POTC 5 ...our next version

Started by mmoviejunkie30 pages

love it!
omgosh everything is so intense!!

here ya go...more art for the story...this is a wedding dress i drew for abigail in a diff story: however, we can make this elizabeth's wedding dress if ya'll wish...

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/40043681/

oh my god, that's sexy...I'll wear it if i will marry in the future!!

the story is getting so great you think you can do a bit more before you leave today?

and sailorleo I sa the dress you made it's the most gorgeouse thing EVER can you make one for lizzie too? gosh you're so great at drwing dresses,characters...and everything

maybe...but I a bit later, agreed?

Originally posted by tee_pirategirl
and sailorleo I sa the dress you made it's the most gorgeouse thing EVER can you make one for lizzie too? gosh you're so great at drwing dresses,characters...and everything

well it can be used for lizze....im glad you guys like the dress...i wanted t to be something in the nontraditional 1690s

just a short episode, but I find it one of my best. Hope you like it

Norri walks over to Jacky, who is still standing at the helm.

Norri: Jacky... May I have a moment?

Jacky: Yes?

Norri: Well...you seem to me a bit troubled, what is it?

Jacky: It everything and nothing. I mean, in fact, you want a home, a good position, in the end you hate it always to be on a ship. Right? But it’s my destiny, as it’s Jack. We both need our freedom ... Isn’t it so?

Norri: Well...but I’m willing to give it up, just for you, I love you so much.

Jacky at bit confused with her emotions runs down into her cabin, she doesn’t know what she felt at that moment, it seems as everything was getting totally out of control. She runs down the stairs and crushes into Jack, who was with Grant on his way to deck. Her tears were falling so much. Jack didn’t know why she was crying, he hold her in his arms. But Jacky pushes him away, knowing it would make everything more difficult for her, as it now was. Finally she reaches her cabin and continues crying. She doesn’t know why. She has a man who loves her true. Maybe she was unable to love a person? Maybe she was afraid of letting a person close to her? For her it was a riddle, why the hell she was so confused. She took a bottle of rum and started to pour it down.

Abi walks in on Jacky who is crying and drowing herself in rum.

Abi: Are you alright Jacky?

Jacky: NO! *she sobs and swings*

Abi: *not entirely sure what to do hugs her*...guy troubles...?

Jacky: Aye.

Abi: Did my father do something to upest you?

Jacky: No...that's just it....he's too....wonderful...

Abi: Is that a problem....is it that you...you don't love him....?

...

ui, sailorleo...it's more then just 1 sentence. do you want to continue or should I?

well you probably should....yeah...i can't sleep so thus the actual contribution of stuff

oh, it's morning here and the sun is shining, so I'll continue

*thumbs up* ok....BTW it's 1:10 am where i'm at

well i have 10:10 am

Jacky isn’t sure if she should tell her, but the rum starts to have an effect and she starts to speak.

Jacky: (a bit drunk) Well...I don’t know...I’m not sure if I love him...but I’m soo confused at the moment...there’s a feeling for a guy...but I shouldn’t have this...feeling...because in fact...it’s strange...but it’s forbidden...and...

Abi: (shouts) Do you mean Jack??

Jacky: Well...let’s just say...I don’t want to hurt...him...and Lizzie...but I don’t know...what to do (takes a big gulp of rum) It’s driving me crazy. He’s driving me crazy...

With that she passes out on her bed. Abi is really worried about her friend, but she doesn’t know how to help her or what to do. She walk on deck to think about it and meets Jack, standing with Grant at the helm, both smirking at her.

sorry, for making it a bit confused or weired!

Abi: What? *her eyes wide* what are you smirking at?

Jack and Grant: ...oh..nothing.....

Abi: *annoyed* it's something tell me...

Jack: *laughs* persuade me

Abi: Mr. Sparrow I do believe that line is getting tiresome...NOW TELL ME WHAT YOU'RE PLAYING AT!

Grant: ...see i told ya...

I never believed its possible for jack to go unconcious coz of too much rum...

now i do... 😖

no that was jacky or were you refering to a post in a diff page of this thread...