two halves round, rather than open it quickly absorbs the energy/data whatever.
The pain for Sam from the Matrix is gone.
Prime knows from listening at the base what Galvatron is planning.
Hot Rod tells Prime that he must destroy the weapon and get the time mcguffin from Galavtron.

Hearing the incoming of Jets Prime wastes no time in realising that Jetfire isn't yet sentient. There hopefully would be time to address that later.

He scans Jetfire in a second and then shifts his armour plating around reconfiguring, (to change to his G1 body) which then combines with Jetfire. He tell Magnus to lead the Autobot Ground forces against the Incoming Decepticons and blasts off in through Cyclonus, actually tearing a wing off of the Decepticon, taking its arm away with it, he crashes to the earth,. Skywarp appears and fires a missle at Prime, and Jetfire's armour releases a chaff flare that takes the missle out. Prime stright Punches Skywarp out in mid air, smashing off his nosecone, Prime then directs Jetfire's Beam rifle on Starscream and Thundercracker, ripping through Thundercracker with relative ease and ruthless efficency. Magnus transforms and Attacks Galvatron, and hits him with both shoulder launchers, and knocks him down...Barely scratched he gets back up. Whilst blasting at the insecticons flying over the autobots...

Kickback lands among Cliffjumper, Red Alert, and Huffer who are covering behind a ridge, firing at the decepticon
ground forces that approach. He transforms to Insect mode and kicks Huffer through Cliffjumper, ripping Huffer in half. Cliffjumper shoots Kickback with his glass gas gun and Red Alert shatters him with one punch.

Sunstreaker and Sideswipe steam in in car modes, knocking over Soundwave and Shockwave. As they Transform, Soundwave fires his concussion blaster and blasts Sunstreaker, crippling him in car mode, Soundwave ejects Buzzsaw, who quickly and surgically removes half of Sideswipe's head before Prowl spings up, grabs him and breaks his neck. He then somersaults and fires both rocket launchers at Shockwave's one eye, blinding him...he falls...and a combined assalut by Kup and Blurr with their future tech weapons overpower him.
Soundwave retreats. Hot Rod blasts a few shots after him as he flees.

Prime/Jetfire reach the weapon. Its is guarded by the Constructcons who have now completed it. They see Prime and Scrapper orders the group to combine.

A close up of Magnus' head getting smashed into the ground by Galvatron who is giving smug victorious speeches as he beats him. Its not going well. Bluestreak and Tracks attack too giving Magnus a chance to get free before Galvatron uppercuts Bluestreak sending his chin skyward, As his cannon takes of Track's leg. Magnus blasts him at close range with his main rifle, actually damaging his shoulder. The audacity of that makes Galvatron beat Magnus with Track's severed Leg.

Prime-Jetfire swwop in around Devastator like a singular massive hitech biplane flying around King Kong. Blasting pastthe giant, Jetfire unloads the boosterpack armaments into the weapon's powersource causing a small thermonuclear explosion. The weopon is destroyed, and Devastor is caught near the blast.

Megatron, sees the explosion from Trypticon city, and that the weapon is gone. Smelling Galavtron's failure, and meanwhile knowing that he cannot get involved for future timeline's sake and withdraws from the battle, radioing Soundwave to pull the seekers out and retreat.

Galvatron sees the explosion from the fight. He explodes in rage Ultra Magnus now fears the end,as the massively durable Autobot couldnt take even more of a beating on top of this. He fires two more Rocket Launcher shots at Galvatron in his moment of distraction, Just as Prime/Jetfire land on Galvatron from the skies behind. He fires his arm cannon and it appears to destroy Magnus, forcing his armour to appear to explode.

Prime and hits Galvatron with all the guns in his and Jetfire's arsenal then starts to grapple with Galvatron for the time device mcguffin and Prime is soon on even terms with Galvatron, strength wise.
A eventually Galvatron is overpowered by Prime Beating him, and Blurr zipping in and out with Hot Rod and Kup sniping him with bolts of laser fire.
Prime KO's him finally and takes the device, triggering it, and the reverse thunder sound happens as Galvatron, Cyclonus, Cyclonus' wing/arm and Scourge flash "back to the future".

