stuff I've written!

Started by yerssot43 pages

did they ever??

Nope.

I wonder why? 😄

You know I thought that too.

spurned

what you've done to me cannot be revoked.
especially seeming as you laughed and joked.
you played and you lied.
you shattered my life and then I cried.
with you it was a raw deal.
and I cant help the way I feel.
you haunt me still!
does wrecking my life give you a thrill?
walk away never to return.
my temper burns.
your memory burned into my mind in the image of the sun.
I hold the gun.
my new way of life has just begun.

no one takes youy seriously because you dont take yourselves seriously.

Hello im new here and i think your poems are really good do you have anymore what are thet based on

! read the thread again! at the moment no.

HUH? where did my reply went to??

Do not worry my friend. You are the Walrus.

Goo goo g’joob.

yup, finti lost it

He never had it!

tell him again

I expected finti to respond as he did. Nothing new there.

This is another poem I wrote it's towards Puerto Ricans mostly but it's about what I see In my them in my town personaly but it's stupid.

"American Puerto Rican" by Adrian Padilla

What,I'm not Spainsh enough for you
To represent my culture enough

What,I'm not a fighting Puerto Rican
Though Puerto Ricans in jail could

What,I don't have a fast,loud car
To drive mindless dates no where

What,I'm not Gangsta Rappering Puerto Rican
To be a poser to everyone around me

What,I wasn't born In Puerto Rico
But don't worry it was born in me

What,I'm not a pretty boy Puerto Rican
To never look at anything in someone that pure

You say were differant.
But only by stereotypes that youy leave
But I'm A American Puerto Rican that loves Rock Problem??

Quite ingenious Augey. A wonderful entry in the history of this thread.

Thanks bro.

Yes there is untapped talent in the air and potential everywhere......The time is right as force makes might do we dare to see what can never be as the twilight calls do we roam the halls places and faces do we forget it all................An Original By Gordon Skywalker 6/4/03

Damn that was some good $hit GS real good bro.Talent in this place is endles I see.

Good $shit GS real good,sorry my poem is confusing but I can see talent is endless here.