stuff I've written!

You should try it !!!
Maybe it will help
it helps me ✅

i know what you mean. but I cant detatch meyself quite so easily.
Nimfus, I try not to let the way I feel affect others around me. if I do then they have done some thing to threaten me, or to make me feel threatened. I write so I can let other know how I feel, not to release the feeling and leave it in a inanimate object.

Oh i see
but you still let others read your poems dont you???

very rarely. I'm a very private person. my family now I write but they have no idea what about.

Then how can u let other people know how you feel???
Do u tell them or do you keep all the feelings to yourself???
😕

extremely well written lily!
very emotional (for me), lara was right about the tissues 🙂

Yikes....

Nice job I love those poems lily, as I have enjoyed all the poems I've read here.

Addiction:

People always told me never do drugs or drink
They will make things worse
I never listend
I started the sixth grade
Jordan had died
Gunther and Tucker had just commited suicide
I was alone
In a new school
I then found that group of "goths" and "punks"
I grew to love them
You grew to hate them
They got me addicted
I was finally happy
I never believed what you said mama
I moved back home after Mikey shot himself
I was still going out night after night
Never coming home sober
I started to struggle just as you told me mama
I worked my a** off to pass 9th grade
Warned me about coming home drunk
Shooting up nearly killed me once
I did it once again
I came home fell to the floor and foamed everywhere
I was sick the rest of the week, feeling like I would die
After I was better mama you told me to get the f**k out
Never come back til' I'm the little girl she used to know
I am now a cold lonely girl left out in the cold and dark
Waiting for baby Jenny to come back
What happens if baby Jenny left for good

Love :wub:
Jenny/SiZzLe 😈 😮‍💨

you don't like it julie?

That sounds a little distressing.

It sure took the shine off my day.

Merged in MGG's work.

sorry im slow (lol) but what does merged mean

there was already a thread with poems, so they basicly took your poem and placed it in that thread, that's merging

Is that a bad thing?

merging the threads? not at all 🙂

Goody. 🙂

That poem is so sad.

Quite sad, though very emotional. Well done. 🙂