stuff I've written!

The fine art of writing takes lots of practice and patience. Fortunately I am blessed with both.

I am as patient as your average goldfish...

Before this thread closes becuase I think it's about too here's my last poem it's sappy and dumb but here we go-

My love for you:

My Love for you is as deep as the Drakest Cave

My Love for you is as strong as the hardest rock that I can't break

My love for you is as high as an eagle that soars so high

My love for you is as tall as the highest moutain that I can't climb

My love for you is as bright as a star on the darkest night

My love for you is as quiet as a Catholic Church at midnight

My love for is as peaceful as a short summer rainstorm

My love for is as endless as the vast Ocean sea

My love for you is as sharp as a thorn on a beautiful rose

My love for you is as proud as Old Glory right after the National Anthem

My love for is as free as the American Blood that flows though me

My love for you blooms as the bluest violet that I could see

For that why my love for you is everything that pure.

That was pretty good man. I can't outmatch you when it comes to expression that's for sure.

Thanks.But Nah it's to sappy just wanted to make a last Poem before this thread dies.

I have trouble coming up with original expression in the words I write. I use too many cliches in rhyming patterns and all. That is why my fellow bandmates had to arrange much of my early attempts. I could do better now if I was still in the habit of writing daily.

Well I only worte good for the first time because I had something to write about your more then write when only at certain times you can write at a certain emotions inside you I can't write about this all the time.Only when I feel like it.

I can't argue with that logic.

the clichè part is the problem for most writers, at least song writers

Yeh original thinking is required in a society that borderlines on plagarism.

Yes you need to think like an individual nowadays, when everything else seems to be close to just copying. 😉

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH 😄

Sad but true just look at all the copycat movies and music stars. You ok Yerss? 🙄

just following the herd 😄

So I take it you have no lyrical masterpieces to share with the fold then?

*thinks*
*looks at answers at the end of the book*
no, not really no

ok two short poems for you:

found

I think I've found what I'm looking for,
I think its real but I can be sure,
you seem for real,
you seem pretty genuine,
but time will tell what lies within.

desertion

I call to you but you turn away
I fall to the floor but you walk away
why wont you hear what I have to say?
why did you have to hurt me in this way?
maybe I'll know some day!
I call to you but you turn away
I fall to the floor but you walk away.

At last.....new original works by Lara the Talented!

Lara you once again blow us away with your talent when are you teaching lesson so I can take a course.

yeah, it's very good 🙂