anything with Jack and liz kissing i luv! that was amazing!
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i was allowed to get on here for a little while, so i decided to post a couple of these i did on the ride up here im gonna ressurect the thread again, lol.
After being rescued from purgatory and getting back on the pearl, it's night and everyone is below deck except for jack.
He's standing by the railing humming the song liz taught him, looking out to the dark horizon.
Liz comes up behind him and slips her arms around him. He looks down and sees a ring on her finger.
Liz: I missed you
Jack turns around and grabs her hands. He studies the ring for a moment.
Jack: It shows luv.
Liz: Jack, I had to...
They stand in silence for a long while holding hands, heads down.
Jack: I s'pose we'll never get our marriage then, eh?
Liz(grinning): That depends.
Jack: And why would that be?
Liz: Well, you did prove me wrong of all except one thing, didn't you?
Jack looks confused for a moment, then smiles as it clicks.
Jack: How do you propose I go about proving this then?
Liz: I can think of a few ways.
Jack: Sorry, but last time i checked, pirate ships don't usually have baths
Liz giggles and reaches down to take his shirt off.
Liz: Yes, but last time I checked, we could always pretend...
yes, this is pg-13, i guess your imaginations will just have to take it from there...lol
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And here's the second one...which is kinda a take on the a dance scene that everyone mentioned, but no one ever did...i dont think......
Jack stands below deck, staring at his reflection. He's bathed, and dressed in clen, if not somewhat dressy clothes...but definately not pirate.
He sighs, and walks into the cool night air.
Everyone should be asleep, but Liz is standing by the front of the ship, just like he knew she would be.
He stands beside her, grabs her hand, and kisses it.
Liz: Wow, Jack, you look so...
She trails off, lost for words.
Jack: Hygenic?
Liz: Definately.
Jack smiles nad holds out his hand, which she takes.
He pulls her close, and she lays her head on his chest.
They begin to dance, slowly at first, but gradually speeding up.
He twirls her around. When they circle back together, their eyes meet for a moment.
They pause, lips almost touching, then he dips her over the railing.
He pulls her up again, and they dance their way around the ship.
Finally, they end up back where tehy started.
Both out of breath, they stop and slowly slip away from each other.
Liz leans back against the rail, breathing deeply and staring at Jack.
Liz: Since when do you dance?
Jack: Amazing the things you pick up terrorizing the Spanish Main, luv.
Liz nods, but still looks curious.
Jack: And are there any hidden talents you'd like to share, now that we're coming clean?
She raises her eyebrows, then smiles.
Liz: Nothing new I can think of...but there is one thing we never got to finish.
She leans forward, wraps her arms around Jacks neck, and begins to kiss him.
He pulls away, and she looks disappointed.
Jack: Just one condition.
Liz: Anything.
Jack: Don't tell anyone I can dance.
Liz smiles and pulls him in again, kissing him even more heatedly than before.
and these prove how boring it is to sit in a car with your mother and brother for 2 days straight...lol
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No savvychick....u dont understand how good u are!!! I was so captured in the moment that my eyes teared up....maybe cause we'll probably never really get a scene like this....BUT IT WAS STILL BEAUTIFUL....STANDING OVATION ONCE AGAIN!!! BRAVO!!!
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alright, here it is
Liz and Jack are standing in his cabin, hovering over some maps.
Liz: If we take the east channel, we'll get there faster.
Jack: But the east is a major pirating route, the west is a little longer, but much safer. I do s'pose you want to get there in one piece, right?
Liz: Yes, but i think I can handle it Jack.
He raises his eyebrows.
Jack: Prove it.
Liz shakes her head and looks back at the maps
Jack: Well?
Liz: No
Jack takes out his sword and points it at her back.
Jack: Yes.
Liz is quiet for a moment, then grabs her sword and turns to face him.
They stand for a moment, swords crossed and ready to fight.
Liz makes the first move. She dips down, turns around Jack, and cuts a whole in the side of his pants in the process. He turns to meet her, looking at the tear she made.
Jack: So thats how you want to play, is it?
In response, Liz lunges forward, but this time Jack counters her, ripping her shirt.
They twirl and jab at each other, gasping for breath.
In no time they're standing half naked, barely breathing in the middle of Jack's cabin.
Liz: Satisfied?
Jack: Not nearly as much as I'd like to be.
Liz: I'm not entirely sure I'm ready for that kind of talk Captain Sparrow.
Jack drops his sword and takes a step toward her.
Jack: Oh, I think you are.
Liz drops her sword too, and closes the distance between them.
Jack leans down and kisses her, driving her back against the wall.
Liz's hands begin to wander to his bare chest, and he slips the remaints of her shirt down off her shoulders.
Jack leans back to take a breath.
Liz: Jack...we can't
Jack: Why not? We've come this far already havent we?
Liz seems to consider this, shrugs, and they resume their 'kiss'.
hope you enjoyed it damn these pg-13 restraints...but i s'pose they're appropriate, seeing as im just 13 myself...if my mom knew i was writing these....omg, i would be in soooo much trouble...lol
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Nov 20th, 2006 11:17 PM
im gonna ressurect the thread again, lol. 
