well it took me long enough to find this place!

OK as promised. this is some new stuff i wrote today when i was sat in the pub on my own (such a sad life i have 😂 )

broken glass and chloroform
choking noises underneath the storm
lustful glances from the sharks eyes
walking through this sea of smoke
everyone is talking but none of them spoke
glasses lined up on the bar
its clear that their eyes will wander far
blaring music and the rancid smell
I cant breath, searching for the door
just as i reach is i get knocked to the floor
why am i here in this sullied place?
are you all senseless?
the hands out stretched, grabbing and groping
I'm closed in!
the frenzy starts
more broken glass and spilt alcohol
murder and rape is in the air
gasping i wake
was it all a dream?
am i alive? am i sane?
how can i escape these nightmares?
relieve me, clean me, free me!

street of broken dreams and hearts

welcome to the street of broken dreams and hearts
filled with broken mirrors and broken glass
pass the smashed and shattered doors
past the derelict walls where you can see the above floors
defaced mannequins wearing weathered ans torn clothes
where if they were human flesh would be exposed
this world we know to be cruel all too well
but still we are blind and continue to fall
the sky is breaking every breathing minute
with the rumble of thunder and a fractious fork of lightening so bright
in this lifeless place no more do the birds take flight
this place we all know
it breaks us all unless you know how to survive
unless you remember how it feels to be alive.

ooooo great stuff ✅ Lots of imagery 😊

Originally posted by Lara
OK as promised. this is some new stuff i wrote today when i was sat in the pub on my own (such a sad life i have 😂 )

broken glass and chloroform
choking noises underneath the storm
lustful glances from the sharks eyes
walking through this sea of smoke
everyone is talking but none of them spoke
glasses lined up on the bar
its clear that their eyes will wander far
blaring music and the rancid smell
I cant breath, searching for the door
just as i reach is i get knocked to the floor
why am i here in this sullied place?
are you all senseless?
the hands out stretched, grabbing and groping
I'm closed in!
the frenzy starts
more broken glass and spilt alcohol
murder and rape is in the air
gasping i wake
was it all a dream?
am i alive? am i sane?
how can i escape these nightmares?
relieve me, clean me, free me!

Excellent work, hon. Just excellent.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hug now you aren't sitting alone. Bartender, beer me! 🍺

HAha... well, Lady Cold, the brew was mostly for noone, cause I dont much care for it myself... hahah just goin on the poem. 😆 Lara, holla at your boy here, ok? 😉

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
HAha... well, Lady Cold, the brew was mostly for noone, cause I dont much care for it myself... hahah just goin on the poem. 😆 Lara, holla at your boy here, ok? 😉

*shouts* whoa!? whatcha say DW? I dont like beer either I was drinking cola with ice. *stops shouting*
lame i know but there is nothing worse than boozing on your own just looks sad. 😂 thanks DW.
hey cold, dont worry about it its not all that much fun. just something else to do.

Originally posted by Lara
*shouts* whoa!? whatcha say DW? I dont like beer either I was drinking cola with ice. *stops shouting*
lame i know but there is nothing worse than boozing on your own just looks sad. 😂 thanks DW.
hey cold, dont worry about it its not all that much fun. just something else to do.

Originally posted by Lara
*shouts* whoa!? whatcha say DW? I dont like beer either I was drinking cola with ice. *stops shouting*
lame i know but there is nothing worse than boozing on your own just looks sad. 😂 thanks DW.
hey cold, dont worry about it its not all that much fun. just something else to do.

Da. what cold said. How you be, both of yas?

OOOOooooooooooWWWWwwwwwwwww! my head! it feels like an anvile on a stick! everything hurts and i'm sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo tired. i cant feel my legs! argh! whats wrong with me?????

BTCS? TOFTS? DWES?

Originally posted by Lara
OOOOooooooooooWWWWwwwwwwwww! my head! it feels like an anvile on a stick! everything hurts and i'm sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo tired. i cant feel my legs! argh! whats wrong with me?????

BTCS? TOFTS? DWES?

Umm... huh? 😕 hahaha....

what is up Lady Lara?

Originally posted by Lara
OOOOooooooooooWWWWwwwwwwwww! my head! it feels like an anvile on a stick! everything hurts and i'm sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo tired. i cant feel my legs! argh! whats wrong with me?????

BTCS? TOFTS? DWES?

had a major headache y.day and i couldnt shift it.
why am i back at college!? 😖

to better yourself, and do what you would love to do! And you can! 😄

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
to better yourself, and do what you would love to do! And you can! 😄

yeah but some one keeps messing it up with minimal effort and has done it to me all my live its like they get some sick enjoyment out of it
they reap what they've sowed and will be punished by the powers that be soon enough.