stuff I've written!

Started by yerssot43 pages

based on RL?

yes, I got into a bit of a confused situation and I didnt know whether I was making a mistake or not and it turned out that I had even though it wasnt totally my fault.

My Poem- "Life is..."

Life is....

What is life, so fragile a word,
Able to flee, take flight like a bird?
Life is the innocense and treasures we hold,
Creating and shaping the paths that unfold.

Life is the bitterness and sweetness we face,
Shining, combining, them both with a grace.
Life is everything we hold precious at heart,
All that we've faced and endured from the start.

Life is true happiness and hatred at once,
Crumbled and twisted all up in a bunch.
Life is the path set before us in stone,
Till death comes along and claims life for its own.

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Please post so I know what you thought of it, I just started writing poetry normally I write short stories so excuse me if it's bad.

Very deep🙂 Not bad!

thank you kes

you're welcome. I had to read so much poetry in school one more made no difference! lol jk😄

Merged in new work

Here's a another short Life poem.

"Life many senses"

Life looks like a pupy when it's master's has just come home

Life smells like a rose on a beautiful day

lLfe sounds like a poem that has just been read by our one true love

Life feels like a mothers hung when you have just been born

Life taste like lemonade on a hot summer day

For as long as you hear,see,feel,taste,and touch lifeto it's fullest,then you would have really lived Life

im not sure if i posted this before but here it goes:
"My Eyes!"
i have no eyes
i cannot see
i blow my nose
it gets on me😂😛

Nice poem Krueger!

No Title...Someone so close,
yet so far away,
Our emotions were so strong,
But they somehow went astray,
One little thing with the biggest effect
No way to change it,
only way out...eject.
I've tried what I could,
I kept cool and calm,
But for some reason it didn't help
he blew like a bomb.

this was the side i have never seen Before,
It wasn't the prettiest thing,
it shocked me for sure.
throwing everything away and remembering nothing from the past,
he didn't want to deal with it,
he wanted it over fast.

I can't change his mind, emotions as well,
all i can do is just sit here and dwell,
I try to forget,
try to block out the pain,
But I just can't do it,
all of this is a strain.
I feel so empty
an emptiness that can't be filled,
why did he decide to do this,
why did he knock down what six year built?

*Glares*
I think I know who that's about, and I'm positive I'm right.
Beautiful anyways, kiddo! 😉

Here's a poem I just cam up with.a little positive

"Don't do it"

You have that gun in your head
Because you don't try hard in your life

You stand onto a bridge
When you have a family that are the real victims

You takes some pills
Too try to end something that will only begin another horror for someone else

You stick the needle in
for you seek pleasure then give it

You run into the crowded streets
To runaway from yor problems

You cut yourself
Then try to start all over again

You try to hang from a pole
Then try to find your true self

You curse life
rather then seek it

You blame God
rather then blame yourself

You cry as you write that note giving the cons in life
Rather then write then seek pro's

Please before you hurt yourself
really think of the lives other then yourself that will be hurt the most

sorry to hear that

my poem targets suicidal teens.

Gee, I hope no suicidal teen ever SEES it!

woops, posted at the same time as augey

I think that if a suicidal teen reads it ... (s)he will kill himself/herself before reading the last line

EDIT: terrible spelling, sorry

Indeed!

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(Snor........)this sucks

this sucks