And Hot Rod, Kup and Blurr tell Prime that the danger is over and they too will go back to the future with their device, and that when they do, the missing Autobots will re-appear.
Among the wounded and remaining Autobots, the white cab Robot mode form of Magnus stands dented and scrarred but alive and listening.

The future Autobots disappearing in their flash of light,
Leaving the Autobots to go back to the ark to regroup.

The Decepticon forces are seen back at Trypticon city.
The camera Pans over their repair bays....and over to Bombshell, already repaired talking to Megatron who now is talking to Shockwave, who is in Megatron's old place on the biomechanical repair bay wall, blind and unable to see the leer on Megatron's face as he turns and walks off telling him that his command has failed under Galvatron and that Megatron now leads again...

Weeks later Sam is round his Girl, Mikaela's, they are laying, cuddling, watching the sun coming up after a hard night's catchup.
She is asleep now, (No acting required lolz) and he is still awake,
as he drifts to sleep, himself. Bumblebee is in the garage, and Jetfire flies overhead.

His nose starts to bleed a little.

He starts to dream as he has the a vision of two giants battling in the sun...They battle as silhouettes in the city.... Vast and hitech.
The one of the left has plane parts......

The end.

sweet!!

nice build up to Unicron in the third one

great story, Sadako. but i do have on problem:
you actually gave Ultra Fagness a role in this movie. thou foul thing! 😠

~Sado

anyone think they should put together a "Committee of Nerds" for these writers and directors to consult before they murder our childhoods with sh**ty movies

Sadako, WOW! just wow...omg, that was so gripping i couldn't take my eyes off the monitor...

you would make an excellent sci-fi author lol, just to inflate your bubble a bit 😛

seriously though, the future bit (future tie-ins always work) was epic...i loved that sam had some connection with one of the autobots (i watch cybertron priimarily when i was younger, and the wickwicky in that had a bot of his own that he controlled)

very well done...blew my script out of the water lol

Originally posted by stickman618
anyone think they should put together a "Committee of Nerds" for these writers and directors to consult before they murder our childhoods with sh**ty movies

lol, yeah...i think that would work better for the diehard fans tbh

Originally posted by Sado22
great story, Sadako. but i do have on problem:
you actually gave [b]Ultra Fagness
a role in this movie. thou foul thing! 😠

~Sado [/B]

😂 C'mon....! Galvatron beat the SHIT out of him lolz

Plus did we not get the death of Wheelie to compensate...? 😛

Cheers, Sado..

Originally posted by CadoAngelus
Sadako, WOW! just wow...omg, that was so gripping i couldn't take my eyes off the monitor...

you would make an excellent sci-fi author lol, just to inflate your bubble a bit 😛

seriously though, the future bit (future tie-ins always work) was epic...i loved that sam had some connection with one of the autobots (i watch cybertron priimarily when i was younger, and the wickwicky in that had a bot of his own that he controlled)

very well done...blew my script out of the water lol

lol, yeah...i think that would work better for the diehard fans tbh

Thanks Cado... 😄 Im a big fan of Simon Furman's work and his Target 2006 was basis for the weapon arc, but so as not to plaguarise, I went with a way different outcome/story/chronological setting around it..

Buster Witwicky had the matrix connection with Jetfire too in the G1 comics for a period of time also...in the American run.... that played out very differently also. They are some of my favorite of those stories. Tried to reference events at Autobot city, but imagining it to be built in 2020 instead of in the 1990s. So trying to keep a similar future history to established G1, but off setting it by like 30 years.

Anyone spot Superion and Bruticus? 😛

Holy shit!!!!, Cado! I was so busy devising this that I honestly hadnt seen it! I have now and Im gonna read it through now Im done replying...